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This is the first time I saw such a good-looking book in Tomato, both in terms of plot development and main character. Step by step, the light and dark lines cross, and they should be connected for a longer time. The writing is not bad and the descriptions are very vivid, just like what I have experienced. Suitable for watching at night [laughs][laughs]

The plot is actually well designed, and it feels better than some 9-point books that are just fake. How come there is so little traffic? I rarely comment on books, but I feel like if I didn't write something, this book might be cut off. Come on, author!

I have only read the first 21 chapters so far, and I feel they are quite good. There are no poisonous points. I have also thought of some plots. At present, the author is describing the family as the ultimate BOSS villain. The common people have been suppressed, so that the protagonist can be given an identity similar to a child of destiny, a person who breaks this unequal rule. After the three mentors noticed it, they decided to protect him. The little fat man with the ghost claw can be written to death. Currently, his character is a person who hates evil and hates the family. He The ability is to be able to make a wish on the basis of paying some price, so that a plot can be given (after the little fat boy grows to a certain extent) the family discovers the existence of the protagonist, and he makes a wish at the cost of his life to make the family forget the existence of the protagonist. The protagonist's mentor ability is quite good, it is a very strong life-saving skill, and he has strong control skills. He can currently control 200 other ghosts. In order to protect the protagonist, he can give a mentor and voluntarily sacrifice to give the ghost to the protagonist in a similar way to grafting. , Adding some such difficult plots can make the characters more three-dimensional and the plot content richer.

Come on, author, I like what you wrote so much. The bad thing I feel is that there are too few people in this unfortunate organization. I think we can add a few more people, preferably all of our own people. By the way, this is the protagonist you wrote. Don't be single. The author, uh, I feel that the space range in the novel you wrote is not very large, and the sense of distance cannot be reflected in some places. For example, the three people who just arrived arrived at the protagonist's place in the blink of an eye, as if there was no sense of distance on this journey. , But if you encounter the kind of three-hundred-year-old monster mentioned above, it would be dangerous if one or two of them are held back.

It's okay so far. It's just that the protagonist can be saved if he wants to. Don't say that he doesn't want to get involved and takes the initiative to provoke him.

Yes, my god, the author's writing is good, it's very nice, the details are pretty good, and the scary parts are also very scary. I'm a bit afraid to watch it at night, but I still feel that it's not interesting in some places, otherwise it would be better. The characters are also described in detail

It seems like someone has written exactly the same book before. I don't know if it was written by the author before.

Deducted 1 point for being a nanny for a classmate at the Long Vine Ghost School. Everything else is fine.

Looks good, feels good now, not toxic at all It's been on the bookshelf and I've been following it for a month. Let me tell you my feelings so far. It's quite interesting. In addition, it's quite cool for the protagonist to give other people their fighting power (perhaps the protagonist will create an organization by himself later). The protagonist can recruit so many people just by giving him some material, but I feel like what's the use of the author building a force? The good villains and villains are not on the same level at all. The Dead Soul Cult can destroy the world at any time. The protagonist and the villain are not on the same scale. The villain Dead Soul Cult can beat the protagonist casually. Anyway, from my current point of view, even if the protagonist has a system, there is no chance of winning. Even if the protagonist's ghosts are all upgraded to the full level, the villain Jie Shi is You can create ghosts at will, and the key to collecting ghosts and gods is that you created such an awesome ghost 500 years ago (what about now?). In addition, the key is that this person is only the bishop of the Dead Soul Cult. Now it depends on what the author writes later. Anyway, I see that the protagonist has no chance of winning at all.

This book really amazed me, I can't help but want to read it👀

I have read a novel with the exact same plot on another platform, even the names of the ghosts are exactly the same. Which one was forced to be completed by the original author.

You can tell how picky I am by looking at how long I have been studying. But I read more than 100 chapters of this book in one go, almost without skipping any chapter. It's really beneficial and worth reading.

A very good book, outstanding!

I just hope that we will stop funding foreigners and would rather give those things to foxes.

Come on, author, stop being a pigeon.

Please, Akaashi, no need to thank you [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's a bit boring at first but becomes quite interesting later on

It is a very typical example of an aristocratic family committing an evil act and a commoner comes to taste it. Of course, it may be an act of evil committed by oneself. Who knows?

The first reincarnation was good, but the content of the second reincarnation became repetitive. The author asked: Have you woken up from your dream? The story is not over yet [crying]

Update quickly, don't be a eunuch [cry][cry][cry]

I can't find a book that can compete with it. Other books leave readers confused until the end, and they feel like they are just writing randomly. I hope the author will not give up, I will always pay attention to you.

I hope the author can continue writing. Very pretty.

When I first read it, I thought it was a bit unsightly because of the cover. But once I was interested, I clicked in and found that it was really clever and interesting. I recommend everyone to take a look.

To be honest, I really enjoyed reading it. Author, you must keep writing.

I personally think the whole book is good, except for the Ariel section, which is a bit tricky, but overall the author's layout skills are pretty good.

So far it looks pretty good. This setting is very novel. I hope the author won't stop updating.

The plot is very compact and quite interesting.

It's not bad, the plot flow, but it looks like I've seen the same one on other platforms, maybe it's reposted by the same author

Very beautiful! [Adoration][Shyness][Love] The plot is very good and I look forward to the follow-up content! The author keeps up the good work! !

Great author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on! It's very nice [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]