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The writing is good. It is rare that the female protagonist is not from the Miyano family. 90% Of the Conan fanfics are from the Miyano family, not 90% but more than 90%. Then there are a lot of other poisons. At least you didn't see much poison in the front, but I always feel that it's a bit awkward not to play Conan a little bit.

No need for love lines, thank you

Not bad, but why does Tzeentch always reward physical fitness improvements?

It's not exciting enough, there are no scenes I want to see😭

I had a similar idea a long time ago, and finally I found something similar, but it was not strong enough and did not feel chaotic.

Good, good, good