[Transformation, light novel, daily life, landmines]
In my previous life, I was a street light novelist, but I accidentally traveled through time and became the 15-year-old Momona Ichinose from Sumida District, Tokyo, who died in a car accident.
I have become a girl, and I am still a reserve JK... I have the fear of facing the new life, and the discomfort with being a girl.
Not only are there confusions about self, gender identity, and adolescence, but also persistence in dreaming of becoming a light novel writer...
All in all, this is a youth love story about soul travel, twisted love, and finding the real thing on the thorny road of self-identity.
Also known as [TieTie life after becoming Tokyo JK], [Me and their Shura field], [I turned into a girl and was surrounded by girls]~!
Reader comments
So, once you let go, you will never be able to hold on again. I am really ashamed to say this. I feel like I want to die now. But taking responsibility for this kind of thing cannot just be said with words. This is not out of a sense of obligation. It should be said that I want to take responsibility, or please let me take responsibility. Maybe you don't think so, but I still want to continue to have a relationship with you, so please give me the right to distort your life. No matter how troublesome and difficult it is for you, that is the best. I will leave everything to you. If you find it troublesome, it is okay to forget it, because it is my own decision and I don't need your answer. Please leave your life to me.
It's a light novel that really tells a story. It's quite interesting. I only read it from Momona's point of view to Chapter 20. I didn't read the other student union point of view lines in detail. There should be connections later on. I'm very curious about what memory the protagonist has lost and what happened in the past. It's probably a suspense similar to that of Yamoku fans.
Starting from the first 20 or 30 chapters, I personally think that the book is of high quality, partial to group portraits, and looks like a hundred-year-old novel (in fact, you can ignore the "change", which is not very important); the perspective switching is very smooth, and most of the narrative is unfolded in the first person (this is a bit rare), which makes the plot very perceptible.
Then let's talk about writing style and plot description. Personally, I think the author's writing style is top-notch. The characters' personalities and emotions are described in detail, and the characteristics of each main character are obvious. The plot is written in both breadth and depth, and is closer to reality.
The fly in the ointment may be that the main line is not very clear, but it has little impact.
I seem to have talked a lot of nonsense, but overall this book has a cute (?) And relaxed style of writing. Although I haven't read Nikkei before, I think the author's writing is great.
It's really good-looking, and I think it's well-written. Although it sometimes feels very uncomfortable, it's the emotion brought into the protagonist. If you want to solve the money problem, I think you can write a story where the protagonist's mother is a scientist or something like that. By the way, does Japanese law also include inheritance of debt? Wouldn't it be possible to choose not to inherit property and debts after the person dies? After all, it's still a problem with the house. The protagonist written by the author will definitely not take the initiative to ask others to help him. You can write a story where Sakurai discovers that the protagonist is worried about accommodation. If you want to help the protagonist, Hoshino's line, you can add a certain amount of interest that you need to repay every month. If the author wants to write a line that eliminates the debt problem, he can write that the protagonist becomes tough once, goes to court, and chooses to refuse the debt. But this way I have to rent a house outside. Then in order to get a high salary, the protagonist can only work in a maid shop. I feel that there can be many, many developments.
It's really good, don't cut this book. The ball is gone
The writing style is very delicate. If you like galgame and love games, I recommend reading the author's two books. They are both popular and not popular, which is a pity.
It looks great~ It feels like it has the characteristics of sun light (there is really very little sun light on tomatoes...), Author, cheers [blowing kiss]
Even though I have to make up the exam tomorrow, I still finished reading it in one sitting today. The author's writing is very good and I enjoyed reading it [shy]. I have a love-hate relationship with the characters in the book, and the ones I like so far are my younger sisters, Hina (Irie seems to be that name), and Nako.
Currently I am very disgusted with the president and Kurori, and Hoshino was originally there. But I remember that in one chapter the author seemed to say that he wanted readers to fall in love with the character Hoshino. Then I'll keep a neutral attitude toward Hoshino. I seem to see some conflicting feelings in Hoshino, but I still have to wait and see.
But the ones who sympathized the most were the Ichinose sisters. The younger sister was taken advantage of. Alas, I don't really like Dumi's kind of love, but it's fine if the younger sister likes it. As for Momona, well, she always feels like she is suffering all the time. It seems like no one can give her positive feedback except her sister. Sakurai broke his guard when he saw her and Hoshino together. Come on, she is obviously chasing Mona. How come Mona seems to be a playboy? It's a carrot... Momona has been emphasizing that they are friends... It feels like Hoshino is currently using Momo to conquer Sakurai. Although I am quite disgusted with this kind of controlling relationship where you don't want your sister to go to school, it is barely acceptable in the novel. The three of them are really in a triangular relationship, but now it can be seen that Hoshino has some feelings for Mo Nai, and Mo Nai is really a succubus.
