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Rating: Above average, well written, Suggestion: As the protagonist is a blacksmith, the weapon should be suitable for holding a hammer and a sword in one hand. It feels a bit abstract. For other protagonists who come from time-travel, their weight and potential can be appropriately increased, such as Lu Xiaobu in Love Apartment, whose role as Lu Bu in the extra chapter can be used to increase his military potential.

Very good, but you have to pay attention to the punctuation marks.

The writing is okay, and there is another book that is similar to this one. It's quite good. It's called Splitting the Dragon with My Bare Hands. I'm a real Qi practitioner.

It looks good, it suits my taste, there are many characters, and the protagonist is not draggy.

It's beautiful~ and well written!

Very well written, cheers

Very pretty haha

It's not bad, but I'm so tired of reading it without quotation marks! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

Not bad! It's just that there are no symbols during the conversation

To be honest, the fairy grass is not that good, but the grain and grass are definitely up to standard, and even some of the ideas and developments are in line with logical rules, so I give it 5 stars. Come on, the author, I will give more thumbs up to Amway.

Come on, it's the love apartment that needs less writing [you taste it carefully]

How to say it? This is the first time I have seen someone write such a good book of this type. I hope to work harder and add more chapters every day.

I saw the check-in mark for Chapter 208.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's so pretty, but I've stopped updating it.

It's pretty good, but I don't know if it will be bad.

These ideas are all good, but there are too many descriptions in Love Apartment. It looks cool but boring. Write more about development camps, dungeons, industry, and transcendence. Overall, these are pretty good.

The author writes very well, but it's a bit lacking.