Curse Back: Shir Has a Sister

It's good-looking. The heroine is a woman disguised as a man. Her relationship with Shi'er is well written. She's known WTW since she was a child, and the interaction between them is also well-written. The heroine is also quite strong. She has awakened the Ten Shadows and is also a magic weapon master. Overall, it's very good-looking and can be accepted in private settings. [Love][Love][Love][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

The heroine is Shir's younger sister. She has a personality that I like and she is very strong. The one who awakened is the Jukage method, but it is different from Megumin's usage. She has more, CP Gojo Satoru. The two have known each other since they were young. I think it is very sweet.

It's so beautiful. Teacher, please work harder🌚💅. I want to ask if the heroine knows that she is actually a girl. Also, when will Gojo Satoru know that the heroine is actually a girl?

There are no problems with the writing style, logical thinking, and perspective switching. It's just that there are too many private settings, so many things that have been directly changed. For example, how can I say the birth of Megumi Fushiguro? Although this novel has cured many regrets, it has fundamentally changed, which makes me feel like I have rewritten regretful articles without reading Spells of Return. Instead, the fanfic is about reading the second creation. The person is still the same person, but he has directly changed many of his experiences, and then his personality is still a bit like the original one. It feels a bit weird, but it is not obvious. The author's writing is really very special. It's very powerful, and it was directly integrated, so there was no obvious strange feeling, and it didn't make me feel OOC, but I still care about Fushiguro Megumi's birth (I didn't see the later part, just a guess) because here Fushiguro Megumi may become an ordinary brother, and Tsumiko may become a younger sister, a magician. There is a sense of discomfort that the inherent impression has been changed, and I am really curious, were the two of them adults when they met Shiji? ! ! And Rainbow Pig Pig is Mu Qiang (seems like)? Did the protagonist not trigger this after fighting so many times and showing so many times? But the author's writing style is really good.

Wow, I just realized I didn't comment. Super pretty! For other serious fans who throw lunch boxes, this book has not yet developed into a lunch box~ The author's style is really rare and obvious. It was so good that I devoured three bowls of rice, fainted, fell asleep, woke up, and read another three hundred chapters. Then I went crazy for you, then fainted and was taken to the hospital for surgery. When I woke up, I lost my memory and felt a strong sense of faith. It wasn't until I read this book again that my heart settled! It's so beautiful. The author must be safe and don't be tired or idle. I also wish readers a happy life.

I was really surprised to read a good book. I feel that the writing and plot are very good (I haven't read Spell Return, so I don't understand OOC). It was very smooth to read. I am looking forward to the author's plot after graduation. The only flaw that I feel is not a shortcoming (I think) is that I almost can't remember that the protagonist is a girl.

The first part is pretty good, but the second part may start to get a little sloppy due to lack of imagination. The author definitely didn't write an outline, but his mentality is very good and he wrote it very carefully. It's a slow-paced article (only one character, Gojo Satoru, is known in the plot of more than a hundred chapters) The suggestions are as follows - Let's sort out Koji's character (the fullness of the protagonist in the following is obviously not as three-dimensional as in the previous article); Design more characteristics of the protagonist (the description should not be complicated, just focus on one point - for example, since it is written that Koji is a master of magic tools, her abilities must be reflected, emmm, you can refer to the Holy Grail (I don't know which series this is, I saw from other articles that there are various functions of the treasure)); Figure out the style of this article (I summarized the daily funny growth, if the author is also biased in this way, funny dialogue and behavior will be the main focus, growth is the timeline, and daily life is the background.) Regarding the small theater (I understand it to be what the author wants to complain about, because the article is not in the first person, so it is expressed in the form of a small theater), the summary is - everything we wanted to complain about was finished by you, so the author has no comments. Not enough imagination—— 1. Look at your previous articles and grasp the rhythm of the good parts you wrote. 2. Read funny articles and learn from them Let me reiterate the most important thing! 1. Characterization of the protagonist, the protagonist is the center! ! Add more dialogue descriptions (Both Satoru and Koji are talkative people), famous scenes and other details (if you want to portray growth, you must be thoughtful, if you want to portray strength, you must reflect it in details rather than big events, if you want to portray a funny and relaxed atmosphere, see point 2 below) 2. You have already written fan fiction, and you are so bold that you can twist the plot in any way you want, and even throw away some logic (except you, no one will read it too carefully!! Of course, the characters of Gojo Satoru and others cannot be too OOC) 3. Regarding the future, as the unavoidable plot of kicking lunch in fan fiction, don't think too much if you haven't written an outline. Let nature take its course and describe the protagonist well first, and then focus on the protagonist's behavior and inadvertently throw away the lunch (it depends on the protagonist's character, it is not absolute). -- Finish. (I also want to code φ(-ω-*), welcome to read my article~~) ps: I don't have enough imagination.

Hmm... How to put it, I think the writing is pretty good, the plot is a bit slow, and the characters' emotions are well handled, but why do I feel like no one is reading it? I think the combination of a female protagonist + getting married is too small, and few people can read it, especially marrying a man, and women don't read novels as often as men. I feel that this leads to poor data and ratings for this book, but it is indeed a good book. If you are not opposed to the above issues, I highly recommend reading it. [Laughing] But when I watch it, I always have the illusion that my cabbage is being eaten by a "pig" [face covering]

It's such a loving setting, daddy has mom and sister

Now the author is generating electricity purely out of love [face covering] Please support me

It's tied ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The writing is very good, the plot is also very good, and the small theater is also very interesting. The only drawback is that the small theater narration and various characters' psychology are too long and occupy a large proportion, which seems to be very separated from the main text and not very coherent. Also, the pace is a little slow, which is not very suitable for my taste. However, the author's writing is very good, and it can be seen that he is very attentive ❤️, come on! Wish it a hit!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's good to watch, the plot is good, and the setting is also good

The heroine and Gojo Satoru should be together well The author writes well, keep up the good work!

Come on, come on, work hard.

Oh, Yoxi is so pretty

I like it very much. The author writes quickly. The author writes this kind of article in a big way. It feels very suitable.

The book is very good, but a bit sparse. Recently, it has been updated daily. The main character Koji's brother is Shir, so I can't say it's good.