Water Margin: I, Wu Song, Married Pan Jinlian and Took the First Prize

Good book, the harem story is very good. Besides, this is just a mindless and refreshing article, so don't worry about official positions. I don't think the author is an experienced author, so some minor mistakes are understandable. Overall, it's pretty good.

This is a living Wu Song, in the muddy world, at the forefront of independence. Be affectionate and righteous, romantic but not vulgar. I couldn't stop watching it. The story has ups and downs and is fascinating. I look forward to Wu Song unifying the world, expanding his territory, and realizing his dream of having the world and all its beauties in his arms.

There are three disadvantages: First, some parts of the plot are too exaggerated. For example, the first half is realistic. Later, Wu Song goes to learn the thunder method, and Taoist ghosts and zombies appear. It is more exaggerated than Water Margin. Wu Song can even lift a stone table weighing tens of thousands of kilograms (several tons). This has to cross the line to Monkey King. After all, the golden cudgel only weighs 13,500 kilograms. Is this still Wu Song? It is outrageous. Second, there are problems with some character settings, such as Lu Zhishen. He is actually a character similar to Zhang Fei, thick on the outside but thin on the inside. However, the Luda in this article is too reckless and often not very smart. The characters of other people around the protagonist change very little after being set, and the phenomenon of facial makeup is more serious. On the contrary, King Yun Zhao Kai's description is good and has a three-dimensional sense. Third, the author is too poor at math and is too insensitive to numbers. It's similar to my daughter who is in elementary school. Readers who have read it carefully will definitely know where there are mistakes. For example, the sales volume of the book Romance of the Three Kingdoms cannot be calculated as 1 million taels. It is directly different by 0, etc. Many times, the calculations are wrong, which greatly affects the perception and lowers the grade of the entire book. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] However, despite the flaws, we still have to praise [salute] First, the writing is excellent, and the character dialogues are similar to Water Margin, which makes it comfortable to watch. Second, the plot logic is generally okay. There is no system or anything. I hate systems the most. The third is to study the wartime maps and the details of the imperial examination process. Overall, it is still a good work. I like it anyway. I hope the author can correct some of the errors and omissions in this work. Keep up the good work and produce better works in the future. Come on [like][like][like]

The writing is good, although the writing style is crude and has heavy traces of imitation. But the advantage is that the content is interesting and interesting. It's just that most of the Tomato book friends don't have the patience to read it, so the ratings are not high. Editors recommend your books based on your talent. I hope the author will finish it soon

I saw the latest update in one breath, and I still have more to say. A soul piercer with both civil and military skills, a truly cool hero. I just don't know why the rating is so low. There is only one word after reading it, cool! ! !

The writing is very interesting and funny. I look forward to the follow-up plot. Asking that little Xixia officer to call Erlang Zhenxiu, you are too low on status, what? From now on, as long as you collect a batch, they will all become sworn brothers, and then when a soldier comes, you will call him Erlang, how awesome

Not bad, not bad. Zhang Yuanwai's part was a little bit toxic. I was about to give up. I couldn't find a good book but I couldn't bear to read it. The latter part really gave me a big surprise. Whether it's the father's kindness and son's filial piety in the court or the battle of the generals, it's very good. It has a refreshing feeling. It's unconventional. I have a cold recently and I want Meiji to warm me up [crying]

It's good, it's well written, it's updated four times a day, the author is so powerful. I want to see the protagonist become a high-ranking official as soon as possible. That's all, how come it's not enough? It feels like there are too many plots involving women. Real men should fight. It's awesome! Explode! So cool! Rivers of blood flow! !

A normal author who is not sexually repressed wrote a normal good book. I hope this book will not be read by fairies.

Tomato is one of the few works that I have read and still have unfinished thoughts about. One is "Becoming a Blind Man and I Traveled the World" and the other is "I Will Live Immortal in the Heavenly Lao" which has already been completed. Wu Song in this film is really good-looking.

The literati Wu Song was very innovative. Look at the Water Margin story from another perspective.

I have read Chapter 28 so far, which is really good. Wu Song, the time traveler, has top-notch acting skills and is also funny in his speech, haha. The plot is also good, and there is something for every woman to do. It depends on how the plot goes in the back, but it seems that the back is not as interesting as the front, but I also gave it a good review after watching the front.

