Traveling Through Time to Cultivate Immortality, I Became Senior Sister Ye Qiao

It's so good-looking. The characters of Ye Qiao, Mu Chongxi and several senior brothers are all well preserved. Moreover, Shen Sui'an also came from time travel and has the same resemblance to Ye Qiao.

It's really good-looking, I think it's the best among fanfics, the plot is not so procrastinating, everyone and the author have all the ideas, the front and back are very novel, and I don't go out of my way to steal Ye Qiao's halo, and my friendship with Ye Qiao makes me very envious. The characters are all online and very interesting, and the heroine's character is very interesting to me. She is as cute as a black sesame glutinous rice ball. But what I didn't expect is that the heroine is a killer. I was attracted by it immediately, but it may be difficult to write later. The CP is also very touching. I love it. I love it. I like it more. Please write more. The author is also very active. Almost every review has been praised, and some even commented. This book also made me tie it overnight, but looking at these foreshadowings, it seems that there is a big knife behind it, so I can't judge it. Finally, can you really not write 100,000 words a day? [Shy][shy][shy]

It's really great. It's the first time I've ever seen such a good fanfic about Ye Qiao. The author's writing is very to my liking. I hope the author can insist on finishing this book, please! [Shy]

This book is really great. Suiko and Qiaoqiao have a really good relationship. It's really great! Ye Qinghan is also very easy to talk to!

Looks good! The sisterly relationship between Shen Sui'an and Ye Qiao is really well written and very easy to relate to! Both of them regard each other as good sisters. Although they like to make fun of each other, they really care about each other. Ye Qiao has a senior sister who dotes on her - Shen Sui'an (although she doesn't say it, Sui Zi still dotes on Qiao Qiao. For example, when she sees Qiao Qiao sleeping, she will ask the master not to disturb her because she is very tired; and when others act like a monster, Qiao Qiao doesn't care and ignores them, but Sui Zi can't stand Qiao Qiao being a little wronged!). Of course, Shen Sui'an is also a succubus. Shen Sui'an: Just breathe. Ye Qinghan: What a great trick! (I fell in love with her as soon as I met her. The first comment I made on Suizi was that she was extremely talented and the pride of heaven) Send a review to support Dada, come on Dada!

It's super good-looking. Believe me, you won't lose money if you invest in it. It makes you laugh and laugh. It's really super good-looking! ! ! Second brush, it's really beautiful and not boring (in my opinion)

It's really good to read, the plot is logical, and the characters are not abrupt. Although there are still some shortcomings in the language, it is really good to read, much better than most books. I just want to ask the author, do you have a gift channel? Can't find where to send it?

The article is very interesting. If you have never read it, I highly recommend it. The descriptions of the characters in it are particularly vivid, unlike some fan fiction that only highlights the protagonist and ignores the characteristics of the original work. In order to highlight the protagonist, the original characters are even treated as paper figures, without the charm of the characters themselves. But this article portrays each person's image in such a specific way that people can't help but get immersed in it and understand the charm of the character itself. The characters in it are very humane, very funny, full of emotional twists and turns, but very beautiful! ! All in all, this article is very good-looking and very good. I highly recommend reading [AM][AM] More than 6 hours of reading, really fidelity

Oh, someone came back and thought you had forgotten this book. [Laugh][smile]

The heroine is so venomous. I really like this character. The plot is also very interesting. I hope the author can write more interactive plots between the male and female protagonists.

I love the heroine so much, Qiaoqiao is so cute. The interaction between Sui An and Ye Qinghan is also super sweet, respecting the original work and having a lively style. Big cheers for the author! I love your books so much [adoration] I'm kind of expecting the heroine to fall off her horse [laughing]

Author Baby, your writing is so beautiful! Can you give me an update? I still want to read it. Please author! This chapter is generally good, actually better. I really like this article. It's so good. I've wanted to read this kind of novel for a long time! It's a pity that it didn't happen before. I beg the author not to make any more paragraphs. 😉😊[Shy]

It's super good-looking. The characters in the article are not OOC at all. The author has a sense of life. I really like the casual character who is happy with the situation, but he can't be carefree if he has inner demons. The reaction is also very real (I don't know how to put it)

The characters are vivid and in line with the original design. The heroine has a lot of personality. So pretty, Sui Zi and Qiao Qiao have the same smell, and they are geniuses, right?

I read it a long time ago, and now I came back and read it again. It's really good, and it suits my taste. Suiko's interactions with everyone are very interesting and harmonious. It's not bad. This is the best book I've ever read. I love it. Come and read it! Delicious and shocking[Adoration]

I really like this kind of fanfic, especially the one that has the same affinity with the main character. This book just meets my requirements. It's so good-looking, and it's also good for eating sugar! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Come on, the author, the writing is super good. Even as an adult as you, I feel inferior. Do you dare to update 100 chapters in one go? It scares me to death [Sending a heart] [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss] Dad, I hope you succeed... [Send heart]

The author is really great! ! ! I can't tell that this was written by a junior high school student. I didn't feel that the addition of the emotional scene was too abrupt. Instead, it allowed me to see another side of Ye Qinghan. The Chinese Valentine's Day extra is also very well written. Can you please update it?

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I love it so much

I think this is the best fanfic of Ye Qiao. It is very consistent with the original work. It is really beautiful! ! ! Don't stop updating T^T The author is becoming more and more popular. I have seen it recommended on the homepage several times. Why do I always feel an indescribable sense of relief [laughs]

A very good book, highly recommended!!!

It's really good-looking, I haven't seen this kind of Ye Qiao fanfic for a long time [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Very nice. Ye Qiao's character is consistent with the original work. [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][adoration]

There is a saying in "Shangshu": "If you do not be cautious and meticulous, you will eventually suffer from great virtue." It means that if you don't pay attention to the cultivation of small details, you will eventually hurt your moral integrity. And "Hongmen Banquet" says: "When doing great things, you don't care about details, and when you do great things, you don't hesitate to make small concessions." It means that when you do big things, you don't need to pay attention to the minutiae, and when you do big things, you don't need to avoid small criticisms.

How can I put it? I feel terrible. I don't know this woman, but what she wrote is all about my favorite food. There is no OOC in the characters, and the plots are intertwined and closely connected. All I can say is awesome! !

It's very delicious. Everyone's characters are not too funny, and the author's own plot is also very good. In short, it's very delicious [Blow kiss]

The dialogue is very natural, and as a fanfic, each character is still clearly portrayed, and there is no pure plot. Even the originality is remarkable, and the protagonist has a distinct personality, and there is no prioritization, so you, the author, are awesome

Ahhhh, [licking the screen] It looks good! [Licking the screen] So annoying! [Licking screen] So much love! [Explore] Babies, feel free to rush. The author of [Send Heart] is very good, and the writing of [Send Heart] is also very beautiful. [Congratulations] Each chapter has warnings about some of the subtle points that some people may have, so you can skip it, and don't worry about not understanding it after skipping. It will have the same plot as the original work, so don't worry, but it's really good to read! [Lick screen]

It's really good-looking, and the character of the heroine is not deliberately blurred. It's very funny. Suizi and Qiaoqiao are both very strong, funny, and have a certain sadistic point. But I like Suizi and Ye Qinghan's ambiguous relationship, and I don't want Suizi to have cp.

This book is really good to read, and it is a very qualified fanfic. Many fanfics are in it, like Goldfinger, random changes to the plot, etc. However, it can be clearly seen that our protagonist and the original protagonist group are two-line. The original protagonist group still follows the original development route, getting into trouble, upgrading and learning, etc. Our heroine is constantly making progress without conflicting with this line. It is really very good-looking.