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It's okay, the author is careful about the Ten Turns Net Gu

Gu's fanfics are not very interesting, so I'd like to encourage you. Some people may think that the protagonist upgrades too quickly. The main problem is that it's a real person. In the original work, Wang Tingfu became an immortal in more than 600 chapters. There are more Level 8 Gu Immortals than Level 5 Gu Immortals in the original novel, and the settings of the Gu Immortals are also more complete and easier to write, which is a common problem in most Gu fan fiction.

1. When will you go to the Gu world? 2. There will still be a heroine if there is no heroine, and whether there will be a harem or not It's still very interesting. Chapter 13 is about reciting poetry, but it's a bit like AI🤔

Chapter 30: Being malicious and deficient is too much

There are not many poisonous points at present. The main thing is that the light path can reach the quasi-master in no time.

While there aren't many people around now, I still like the idea of ​​not having a female lead, which is more interesting.

He is truly the supreme master of the water path.

Jin Shining is out now, how about a Iron Break? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's okay. There are no shortcomings except that the protagonist feels a bit pretentious. It's quite interesting and won't be a problem to watch.

The protagonist's combat power is a bit suppressed, and Demon Slayer's combat power is raised too high, but I still hope the author can persevere.

I thought it was a good novel.

There is such a fat book! ˚✧₊⁎❝᷀ົཽ≀ˍ̮ ❝᷀ົཽ⁎⁺˳✧༚

Great, no need to say more

Ok ok ok

It's rare to see a book with such a good taste. Good luck to the author [already planted] [add one to bookshelf] [please update]

I approve of this book! ! !

When I saw Gu, I liked it

Can you recommend [like][like][like]

It's a good book, but there are too many ellipses, and it's much better at the end.

The writing is very good, but there is one thing that could be used less ellipsis [Thinking] [Thinking] It's a bit uncomfortable to watch😔 Why do things always go wrong at critical moments😓😓😓? The protagonist always has a plan, but the protagonist is so unlucky that it seems very 🤡, so there can't be an immortal Gu about luck. Don't make mistakes all the time.

When the word count was high, it was more than 5,000 words, and when I was young, it was more than 1,000 words. The whole article looks good, and it is not a mindless and cool article.

It's so well written, the author looks like a grown up [blowing kiss]

Beautiful and detailed

It's beautiful, but don't enter the dark room.

It's okay, not a brainless piece of writing.

Very interesting, the content is very good

Lord Immortal's soul is divided. [Adoration][Adoration]

Pretty good, Waibi Babu

Come on, well written.

It's really beautiful [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Come on, author