Infinitely Refresh Talents, Control the Eldest Lady at the Beginning

The label is written as a cool article, but the dozens of chapters in the middle start to be like writing a suspense article, solving the mystery step by step. . . .

The author's writing is okay. The beginning of the first few chapters is a bit like a pornographic book. The plot is not protracted, the protagonist acts decisively, and it is not a brainless novel. The protagonist has a somewhat IQ, and the protagonist still has certain moral principles. This is better than other bandit protagonists. Good luck, author!

From Liu Bei's point of view, it's good. Generally speaking, the character design of the protagonist is okay and not annoying. There is nothing particularly toxic so far. The average IQ of the supporting characters is online. There are no major shortcomings. If I'm going to nitpick, the protagonist is still a bit weak at the moment. It's highly recommended for those who can accept that it's not an invincible and refreshing novel. If you can't accept it, just leave. It's okay to pass the time.

It's okay, but I can only say it's okay Later it was written as a puzzle It has a feeling of ancient urban literature

Not really from a cool writing perspective, but the writing is very good The description of the female characters is concise and accurate, especially the heroine If the author writes light novels, maybe more people will read them.

The eldest lady is well portrayed, but online articles generally don't describe the details in depth, so you can only think about it yourself, which is more troublesome. Also, it would be better if there were fewer female protagonists, for example, only four or five.

Kids, it's a light novel [laughs]

This book is also so beautiful

If you don't have an author with two to three million words, just wait for Blade Express [laughing]

From the perspective of traditional immortality cultivation, the protagonist is the so-called inner demon, right?

She is really a male succubus. I feel that the eldest lady is well portrayed and doesn't feel too poisonous.

I didn't expect it to be really good. It's pretty.

It's quite interesting, the Spring and Autumn Cicadas are still too cloudy. It's not like I haven't been back for a while to see how to cut it.

It's good-looking, yellow, exciting, and the protagonist is not brainless.

It's really good [laughing evilly] and there are four chapters in one day recently, which makes it a lot more fun to read.

It feels pretty good, but you haven't even pushed 200,000 words yet?