Prisoner from the Start: My Flesh Monster Tears Apart the Prison

I think this book is actually quite good. No matter what kind of editing and transformation the protagonist undergoes, it is based on common sense. According to the genes on the earth, it is impossible to resist firearms. If you want to make this book more readable, you should highlight that the role of the protagonist's golden finger comes from high dimensions. Can break through the limitations of the earth. This makes the book more practical and gives readers a more immersive experience. And I don't think it necessarily needs to be bulletproof. Or the spider can be regenerated at high speed. This is more realistic. Not bulletproof. But not afraid of bullets. Also this book should follow the principle of conservation of energy. The author should describe energy in detail, as well as energy I think a good novel must be based on reality and reflect on reality. This is my suggestion, just a suggestion.

If you say the biggest advantage of this book is that the subject matter is very good, but the biggest poisonous point is that the Chinese people are too heroic. It is suitable to put it in other books. It is really inappropriate to put it here. In other books, wow, this is so touching. The people in it say what the name of such-and-such a place is, and then rush over with bombs to blow up the monsters. But you don't want to think about who the protagonist is? Putting it in this book will only make people feel uncomfortable. If you think about it, the protagonist in the book is the villain, but you have written about China so well. In order to protect their country and their teammates, the people in it rushed directly to self-destruct and died together. The last person left still planted the five-star red flag there, the five-star red flag! Find it touching? Is the plot exciting? Don't you think it's strange? Is it to be written later that the protagonist went to war with the Chinese country, and the Chinese country resisted to the death, and how this person died together with the monster, and how that person made a magnificent sacrifice and was finally destroyed? Or should the protagonist build a world where humans and monsters coexist? 😅You said this is really poisonous

After chapter 58, it's basically the second book.

It feels so strange! I don't know what I'm writing since chapter 60? Why did Yumian and Bailing suddenly become detectives? The author didn't explain anything, so I was confused and didn't know what he was writing.

I took a look at chapters 59 and 60, no wonder it scored 5.2🤦

Going to massacre the village, there are only two kinds of genes?

Grind

The first half is okay, but the second half is incomprehensible.

This book ends in Chapter 58, and the rest is no different from random writing.

Later I changed this book, even the person pronoun became first person.