Collapse of Iron**********

As a fan fiction, this book can be said to be above the standard. The author really pays attention to the copywriting, and the control of emotions is the finishing touch. In Star Iron, the caged bird gained freedom, a person who loves her, and a series of things she longed for in her previous life. She is Robin and she is also a robin. This is not just a copycat, but also has emotional resonance. The author has done a good job in this regard. The classics from outside the sky borrowed birds to come to Star Iron, and the gears of fate began to turn. All in all, the novel is very good, but based on experience, the audience for this book is very small. Nowadays, many readers only love cool novels. There is a high probability that this kind of book can only be regarded as a niche masterpiece. In any case, this book is still good, I hope the author can read more (of course, you must pay attention to your health and don't stretch yourself too tight, I wish the author peace) Do you think there are not many people reading it? Sometimes I dominate the paragraph review alone. Does the author need my help in promoting the book?

The article is particularly delicate, and it gives me a feeling of being included in the same harmony, which is very comfortable. I would like to ask if you would consider collecting stories from netizens. The content does not have to be true, the characters do not have to be true, and the place names do not have to be true. Find the stories you like and want to write and add them to the extras of the work, but please do not be overwhelmed by sadness and anger. The emotions of the story are kept by the memory, and the writing of the story requires meditation.

It's a good book. Halfway through, I felt like the author wanted to feed me with philosophy. Unfortunately, I've basically read all the books he wanted to express, so not only did it not feed me, it also made me feel half-baked. I don't fully understand it, but I still have my own understanding and it's worth a look. The protagonist, Ms. Robin, traveled through time and became a robin. She had a pair of sad parents in her previous life, but her family in this life is reassuring. The background description of the work is very complete, but I hope to add a little bit of Ms. Robin's own understanding, rather than the author describing the background of the work. You must understand that when you resonate with a work of art, it is often your own experience that resonates with the author.

It can be seen that you have indeed paid attention to the plot, but you are punished to read Robin Character Story 3 and 2.2 Main plot (the mission chapter of Public Enemy) ten times. The little bird brothers and sisters were adopted by Gopher after becoming orphans and brought to Pinoconi. The hometown of the little bird brothers and sisters has now become a grassland. In addition, Pinoconi's star core existed before the Revolutionary War, that is, in the era of Edgehammer Prison, and Pinoconi's star core was activated by members of the family, while the home of the Little Bird brothers and sisters was destroyed by the destruction caused by the star core.

I won't be polite when it comes to reviews! [Cool] The advantages are many, too numerous to mention. The character fits the setting and acts without violating the character's image (referred to as not OOC). It is a good starting point for the motivations of the existing characters. It also lays down the foreshadowing in the brief plot. The writing is smooth and beautiful, and the introduction and science popularization of the famous works are very comprehensive and sufficient. As for the shortcomings, for me personally, it is a bit "redundant". In special scenes, in order to show the robin's respect for people or things, two or three adjectives will be modified. When something like this happens repeatedly within a paragraph, there's a sense of, well, "repetition." It's like just putting the words there (the description is weak, sorry) It's not that there's anything wrong with it. When describing, you can be appropriately concise and don't pile up rhetoric. Simplicity and complexity each have their own beauty. The following text is my feeling about the author's writing. The old man closed his eyes and fell asleep. On a warm spring day, go away with the wind.

I am not a particularly fond of reading, but as a friend of the author, I also came here to comment. Personally, I like it quite a lot. The beginning explains Robin's family situation, the character traits of his parents, and the characters that Robin likes are very carefully done, and then Robin becomes a robin and then plays the piano. It is so comfortable for me to read. It is different from every novel I have heard before. Generally speaking, it can be read The most intuitive feeling it gave me was that it introduced the family's unfair and harsh demands on her and gradually turned to what I expected. I will continue to read the following content. I also wish the author an early success and a long career. At the same time, pay attention to your health and don't overwork your body. (Please be gentle, I'm afraid)

It's good to read. The author focused on Mockingbird when writing and respected the original work. Even if he quoted from other books, it was a good illustration of the original author, rather than insisting that it was his own creation. This is very comfortable to read. The most comfortable thing is that it doesn't go into the combat power part in depth, so it's very comfortable to watch.

