Transformation************

I can only say that this is one of the rare authentic succubus books that conforms to the traditional meaning of succubus, rather than some messy cult [love] similar to male succubi.

It's a very interesting story about a sex-changing succubus. It's a pity that the protagonist doesn't fall into evil. I want to read a story about the protagonist turning into a succubus and then falling into evil. [Crying][Crying][Crying]

It is rare to see such a serious and carefully designed book with a Western fantasy world view on Tomato, and the protagonist is a serious succubus. It is more plot-oriented than romance. It is a story in which the protagonist becomes stronger as a special succubus and discovers the truth of the world little by little. The protagonist is well portrayed, and you can sympathize with the situation and encounters of the succubus from the perspective of the protagonist. This is a story about the succubus. It is not a very friendly world. It can be seen that the author has conceived a very large main story, and the plot is slowly unfolding. In terms of characterization, at least the protagonist is a very likable character, and Lina has a good personality. It would be better if more cute characters can be portrayed in the follow-up. In summary, this is a book with great potential. I will leave a review here before this book becomes popular. [Sending Hearts]

Against the sky, above, invincible, the plot explodes, Shen He is kidnapped, come if you dare to see it

Emperor Shen He stretched out his big hand, trying to pin the author down here. People never expected that the author showed off his cultivation and reached the realm of the Ultimate Emperor. The author murmured, "With my great achievements as the Ultimate Emperor, who can kill me? Who dares to kill me?!"

A good book of food (how come 23 photos were reviewed)

Five stars for the character setting (the interesting setting is very attractive to readers, but I am afraid of sinking into the river), five stars for the plot (there are currently no poisonous points, and some strange points can be explained by pitfalls, which is good-looking), characterization? ? ? (This aspect is a bit pale and a bit flat, especially the villain) Overall, four stars is fine, five stars support the author [like] Rather than giving this book a good rating on paper, I would rather this book live and give it a low star to protect it.

Are the author and the protagonist's sister's father the same person?

After reading it, it's a bit short. I want to ask when the protagonist can stand up.

The succubus lures all creatures to perish in beauty. As a succubus, she is well aware of the darkness of the world. She is willing to become the incarnation of beauty to lure all things to perish in beauty. She knows that the birth of life is a mistake, and even her compatriots must destroy it. As a walker of pure beauty and destruction Theoretically speaking, there should be a mass extinction of life in the demon world

High quality, suspected to be the reincarnation of an old guy. The story line has not been fully developed yet, but it looks very good.

Why did Chapter 14 pass the review? Suddenly I found that the entire book was under review

I hope that the protagonist can have a unique path to improve his strength and not always be treated as a weakling.

Succubus bloodline and human bloodline, unless you are at the level of a brave man or a demon king, are not very good on their own, but the two together are the king of bombs😀😀😀

It's great. I love it. [Admiration] The author is very good at writing. Let me know what else is going on in your little mind. I think the protagonist needs to have some sense of the bottom line and let her mother know what she can and cannot accept, and she should be serious and firm. When she refuses, she hopes not to act like her mother is acting like a spoiled brat, but to take the initiative, especially now that the protagonist has unique abilities, and if she has the capital, she should fight for it more. Now the protagonist has inner doubts and thoughts about her mother's attitude and purpose, but knowing that her privacy has been published on the big screen, the result is still "nothing can be done, it doesn't matter" [face covering]

Can the author see this book survive until the protagonist reaches level 12 [face covering]

There is no need to score points anymore (sad) [crying] [crying]

I hope the protagonist's strength will increase quickly [Like]

I didn't say anything, just stared. I only knew that the desperate captain looked at countless people, but I didn't know that Lu Bu narrowly escaped being attacked by Diao Chan, Noxus' guillotine and death roll, and came to the Snow Wind Mountain Temple. While burying flowers in the backyard of the temple, he met the love of his life, Lin Daiyu, who could pull down weeping willows. I never expected that. What's more, in order to resurrect Zhu Bajie and Sha Seng, Sun Wukong used Miss Ji's hell portal to go to Fu Jiang's house to take the soft flesh and blood from his chest to sacrifice to the true god, and let the evil god activate the counter-moon reading technique to realize his dream. Then he used the Eye of Ender to return to the foot of Tianshan Mountain. Looking at the newly resurrected second and third brothers, he said: The three of us living our lives well is better than anything else! "

Putting aside some special plot points, this book has good points in terms of comedy and entertainment, and has many points of interest in the shaping of some characters (especially the protagonist group). As far as the world view is concerned, it is unique and has its own unique characteristics. It is an exploration of a different world with good potential. I hope that the author can make more efforts to shape the world in the future and try to discard those words that affect the survival of the work.

Broken halberd, wine poem, Huang chapter, sword pointed at the edge of Huang Road, Meiyou

It looks fine so far, but I have a question, will the protagonist's sister be one of the protagonist's cp characters? I would be very disgusted if this type of cp character appears in Baihe, so I just want to ask. If I don't get in, I will change the score to 5 points (I have just started reading it now) Thanks to the author for clarifying my doubts. I will continue to read it. It is a very high-quality book.

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle, please don't get elbowed by the reviewers. Ahem, let's lower the score a little bit, don't worry about the author.

How did the protagonist's mother fall in love with his father? And the protagonist's mother is the female Aquaman?

Halfway through reading, I accidentally clicked on the background, and subconsciously opened another software before I realized it was a Tomato book. Author, you must stick to it.

I want to write a longer comment for this, but I don't know how. But I just want to write longer to express my emotions, but I can't. So I wrote this review that makes no sense.

What a woo-woo wave! This is so precious and beautiful!

Personally speaking, although this book has a low rating, it is indeed one of the best-written novels I have ever read. It mainly contains many of my favorite elements: Demon Realm + Innocent Succubus + Hundred Queens, etc. I feel that the plot logic and rhythm of the article are well grasped. Hope the author stays well and keeps pushing forward.

Goode, makes me want to learn. If you can write mathematics, physics and chemistry well and travel all over the world, you will not be afraid that it will also apply in other worlds. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I love watching it, and I love Shen Hezhong.