It's pretty good. I finished reading it in three days. I'm just waiting for the update. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. There are just too many women to take care of. In fact, Pan Jinlian + Princess Diji are enough. Don't just find a fisherman and become sworn friends later. What is your identity? ? ? If you want to rebel and go it alone, you can't tell everyone. Don't read the 8.1 Rating and think that because it's low, you're missing out on a good book.

I personally think it looks pretty good. The writing style and wording are also close to Water Margin, and the writing is smooth. The characterization is well done and the characters are distinct. The storyline is smooth and compact, not procrastinating or redundant. The description of the environment is very vivid. It would be an exaggeration to say that you are immersed in the scene, but there is also a sense of déjà vu. It's rare to find a book that I like to read, so I won't care about typos [smile]

This author is quite capable! The creative writing style is like a carefully crafted picture scroll, every word is exquisite; the plot is as ups and downs as the rushing mountain stream, which is exciting. The characters appear vividly on the page, and the emotions reach directly into the soul. You will be immersed in it while reading and have a long aftertaste. It is truly a masterpiece!

It reads smoothly, kindly and naturally. Sure enough, it still tastes the same as before. First give me five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐, I'd love to see more.

I caught up to the latest one [laughs][laughs] Originally, I thought it was average and there was nothing outstanding about it, and there were many errors and omissions, including someone getting pregnant in the front and then saying she couldn't get pregnant after a few chapters, someone being beheaded in the front and dying again in the back, and there were also some errors in the imperial examination and the currency system, and the at author would not come out to correct them. Now that I've said the good and the bad, the rest of the story is okay. The plot is not as exciting as Long Aotian's. It doesn't start with making guns and smelting steel. The foreshadowing is also done well. It's interesting to beat up the traitorous ministers. The character's personality is basically correct. It also fulfills the shortcomings I had in the later version of "Water Margin" when I was a teenager.

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It's pretty good, but sometimes I speak uncontrollably, but it's not a big problem. It won't be like being overheard by the traitor, and then having this thing talked about. However, it would definitely be better if this part could be changed from the bottom of my heart. To sum up, I think it is very good.

Author author. Your book is still very good. The flaw is that the plot of the battle is also completely adapted from the plot of Water Margin. Modern time travelers still have to consider using some modern battle formations and tactics. . I hope the author can consider the plot of the war with the Jin Kingdom in the future.

To be honest, the rating is a bit high. I personally feel it should only be around 7.3. After all, everyone has their own opinions. What I say is that it seems too, how to put it, a bit hard to describe in officialdom and on the battlefield. I feel like I'm looking down on others too much. Of course this is all my personal opinion.

This is the best Water Margin fan fiction I have ever read.

At first I thought I was going to be an official in the Song Dynasty. I saw it a few times but didn't read it. Who knew it would be really enjoyable? Being a corrupt official, doing one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes, it looked pretty good. It's a good novel [laughing]

It's novel and logical. Abandoning the machismo of the feudal dynasty, beautiful women match heroes, unlike in the past when Pan Jinlian married Wu Dalang and could not complain. He spurned Song Jiang's fake kindness and applauded Wu Song for being a true hero. The author still needs to work hard to update follow-up articles as soon as possible

A master, his writing is flowing, vivid, profound, and fascinating. Just when he was about to find out, the writing suddenly stopped, frivolous but not frivolous, his thoughts were satisfying enough, but also thought-provoking. The good words are at the front, and the next two words: Update soon! Quick update! Otherwise, I will raise it until it is finished [laughing evilly]

Overall, apart from being a bit boring, it's pretty good, but Ximen Qing and Hua Zixu stayed here for too long. If they win Empress Dowager Wei in the future, then keep watching!

The language is unique and the plot is fascinating

So far it looks pretty good, I give it 8.5 Points! A bit new, unconventional, and relaxed, it is a source of potential.

The writing about Wu Song is very good, and there is no delay in accepting the daughter.

Absolutely correct and refreshing article, very well-founded and well-founded! The pace is fast