Yanqing: I, Yanqing, have been honest and upright all my life. How can I afford such a sacred relic with such a high double-explosion? I can just rely on the disaster relief food distributed by the general. (Seeing three demonic soldiers): Three of them hit me, one is trying my best. (Seeing the Doomsday Beast): It was forged from the fragments of the Ancient Dusk Beast. I, Yanqing, am just a guard beside the general. How can I possibly defeat him? I've tried my best. "Jingliu, just wait for me." "Dan Heng, just wait for me." "Blade, just wait for me." "Pioneer, just wait for me." "Kafka, just wait for me." "Jingyuan, invincible." "Haha, now you know how powerful I am." "I grabbed the enemy's performance points, and my next attack can cause 50% more damage." "The golden man Si Yan on the opposite side is in the evil punishment mode. The second attack will cause a large amount of imaginary damage to the designated single target. At the same time, there is a high probability that the attacked target will be imprisoned. I dare not attack."

This book is really one of the few that ensures that the characters are not broken, and the plot is novel and interesting. Due to the author's serious attitude, I will follow it to the end! ! [Blow a kiss] Bring the bird treasure to life [Admiration] Highly recommended [Like] I wrote this review 7 hours after reading it. Believe me, you will fall in love with this book after reading it [Blow kiss]

The author's writing is very good. I look forward to writing the Romance of the Three Kingdoms in Luofu later. Can I also add the Three-Body Problem? I think the three-body problem is actually more shocking to Bengtie [shy][shy][shy]

I really (இωஇ)... Don't know what to say (I just turned my head silently and put it on👓) Big~ You are really... You wrote so well 👍🏻——please update it quickly (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

The author's writing style is really good, and the author's sincerity can be seen from the description and understanding of the work. Although I am not used to this style, I have to say that it is a very good work. Come on, author~! @Can't write articles

Why do I always find good books with only a few dozen chapters? The author writes very well, the writing style is superb, the characters are not OOC, and overall it makes people feel comfortable.

There is some content in Wenzhigong, but not too much. Basically, it was written by the protagonist after experiencing the incident, and the protagonist told others about the author and did not take it as his own. Come on, steamed buns~ The tasks you wrote are basically not OOC. I haven't seen a book like this for a long time [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The description is very delicate. Forgive me for being short of words. I don't know how to praise this book. The most important point is that the author can maintain an updated word count (usually 4, 5, or 6 chapters, each chapter is 4,000 to 5,000 words) while ensuring quality! ! !

Dear author, I am very satisfied with your work, but I feel like I am reading a popular science article with no plot. I think I can appropriately reduce that part of the popular science content and promote the development of the plot.

The author of the popular science piece is [Like][Like][Like]

It's very beautiful. The author has a very good attitude. He is a person who really likes literary creation and iron collapse. I really like the shock from literature and the spread of civilization in the author's works.

It's nice and nice [sending heart] and it fits the image of a little bird in my heart. It can bring warmth to others. It has a very strong character and a little bit of playfulness. Come on, come on👏

It's very interesting to watch. The interaction between brother and sister Xiaoniao and the side plots are all written very well by the author [Sending my heart to you]

It is a very thoughtful book, but just like the comments I read, it is a book that expresses one's own life path, that is, philosophy. Therefore, it is destined that there will not be too many people who like to watch it, but these cannot affect the fact that this is a work worth trying to watch. Just like the saying goes: You can't know whether you like it or not until you finish it. (Laugh)

It's okay, but I don't know how long this book will last. Okay, okay

Great, no need to say more

Not bad, good-looking, good-looking

Looking forward to the main storyline of Pinoconi [laughing]

The overall plot is a bit poor, and there are some minor bugs, but the writing is okay, the descriptions are careful, and the emotions are well rendered. Just write more

I like it so much~ The author is really serious and the bird is very cute~

Very nice, rare robin fanfic. What those people wrote was either about starting a harem or just cutting it off at the waist. Come on, don't stop!

Very, very satisfied, the content is novel

The interaction between Xiaoniao and Sunday is good, the content is quite funny, and the description of the work is also vivid