At present, I am more optimistic about Irie and Momona, but it seems that the author is probably Sakurai Momona. I feel like there are very few scenes in Irie, there is some foreshadowing but not much, and it seems quite normal so far, compared to other characters of course.
Inexplicably, I typed too much all of a sudden, haha. I really like the author's writing style, even when he is complaining about those little blackheads haha. But to be honest, I personally still like to watch 1v1. This kind of party struggle feels depressing. I don't want others to get hurt, but if everyone wins, it is a harem novel. At the same time, I don't like harems very much. I feel that it is difficult for the protagonist in harem novels to balance the love with everyone. It is obviously an equal love but there is always a bias. I couldn't stand reading other articles about partisanship in the past, but this hasn't happened with this one yet.
Finally, the word "water" is gone. I hope the author will greatly strengthen Momona. This version of Momona is too weak to play. Why can anyone attack her? Poor weakling [shy]
Alas, it's a pity that this book has been discontinued. Although this book may not be very good, this book is one that I will pay attention to and update from time to time in the near future. I originally read the fourth update in the middle of the night and opened it happily, but the result was a farewell declaration [I almost cried].
But I highly recommend everyone to watch it. Although the characters may not be satisfactory, the Japanese light flavor still looks pretty good. I still prefer this brisk style. And the writing is not bad. When I read other novels before and encountered poor writing, I had no choice but to read it at a glance. After all, they are free novels. If the author is willing to write, it is already very good. There is no need to be harsh. If you don't like it, just skip it hh.
In short, if you don't mind feeling the feeling of suddenly stopping while reading, I still recommend giving this novel a try, haha. Looking forward to the author's new work [sending my heart]
They are all gods, their emotions are constantly being cut and confused, and there are no more human beings.
It's good to watch, but the protagonist is a little soft. It would be nice if he could be more ruthless sometimes. I want to see blood flowing like a river [angry] [angry] I can only say that the protagonist's family and her godly friends are more important than anything else [face covering] [face covering]
It's so beautiful. I think the main character could be a little more miserable.
The emotional description is really delicate, especially the feeling of being young, and there are very few things in China that can be written from the first-person perspective so well. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The light novel has a strong flavor and is very interesting.
It's so heavy. There are so many important girls around me, and the soft Momona has no power to resist [face covering] Come back, the passionate and outgoing Tie 1 Momona [almost crying] If it's that Momona-sama, I believe she will be able to blow the counterattack horn! [Punch hard]
It's really beautiful, the protagonist is soft and waxy, and the writing is really good
Hee hee, the author must keep writing! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][crying]
The subject matter is relatively new, although everyone thinks it is a bit strange, Xixi. But I think it's okay
Starting conditions
King and rook not moved: Neither player has made any moves in the authority game. Move the king: The king moves two spaces in the direction of the rook (for example, White's king moves from e1 to g1, and Black moves from e8 to g8).
Moving the rook: The rook jumps over the king and moves to the adjacent square (for example, the white rook moves from h1 to f1, and the black rook moves from h8 to f8)
Overview of the King's Gambit opening
The King's Gambit is a classic opening in chess, starting from 1. E4 e5 2. F4. White actively sacrifices the f4 pawn to open up the f-line and compete for central control. The core tactic is to exchange short-term losses of pieces for rapid production of pieces, center advantage and king-side attack opportunities.
Everyone in this book is a god [smile]
Xixi, I don't care what you say, the author must win! [Crying]
The tide! I have returned and touched the author. Although Xixi's description and main plot control were not very good in the early stage, it can now be seen that the author's writing style has improved significantly. (Slow timeline, more daily) Xixi, the author, come on! ! Good fortune in writing! ! ! Generally speaking, it is aimed at a relatively niche audience, but it is perfect for some groups (such as the pineapple light novel)
It's good to read. I feel like I've regained the same feeling I had when reading novels before. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]
Most characters don't look like normal people
Very strange feeling
The writing feels like a Japanese light novel, but what about the light novel label in the title?
Sure enough, I still think it was well written.
When I came back, I saw that the sky had fallen apart. . .
In fact, I felt a lot better afterwards (
And this is the first book I ever gave money to as a gift. How did you cut it?
Author, if you put your work on Tomato, it can be said to be a top-notch work.
