HP*****

When I read Chapter 30, I was sure it was good. Then I didn't expect that the author had updated 70 chapters after not reading it for two days. I was scared. I will continue to save and read it all at once, but I will regard you as the king, author!!!!

I'm not looking for trouble. I think the big book is well written, but I still find it too strange in terms of relationships. Although we all know that the heroine's CP is Sirius, the heroine seems to be set to be biased towards Sirius. Obviously Sirius's attitude towards the heroine can be called bad at the beginning. The heroine also made it clear that she doesn't care about Sirius's opinion and doesn't care. He is this person, but why does Sirius's attitude toward the heroine change when he is good to the heroine, and the heroine's attitude will change drastically? It does not mean that it cannot change (after all, the other party's attitude has improved and he can stop holding on to the past things), but why does it directly transition to Sirius's attitude towards the heroine being ambiguous, and the heroine also seems to immediately start to become ambiguous towards Sirius? Because I don't think the heroine's character would be immediately ambiguous with others (it's just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, I just have some opinions after reading it)

Why do so few people read this book? This book is simply great. The author writes it so well. It's really beautiful. He wrote about Sirius's feeling. It's so beautiful. The author must work hard. It's so good. I love it.

It is recommended to read this book. The author's writing is very good. The emotional part is described delicately and the details are also described appropriately. The heroine does not need to rely on others. Moreover, the plot is compact and there is no running story. I highly recommend everyone to read it. The subject matter is also very novel [Send Heart] [KISS] Come and read it quickly! ! !

It's beautiful! It's beautiful! Thank you to the author! !

It's great, I haven't seen such a long hp fanfic in a long time [Admiration] I really like the way the author writes about Dumbledore. This is the Dumbledore in my heart.

The writing is very nice, but I hope that the heroine can return to the original world and that future generations can have a happy ending [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing is quite good. I picked up another book because the last one was not well written and I couldn't read it. I didn't expect that this one is not bad and the plot is quite consistent with the original work.

Beautiful, so beautiful

It's ok, nothing surprising so far.

Very beautiful, very beautiful

It's a rare silliman who is neither slanderous nor boastful!

Nice! Time travel won't be too messy!

Wow, the writing is really great! ! !

The author writes so well ⁰̴̷̷ ˙̮ ⁰̴̷̷ Dini unites everyone to establish a community, which really feels like a group. And will Peter betray him later?

The author must keep writing and never stop updating (ﾉД`)

Emotions are described very delicately

So pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Good looking, good looking, recommended.

Very beautifully written

Very good article

The characters have distinct personalities, as if they all came alive

I feel so sorry for Sirius in every world. Help [crying]

So pretty, so pretty. There are so many details, and the setting of the heroine is also very good. 😁

It's beautiful, I like it so much. Good luck to the author.

It's very interesting, I hope the author keeps writing.

Super pretty, the heroine is very lovable and sweet