(Don't look, don't look!) [Two male protagonists + master and apprentice years + micro group portrait + ancient bloody + sweet and sadistic HE]
"Come with me and I will keep you safe for the rest of your life." Lou Zhashi said indifferently.
The young man raised his head, with a pair of fox eyes that were long and narrow at the end, and the eyes were full of captivating eyes. His pale lips were slightly hooked, and he smiled innocently and harmlessly, "Immortal Lord, the moon is bright and the breeze is refreshing, Ayu can only ask for it."
The Jingxue Immortal Lord on the top of the floating magpie took back a "medicine jar" from Yudu, the world of fireworks. He coughed up blood after taking three steps, and fainted after taking five steps.
He taught him sword practice, but stopped when he was exhausted;
He taught him mental techniques, and helped him clear his meridians when he was suffering from shortness of breath;
He took him stargazing, but held him in his arms when he was shivering;
He led him to break the formation, but when he was teetering, he tugged at one end of the red thread.
But life is too short after all, and on the day when even the strength to swallow the blood is exhausted, the bright red clothes are soaked, and the young man clutches the corners of the cold immortal robe and asks, "Master... Has there ever been a moment when your mortal heart was moved for me?"
The Immortal Master was silent, but after his apprentice closed his eyes, his Taoist heart collapsed, and he burned the ruthless Tao that he had practiced for many years with his own hands.
When we met again, the young man was already the lofty young master of Moyuan, who was kowtowed by thousands of people. He still looked like his sick and torn bones, but he refused to call him "Master" again.
"Why, the Immortal Lord wants to kill me again?" Yu Jin's eyes were red, she smiled sarcastically, and coughed out blood on her hands.
Immortal Lord's voice was so hoarse that he couldn't form any words, "This time... I will protect you."
What Yu Jin didn't know was that Lou Zhishi hid a life-saving talisman in the cuff that he had grabbed with all his strength.
The ruthless road is broken, and the same fate is bound together.
Reader comments
The teacher wrote great! ! The literary talent is particularly good (for example, when describing the emotions of a subject who finds himself against one another: "But the budding emotions of a young man are like a flame burning quietly under the ice, with a burning heat and a panic that cannot be tolerated in the world, silently starting a prairie fire in this eternal silence."), And the characters are very vivid and vivid⌯˃ ᵕ ˂⌯The plot is also very attractive, and the teacher is very diligent in updating, at least twice a day, and each chapter is more than 2,000 words, so you won't lose money if you invest in it! =⩌⩊⩌=
Ahhh! I met the love letter in my dream! ! Great updates and super diligent! And the writing style is also very good. Although sometimes the words are a little unnecessary, but it is understandable. After all, it is a common problem for newcomers. It has indeed improved a lot in the future, and it is a great example of an author who is super obedient. I really like Master's words, "If it's not mine, how can I give it to you?" Master is very restrained, and Ajin is a very sensitive little pitiful person who needs a lot of security, so she feels that even though Master has given her a name, she still doesn't like her [I'm about to cry]
"Jin is a selfish gift given to him by Lou Zhishi."
"May the young man break out of the quagmire and have a bright future."
Who knew "Yu Shi" really poked me! ! What Master actually wants to say is "Yu Shi"...
Young lovers, don't be abusive, hurry up and get sweet [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]
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Lou Zhishi and Yu Jin are happy 99 [crying] [crying] [crying] I wish to win the heart of the same person and never be separated, you two are happy 99 [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] I will look at the chapters I haven't read before. The author's other book of Sickly Immortal King is also very good. I love the author's sickly writing. The author is really good at writing this kind of emotion. He writes really well and touches people's hearts [love] [love] [love]
I really like the author's book ~ [Adoration] [Admiration]
It's just a bit sadistic, two poor little bitter gourds [crying] [almost crying]
I like it, it's very beautiful, but it's so cruel. It's cruel to both the body and the mind. I'm almost immune to knives [crying] I hope the author will continue to work hard. I support you [please update]
The writing is very good! Watching it with the music of "Love" will give you a wonderful feeling! I wrote this after reading the chapter between apprentice and master. I look forward to maintaining it in subsequent updates🤓☝🏼
The writing is very good, the sentence structure is compact and easy to understand, the characters are novel, and the plot has ups and downs, but it is a bit sadistic. Overall, it is good. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
It's well written, but a bit cruel
It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very delicate and the emotions are well created.
The teacher wrote great! ! The literary talent is particularly good (for example, when describing the emotions of a subject who finds himself against one another: "But the budding emotions of a young man are like a flame burning quietly under the ice, with a burning heat and a panic that cannot be tolerated in the world, silently starting a prairie fire in this eternal silence."), And the characters are very vivid and vivid⌯˃ ᵕ ˂⌯The plot is also very attractive, and the teacher is very diligent in updating, at least twice a day, and each chapter is more than 2,000 words, so you won't lose money if you invest in it! =⩌⩊⩌=
Ahhh! I met the love letter in my dream! ! Great updates and super diligent! And the writing style is also very good. Although sometimes the words are a little unnecessary, but it is understandable. After all, it is a common problem for newcomers. It has indeed improved a lot in the future, and it is a great example of an author who is super obedient. I really like Master's words, "If it's not mine, how can I give it to you?" Master is very restrained, and Ajin is a very sensitive little pitiful person who needs a lot of security, so she feels that even though Master has given her a name, she still doesn't like her [I'm about to cry] "Jin is a selfish gift given to him by Lou Zhishi." "May the young man break out of the quagmire and have a bright future." Who knew "Yu Shi" really poked me! ! What Master actually wants to say is "Yu Shi"... Young lovers, don't be abusive, hurry up and get sweet [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]
The author's sick and weak article completely touched my sexual ps. It looks good, and the writing is really good. The writing is so good, so sad, but if you like to read it [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The ending is good [admiration] Lou Zhishi and Yu Jin are happy 99 [crying] [crying] [crying] I wish to win the heart of the same person and never be separated, you two are happy 99 [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] I will look at the chapters I haven't read before. The author's other book of Sickly Immortal King is also very good. I love the author's sickly writing. The author is really good at writing this kind of emotion. He writes really well and touches people's hearts [love] [love] [love]
I really like the author's book ~ [Adoration] [Admiration] It's just a bit sadistic, two poor little bitter gourds [crying] [almost crying]
I like it, it's very beautiful, but it's so cruel. It's cruel to both the body and the mind. I'm almost immune to knives [crying] I hope the author will continue to work hard. I support you [please update]
The writing is very good! Watching it with the music of "Love" will give you a wonderful feeling! I wrote this after reading the chapter between apprentice and master. I look forward to maintaining it in subsequent updates🤓☝🏼
The writing is very good, the sentence structure is compact and easy to understand, the characters are novel, and the plot has ups and downs, but it is a bit sadistic. Overall, it is good. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
It's well written, but a bit cruel
It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very delicate and the emotions are well created.