The Girl Band Rescued the Bullied Girl at the Beginning

A kind of primitive man traveled through time and space and came to my living room and used brain waves to ask me if I wanted to eat Tyrannosaurus Rex meat. By the way, he chewed up my TV and used it as a toothpick.

Please form a band with me, oh no! ▄█▀█●

It's quite interesting, but after reading the latest chapter, I feel like I can't write anything later. Are you going to expand the harem team? After all, Kurai's trousers have 0 progress but the favorability level is definitely high, and the little sister also has hope. This is the case for the second creation of the band. The content that can be written is to solve the problems of the band, then cultivate the relationship and open the Crystal Palace, then solve the problem of the fire in the Crystal Palace, and finally have a rest together.

Come on, big brother who writes about bands! ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

I must write novels for the rest of my life.

The writing is very good. I can tell that the writing style is a bit green, but the plot is connected smoothly and the characters are delicate and vivid. I think there is no poison at all so far. It can be regarded as an excellent work. The author is active and will actively correct mistakes when he sees them. The heroine is yet to be determined. I just hope to give Poch a little role [laughter]

Please be sure to write it down! Otherwise, Vadasi! Vadasi! !

Ah, I forgot to comment, but to be honest, the cover and title both feature a child girl. The author also said that there is no child girl in the heroine, but it is indeed very beautiful. Come on.

I still pay tribute to the big brother who writes band articles. Only when you try something yourself can you know how difficult it is. This makes me respect these people who dare to write their own stories. [Love]

I'll give it five stars. The book is still very interesting, but the author could try to make the dialogue between the characters more natural. As for the protagonist, I don't have much to say. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Write a lifetime novel!

You must work harder and keep writing.

Come on ah ah ah ah

You must write it down

Nice! It must be finished! [Sending Hearts]

Protagonist of Asashi

If you have a little girl like Momoxiang, you will keep up with her, right? [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's very to my liking and super pretty! ! !

I must keep writing it, it's so beautiful. Everyone has a bright future, this is the meaning of reading fan fiction [Sending my heart]

It's great and beautiful, at least among the band fics I've read, it can be ranked in the top three! !

Very delicately written

If it looks good, you must finish it.

Good, good, good, good

Please write a novel for the rest of your life!

I have to write it all my life [crying]

I think it's okay

Come on, as well as the author, you must finish it or not.

Author, you must write band articles for the rest of your life! [Cry]

It's a pretty good book, at least I like to read it. It's worth recommending [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

You must keep writing it! The big brother who writes novels!