When Walking in Tianji Pavilion, You Let Me Be a Cheering Passerby

Chapter 15, I'm not sure whether I can read it. I just don't want any commercial funding or anything like that. I don't know if it's just me or what, but I see this kind of thing as very fragmented in the ancient context. Then, in the early stage, the Son of Luck is weak and useless, which is normal, but the protagonist has little expressiveness, and his identity is only a passerby in the system plot. After all, he is the protagonist of this book, so it should be more enjoyable. In fact, when the protagonist is operating later, the protagonist can control the entire plot and proceed step by step according to the protagonist's arrangement. The protagonist watches his masterpiece as a passerby. Later, you can also write some force majeure factors that make the plot of the protagonist out of control to add some twists and turns.

It's pretty, very much to my taste. Humorous and a bit refreshing. But limited by the author's writing style, it's not exciting enough. I can only say that my five stars are for encouragement. The actual level is only three and a half stars. Some places in the front look really bland.

The setting is quite interesting, but the author knows that if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. Don't add heroines indiscriminately. For example, his junior niece has a relationship inexplicably, which doesn't feel good. Don't open a harem randomly, hey, please [cry], I feel like there is a top-notch beauty waiting for you somewhere [face covering] Besides, the updates are too slow.

As far as this book is concerned, the themes and themes of the systematic essay are not new, but they are written with new ideas. Ingenious and creative system, unconventional story design. In terms of plot direction, although it is somewhat formulaic, there is no cookie-cutter routine, and the story structure and imagination are both outstanding. And there is nothing toxic in terms of content. Both the narrative and the rhythm are well grasped, and the overall feeling is warm. However, the characterization is not excellent, but the author's intention and precipitation can be seen. Overall, it is a very good book and I can give it 4 stars. But the others have higher scores on Tomato The back part is just average [laughing evilly] not as good looking as before.

Personally, I think it's okay, a little bland, but it fits the setting. There are always some people who jump to read it and force the score to be low. I finally understand why there are always book reviews that give low scores without thinking.

The content is not bad. The author can arrange a heroine who is in contrast to the protagonist and is fun-loving. In this show, it is both funny and adds sweetness and excitement to the interaction between the male and female protagonists.

It's still very good. I've read more than 100 chapters, and I haven't seen any bad points, but there's nothing too exciting either. The score is still a bit low. Personally, I think it should have a score of 8.2. I hope the author will not stop updating.

It's okay, the pacing is well controlled, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist.

It's not bad, many places in the book are quite funny, and I was very happy while reading it.

That's because I don't have any reviews. This book is quite good, but updates are too slow.

Never mind his porous plot, we need it for ventilation The plot is complete and the protagonist is funny, giving me a feeling that is different from other immortality novels. I just don't know if he has a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Not bad, not bad. I like it [you taste it carefully]. It's quite interesting. I'm just afraid that the author will throw a tantrum [face covering]

The plot is okay, but it's not comfortable to listen to the book. Also, those titles are uncomfortable. The disciples of Tianji Pavilion call themselves "sir" when they walk around. Also, which dynasty are you going to? The line "Your Majesty" and the other line "Your Majesty" are uncomfortable to listen to.

It's okay, but some plots don't look like a passer-by at all. I didn't see what I wanted to see. The world has a large framework and the plot is quite rich.

So far, it looks pretty good. The plot is lighthearted and funny, and the spells are also more interesting than those that use small fireballs. They are more like a cultivator.

The creator who does not belong to this era, the skillful hand who weaves stories, the guardian of the fountain of inspiration, I pray to you for the rain of renewal. The narrator who travels through time, the hidden existence who controls the plot, the holder of the key to the chapter, I offer you my sincere encouragement. Weaver of destiny, sage who is busy writing books, please do not sleep in Klein's rest, and do not let Russell's diary gather dust again. Believers who follow the watch are hungry and thirsty, their spiritual food is running out, and their ideological nursery is in urgent need of watering. I pray that the spirit of wisdom surges like gray mist, allowing Audrey's insight, Alger's voyage, and Daly's ravings to appear on the page again. King of Yellow and Black, the master of good luck, please give the storm of inspiration to your ghostwriter, let the stagnant pendulum swing again, and let the unfinished epic continue to write chapters. I praise you and I implore you - give the hand that holds the pen a gentle push. The creator who does not belong to this era, the skillful hand who weaves stories, the guardian of the fountain of inspiration, I pray to you for the rain of renewal. The narrator who travels through time, the hidden existence who controls the plot, the holder of the key to the chapter, I offer you my sincere encouragement. Weaver of destiny, sage who is busy writing books, please do not sleep in Klein's rest, and do not let Russell's diary gather dust again. Believers who follow the watch are hungry and thirsty, their spiritual food is running out, and their ideological nursery is in urgent need of watering. I pray that the spirit of wisdom surges like gray mist, allowing Audrey's insight, Alger's voyage, and Daly's ravings to appear on the page again. King of Yellow and Black, the master of good luck, please give the storm of inspiration to your ghostwriter, let the stagnant pendulum swing again, and let the unfinished epic continue to write chapters. I praise you and I implore you - give the hand that holds the pen a gentle push. May the new chapter come in time May the new chapter come in time

Very well written. But did the author forget some characters? For example, Xiao Ziling in the protagonist's Dantian. And the son of a certain fortune named Zhao.

There is development in the direction of the harem, and at the same time, there is an ambiguity with several people. The system is incomplete and only has basic functions, and it feels like the protagonist is not just a passerby. It even gave me the feeling of starring in the plot of "Children of Destiny" many times. The protagonist's own talent is not low. After the arrival of the system, he almost completely gave up independent practice, and only mentioned practice for functional spells such as incarnation. Are there signs that multiple characters have traveled through time? There are signs that Master Shangqing is a time traveler (not stated clearly).

It's good-looking and thoughtful, not a fake passerby plot. Five-star praise. Adding a long comment, this book can be regarded as a semi-adventure and semi-daily fun novel (with many female protagonists). The highlights are the protagonist's overall life in the plot, and the interaction with the heroine and supporting characters (especially the emotional scenes). These two points are the eye-catching aspects of this book (in my opinion), because of the characteristics of the fun novel. The transition of some events is dull and boring, and the narrative rhythm is slow (but I feel that the author's character portrayal is very good). It may be a bit slow for readers who are used to fast narratives, but if you read it correctly, it is still a good novel, and I give the author five stars for encouragement. (That's all, I'll add more later if I think of anything)

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low

It can be seen. At present, the main character should be in a state of being a heartthrob. It is clear that the only one he likes is his junior sister. I beg the author, can he continue to be a heartthrob? Or maybe the main character and his teacher are together and then break up with others.

The plot is not brainless, clichéd, or flimsy. The protagonist is also a true saint, and there is no brainless infighting within the sect.

Looks good now

The protagonist is a character I can only say that it is very average

Just make the protagonist's personality closer to that of the Shangqing clan leader.

It's quite fun, but there are still things to explain about whether there are female protagonists and whether there are any poisonous points.

So far, it's okay, and there aren't too many poisonous points. Some people say that the 200,000-word mid-stage progress of becoming a god is enough to overwhelm the combat power. Let's see if the author can write about Ascension to the Immortal World.

I really like this setting, please keep writing

The general framework and the introduction of the book are quite attractive to readers. The plot described has ups and downs. The author will continue to work hard.

The plot is light-hearted and enjoyable [Blowing Kisses], which makes it comfortable to watch