(Don’t look, don’t look!) [Two male leads + older master and younger disciple + a touch of ensemble cast + old-school melodrama + sweetness and angst + happy ending]
“Come with me, and I’ll promise you a life free from worry,” Lou Zhishi said coolly.
The young man looked up. His foxlike eyes were long and slanted at the corners, their shifting gaze utterly bewitching. His pale lips curled into a smile, sweet and harmless. “Immortal Lord, you are as pure as the moon and as gentle as the breeze. A Yu could not ask for more.”
The Snow-Dusted Immortal Lord of the Floating Magpie Peak brought home a “sickly invalid” from the mortal city of Yudu. He coughed up blood every few steps and fainted every few more.
He taught him swordsmanship, yet stopped when his strength ran out.
He taught him cultivation techniques, yet helped clear his meridians whenever he struggled to catch his breath.
He took him stargazing, yet drew him into his arms whenever he shivered.
He led him through formations, yet held one end of a red thread whenever he tottered on the verge of collapse.
But a lifetime was always too short. On the day he no longer had the strength even to swallow back his blood, the young man’s clothes were soaked scarlet. Clutching the hem of the aloof Immortal Lord’s robe, he asked, “Master… was there ever even one moment when you felt something for me?”
The Immortal Lord said nothing. But after his disciple closed his eyes, his Dao Heart crumbled, and he personally set fire to the merciless cultivation path he had practiced for years.
When they met again, the young man had become the exalted young lord of the Demon Abyss, worshipped by thousands. He was still frail and sickly, but no longer willing to call him “Master.”
“What is it, Immortal Lord? Want to kill me again?” Yu Jin’s eyes were red at the corners. He gave a mocking smile and coughed blood into his hands.
The Immortal Lord’s voice was so hoarse the words barely came out. “This time… I’ll protect you.”
What Yu Jin didn’t know was that Lou Zhishi had hidden a life-sharing talisman in the sleeve Yu Jin had once clung to with the last of his strength.
The merciless path shattered; the life-sharing pact was sealed.
The teacher wrote great!! The literary talent is particularly good (for example, when describing the emotions of a subject who finds himself against one another: "But the budding emotions of a young man are like a flame burning quietly under the ice, with a burning heat and a panic that cannot be tolerated in the world, silently starting a prairie fire in this eternal silence."), And the characters are very vivid and vivid⌯˃ ᵕ ˂⌯The plot is also very attractive, and the teacher is very diligent in updating, at least twice a day, and each chapter is more than 2,000 words, so you won't lose money if you invest in it! =⩌⩊⩌=
Ahhh! I met the love letter in my dream!! Great updates and super diligent! And the writing style is also very good. Although sometimes the words are a little unnecessary, but it is understandable. After all, it is a common problem for newcomers. It has indeed improved a lot in the future, and it is a great example of an author who is super obedient. I really like Master's words, "If it's not mine, how can I give it to you?" Master is very restrained, and Ajin is a very sensitive little pitiful person who needs a lot of security, so she feels that even though Master has given her a name, she still doesn't like her 🥺 "Jin is a selfish gift given to him by Lou Zhishi." "May the young man break out of the quagmire and have a bright future." Who knew "Yu Shi" really poked me!! What Master actually wants to say is "Yu Shi"... Young lovers, don't be abusive, hurry up and get sweet 😢😢😢😢😢
The author's sick and weak article completely touched my sexual ps. It looks good, and the writing is really good. The writing is so good, so sad, but if you like to read it 💕 💕 💕 💕 The ending is good [admiration] Lou Zhishi and Yu Jin are happy 99 😢 😢 😢 I wish to win the heart of the same person and never be separated, you two are happy 99 [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] I will look at the chapters I haven't read before. The author's other book of Sickly Immortal King is also very good. I love the author's sickly writing. The author is really good at writing this kind of emotion. He writes really well and touches people's hearts ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
I really like the author's book ~ 🥰 [Admiration] It's just a bit sadistic, two poor little bitter gourds 😢 🥺
I like it, it's very beautiful, but it's so cruel. It's cruel to both the body and the mind. I'm almost immune to knives 😢 I hope the author will continue to work hard. I support you [please update]
The writing is very good! Watching it with the music of "Love" will give you a wonderful feeling! I wrote this after reading the chapter between apprentice and master. I look forward to maintaining it in subsequent updates🤓☝🏼
The writing is very good, the sentence structure is compact and easy to understand, the characters are novel, and the plot has ups and downs, but it is a bit sadistic. Overall, it is good. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
It's well written, but a bit cruel
It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very delicate and the emotions are well created.