[Weird + Live Broadcast + Imagination + Battle for National Games + Micro-Thriller + The heroine has some funny ideas]
Ding dong, your weird little game has arrived, please apply to join the war from all countries.
There are a group of poor and scary weirdos in the weird game. Unexpectedly, one person sneaked in and made the headquarters of the weird game doubt their life.
The unlucky Liu Piaopiao has not had more than a thousand yuan in her pocket since she came to this world, but she was forced to participate in the game for the sake of the poem in her heart and the distance. Unexpectedly, she met her brother at the beginning. She had no choice but to let him be her biological brother. Therefore, between winning and losing, she chose to lose and lose money.
But a person can't be unlucky in everything. After his brother returned home in triumph, he would often receive the sound of funds arriving in his mobile phone. Not to mention, his hands were weak after receiving the money. The bribes were not in the thousands but in the hundreds. The Dragon Kingdom in the game was winning, and other countries were scolding him like crazy. Even he seemed to be enlightened and spread the bloody novels throughout the weird world, making a lot of money.
Reader comments
The first part is okay. The heroine is quite lively alone with her friends, and the writing is quite novel. The latter part is not as emotional as a running account, and the part about Li Zhaodi seems to be watered down. What does it have to do with the heroine? Yan Xiaoman's descriptions are more vivid than the female protagonist... In addition, the male protagonist came online too early, especially the voice in that dream. I can think of the male protagonist's lines: 1. The male protagonist is dead to protect her 2. The male protagonist is the ghost king 3. The male protagonist is the official boss 4. The male protagonist is a game boss 5. The female protagonist is dreaming... The male protagonist comes online too early. It's boring to guess all the ways. It's not as fun as the memory of him appearing on the other side of the hole in the wall and hanging people.
There is a certain reason why your work is not rated well! There is no turning point in the story of Liu Piaopiao and Yan Xiaoman. There is no distinction between female protagonist, female supporting role, male protagonist and male supporting role.
The first part is okay. The heroine is quite lively alone with her friends, and the writing is quite novel. The latter part is not as emotional as a running account, and the part about Li Zhaodi seems to be watered down. What does it have to do with the heroine? Yan Xiaoman's descriptions are more vivid than the female protagonist... In addition, the male protagonist came online too early, especially the voice in that dream. I can think of the male protagonist's lines: 1. The male protagonist is dead to protect her 2. The male protagonist is the ghost king 3. The male protagonist is the official boss 4. The male protagonist is a game boss 5. The female protagonist is dreaming... The male protagonist comes online too early. It's boring to guess all the ways. It's not as fun as the memory of him appearing on the other side of the hole in the wall and hanging people.
There is a certain reason why your work is not rated well! There is no turning point in the story of Liu Piaopiao and Yan Xiaoman. There is no distinction between female protagonist, female supporting role, male protagonist and male supporting role.