I must have come to the wrong place
The writing is very detailed
Those who can continue to watch are also gods [thinking]
In some respects it's actually okay
It's good to watch, I just love to watch this kind of complicated interpersonal relationships, hehe [laughing evilly]
Very interesting, great as a bedtime story
There's not much to say, it's just fun to watch! (≧∇≦)/
It has a very Japanese-style feel to it, with emphasis on psychological description and multiple perspectives. Although the characters are awkward and troublesome, they really fit the image. Overall, the pace of the story is very slow and worth reading.
So, once you let go, you will never be able to hold on again. I am really ashamed to say this. I feel like I want to die now. But taking responsibility for this kind of thing cannot just be said with words. This is not out of a sense of obligation. It should be said that I want to take responsibility, or please let me take responsibility. Maybe you don't think so, but I still want to continue to have a relationship with you, so please give me the right to distort your life. No matter how troublesome and difficult it is for you, that is the best. I will leave everything to you. If you find it troublesome, it is okay to forget it, because it is my own decision and I don't need your answer. Please leave your life to me.
It's a light novel that really tells a story. It's quite interesting. I only read it from Momona's point of view to Chapter 20. I didn't read the other student union point of view lines in detail. There should be connections later on. I'm very curious about what memory the protagonist has lost and what happened in the past. It's probably a suspense similar to that of Yamoku fans.
Starting from the first 20 or 30 chapters, I personally think that the book is of high quality, partial to group portraits, and looks like a hundred-year-old novel (in fact, you can ignore the "change", which is not very important); the perspective switching is very smooth, and most of the narrative is unfolded in the first person (this is a bit rare), which makes the plot very perceptible. Then let's talk about writing style and plot description. Personally, I think the author's writing style is top-notch. The characters' personalities and emotions are described in detail, and the characteristics of each main character are obvious. The plot is written in both breadth and depth, and is closer to reality. The fly in the ointment may be that the main line is not very clear, but it has little impact. I seem to have talked a lot of nonsense, but overall this book has a cute (?) And relaxed style of writing. Although I haven't read Nikkei before, I think the author's writing is great.
It's really good-looking, and I think it's well-written. Although it sometimes feels very uncomfortable, it's the emotion brought into the protagonist. If you want to solve the money problem, I think you can write a story where the protagonist's mother is a scientist or something like that. By the way, does Japanese law also include inheritance of debt? Wouldn't it be possible to choose not to inherit property and debts after the person dies? After all, it's still a problem with the house. The protagonist written by the author will definitely not take the initiative to ask others to help him. You can write a story where Sakurai discovers that the protagonist is worried about accommodation. If you want to help the protagonist, Hoshino's line, you can add a certain amount of interest that you need to repay every month. If the author wants to write a line that eliminates the debt problem, he can write that the protagonist becomes tough once, goes to court, and chooses to refuse the debt. But this way I have to rent a house outside. Then in order to get a high salary, the protagonist can only work in a maid shop. I feel that there can be many, many developments. It's really good, don't cut this book. The ball is gone
The writing style is very delicate. If you like galgame and love games, I recommend reading the author's two books. They are both popular and not popular, which is a pity.
It looks great~ It feels like it has the characteristics of sun light (there is really very little sun light on tomatoes...), Author, cheers [blowing kiss]
Even though I have to make up the exam tomorrow, I still finished reading it in one sitting today. The author's writing is very good and I enjoyed reading it [shy]. I have a love-hate relationship with the characters in the book, and the ones I like so far are my younger sisters, Hina (Irie seems to be that name), and Nako. Currently I am very disgusted with the president and Kurori, and Hoshino was originally there. But I remember that in one chapter the author seemed to say that he wanted readers to fall in love with the character Hoshino. Then I'll keep a neutral attitude toward Hoshino. I seem to see some conflicting feelings in Hoshino, but I still have to wait and see. But the ones who sympathized the most were the Ichinose sisters. The younger sister was taken advantage of. Alas, I don't really like Dumi's kind of love, but it's fine if the younger sister likes it. As for Momona, well, she always feels like she is suffering all the time. It seems like no one can give her positive feedback except her sister. Sakurai broke his guard when he saw her and Hoshino together. Come on, she is obviously chasing Mona. How come Mona seems to be a playboy? It's a carrot... Momona has been emphasizing that they are friends... It feels like Hoshino is currently using Momo to conquer Sakurai. Although I am quite disgusted with this kind of controlling relationship where you don't want your sister to go to school, it is barely acceptable in the novel. The three of them are really in a triangular relationship, but now it can be seen that Hoshino has some feelings for Mo Nai, and Mo Nai is really a succubus. At present, I am more optimistic about Irie and Momona, but it seems that the author is probably Sakurai Momona. I feel like there are very few scenes in Irie, there is some foreshadowing but not much, and it seems quite normal so far, compared to other characters of course. Inexplicably, I typed too much all of a sudden, haha. I really like the author's writing style, even when he is complaining about those little blackheads haha. But to be honest, I personally still like to watch 1v1. This kind of party struggle feels depressing. I don't want others to get hurt, but if everyone wins, it is a harem novel. At the same time, I don't like harems very much. I feel that it is difficult for the protagonist in harem novels to balance the love with everyone. It is obviously an equal love but there is always a bias. I couldn't stand reading other articles about partisanship in the past, but this hasn't happened with this one yet. Finally, the word "water" is gone. I hope the author will greatly strengthen Momona. This version of Momona is too weak to play. Why can anyone attack her? Poor weakling [shy] Alas, it's a pity that this book has been discontinued. Although this book may not be very good, this book is one that I will pay attention to and update from time to time in the near future. I originally read the fourth update in the middle of the night and opened it happily, but the result was a farewell declaration [I almost cried]. But I highly recommend everyone to watch it. Although the characters may not be satisfactory, the Japanese light flavor still looks pretty good. I still prefer this brisk style. And the writing is not bad. When I read other novels before and encountered poor writing, I had no choice but to read it at a glance. After all, they are free novels. If the author is willing to write, it is already very good. There is no need to be harsh. If you don't like it, just skip it hh. In short, if you don't mind feeling the feeling of suddenly stopping while reading, I still recommend giving this novel a try, haha. Looking forward to the author's new work [sending my heart]
They are all gods, their emotions are constantly being cut and confused, and there are no more human beings.
It's good to watch, but the protagonist is a little soft. It would be nice if he could be more ruthless sometimes. I want to see blood flowing like a river [angry] [angry] I can only say that the protagonist's family and her godly friends are more important than anything else [face covering] [face covering]
It's so beautiful. I think the main character could be a little more miserable.
The emotional description is really delicate, especially the feeling of being young, and there are very few things in China that can be written from the first-person perspective so well. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The light novel has a strong flavor and is very interesting.
It's so heavy. There are so many important girls around me, and the soft Momona has no power to resist [face covering] Come back, the passionate and outgoing Tie 1 Momona [almost crying] If it's that Momona-sama, I believe she will be able to blow the counterattack horn! [Punch hard]
It's really beautiful, the protagonist is soft and waxy, and the writing is really good
Hee hee, the author must keep writing! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][crying] The subject matter is relatively new, although everyone thinks it is a bit strange, Xixi. But I think it's okay Starting conditions King and rook not moved: Neither player has made any moves in the authority game. Move the king: The king moves two spaces in the direction of the rook (for example, White's king moves from e1 to g1, and Black moves from e8 to g8). Moving the rook: The rook jumps over the king and moves to the adjacent square (for example, the white rook moves from h1 to f1, and the black rook moves from h8 to f8) Overview of the King's Gambit opening The King's Gambit is a classic opening in chess, starting from 1. E4 e5 2. F4. White actively sacrifices the f4 pawn to open up the f-line and compete for central control. The core tactic is to exchange short-term losses of pieces for rapid production of pieces, center advantage and king-side attack opportunities.
Everyone in this book is a god [smile]
Xixi, I don't care what you say, the author must win! [Crying] The tide! I have returned and touched the author. Although Xixi's description and main plot control were not very good in the early stage, it can now be seen that the author's writing style has improved significantly. (Slow timeline, more daily) Xixi, the author, come on! ! Good fortune in writing! ! ! Generally speaking, it is aimed at a relatively niche audience, but it is perfect for some groups (such as the pineapple light novel)
It's good to read. I feel like I've regained the same feeling I had when reading novels before. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]
Most characters don't look like normal people Very strange feeling
The writing feels like a Japanese light novel, but what about the light novel label in the title?
Sure enough, I still think it was well written. When I came back, I saw that the sky had fallen apart. . . In fact, I felt a lot better afterwards ( And this is the first book I ever gave money to as a gift. How did you cut it?
Author, if you put your work on Tomato, it can be said to be a top-notch work.
I must have come to the wrong place
The writing is very detailed
Those who can continue to watch are also gods [thinking] In some respects it's actually okay
It's good to watch, I just love to watch this kind of complicated interpersonal relationships, hehe [laughing evilly]
Very interesting, great as a bedtime story
There's not much to say, it's just fun to watch! (≧∇≦)/
It has a very Japanese-style feel to it, with emphasis on psychological description and multiple perspectives. Although the characters are awkward and troublesome, they really fit the image. Overall, the pace of the story is very slow and worth reading.
Is it multiple heroines or single heroine?