At the Beginning, He Joined the Hehuan Sect and Was Pestered by Senior Sister Qing Leng.

It's very beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it! The senior sister is black sesame, not glutinous rice balls, and her appearance is very deceptive; the little junior sister who traveled through time is so cute! Super cute! She has a very good personality. In everyone's eyes, she is like a dish, and everyone wants to take a bite [face covering]. It seems like all the members are female, but there are a lot of them. There is love between master and apprentice, as well as between master and sister. The story description is interesting and the character interactions are very natural. Recommended recommended recommended! ! !

Beauty 1, who looks cold but is actually super sinister, and beauty 0, who is the purest and most benevolent natural beauty. Xie Changyin's performance is so smooth and natural. I haven't seen such a setting in a long time. The cp is so delicious! ! New plot of Zaohou! Moreover, the teacher's writing style is very good and the stories are also very interesting. The only shortcoming is that it is not enough for me to watch [I almost cry] Teacher, rice rice, hungry

Every female character is so attractive. I really like that all the characters in Lily are female. It feels reassuring and not awkward. There are a few minions who are not women, but there is no emphasis on the description. The highlight roles are women, no matter whether they are good or bad, they are very comfortable and there will be no embarrassment or the feeling of being in a drama. There is not much description of the appearance of all the female characters in the book (including the protagonist, and the rest of the characters are almost non-existent). All the words are reflected in the personality charm rather than the physical appearance, which makes it very comfortable to watch. The description of the appearance without having to look at the toes is really good. The plot is full of emotions, the plot is smooth, and the foreshadowing is well filled out, which is very interesting. Some parts are sad one second, and laugh out loud the next second. I would like to say that the transition at the end is particularly smooth, and the memories of the previous generation are so smooth. The writing is delicate and sweet, and it makes me twist and run wildly in bed in the middle of the night. There is absolutely no poisonous point at all, not even a little bit (some physical descriptions, or some words and actions, can easily be poisonous, but this book completely avoids it). How can I read such a good work for free [full] Finally. "The plots of this book are interlocking and suspenseful! The characters are all distinct, and their feelings will last until death! There are tenderness and sweetness that are heart-touching, as well as fierce conflicts that are thrilling! The layout is exquisite and foreshadows thousands of miles, making people admire the case and have endless aftertaste! You, you will know how good it is after reading it!" This passage in the book completely summarizes [full] Fortunately, I didn't read the reviews first and then read the book. Is there any problem with the protagonist's character split? ? ? From the beginning, I didn't think that the senior sister was a yandere or a s. Where did I get the idea that she was a yandere? ? Are you reading a book? Can someone who is possessive also be a yandere? ? The characters of junior sister, the words that impressed me the most in the article are "live" and "live". Junior sister just wants to live. When you are in love, do you have to fight for your partner? The first thing in her heart is herself, which is totally fine, and the first thing in her senior sister's heart is not her junior sister. (This is the relationship in the early stage, the senior sister said it personally, but in the later stage, I feel that the two people are no longer so clear about the first and the second. It is so simple. I love myself but I also love you. There is no conflict at all between loving myself and loving you.) The problem of character deviation, why do you think the junior sister must be the one in the lower position? What about a cute, well-behaved person? How could he be such a person who travels through books from another world, has such a high level of acceptance, and naturally and quickly integrates, living with heart and eyes full? Living is what she insists on from the beginning, even to the end. So I don't understand, why do you think junior sister is "white"? As for this SM issue, as soon as the relationship starts to show signs, the junior sister wants to control it (it's easy to understand, if you want to live and have a strong will, then you will definitely not be willing to be "passive") SM is not suitable to be included in this article. Let's talk about jokes and separate SM, but it must be divided. It doesn't go that far, and it won't be haha. The senior sister puts down her body and is even willing to be her furnace, all because she loves her. This is love, what does it have to do with anything else? Whether they are quarreling or getting along, aren't junior sisters always teasing the puppies? If you don't kiss her and just tease her, isn't that the fun of a young couple? [Aggrieved]

I finished reading it in one day. I didn't find the first part very enjoyable because most of the time the heroine was too weak and had to rely on her. Xie Qiqi was lacking in all seven emotions, and only showed bad taste, not very delicious. But! I was really happy when Ji attacked Xie later. I just have to clean it up like this and talk about it. Caregiver wheel 1 is the most fragrant (unfortunately, I only watched Xiao Ji attack once, and I rarely wrote about the part about playing with Xie). I completely understand Xiao Ji's strong sense of subjectivity. Even when I read the article, I like the main visual role and wish her success. Xie Changyin's later part of the story to make up for her childhood experiences was very good, making her emotional stupidity in the early stage a little more reasonable. But even if I replay the game, I won't think that Xie's initial malice towards Zhuang Wan and her ill intentions/coaxing/intimidation towards Xiao Ji are reasonable just because she has endured hardships. Xiao Ji hit her because she deserved it, so she took it. The young couple enjoyed playing it, it was delicious. For the character Xiaoji, I think the writing is really good. Although her combat power has never kept up, it at least shows a bit of opportunity as a heroine. Whether it was Scorpion Spirit, Lu An, Pluto, Xia Xiaowerewolf, or another Xiao Ji who came to help, they were all opportunities brought by herself. She used her own way to protect herself, and she did not lose her subjectivity in the process of pursuing life, which also warmed Xie Changyin. The old, weak, sick and disabled peaks were able to recover, their master became healthy, Zhuang Wan's eyebrows were straightened, and Xie Changyin's human and machine were repaired, all because of Xiao Ji's contribution. It is Xie Changyin's blessing to have Xiao Ji. Xie Changyin would admit it. She is willing to give her all, protect, care, and even devote herself to her lover. Xiaoji didn't treat her badly either. Taught Xie Chang's intonation without opening his mouth. Why were you unhappy in the early stage? Because Xiaoji, as the heroine, has never received the true love of the creator. At that time, I always felt that the author didn't love her enough. There are always too many misunderstandings. It was obvious that Zhuang Wan had given up all thoughts of refining Xiao Ji's medicine long ago, and she was a good teacher and nanny who really loved her children. But when things happened again and again, they were separated by Xie Changyin intentionally or unintentionally. (No matter what reasons Xie Changyin has for adhering to Master and hating Zhuang Wan, for Zhuang Wan, it is an unforeseen disaster) The original heroine Little Werewolf was also a sincere person who was kind to Xiao Ji, but she was also separated from Xie Changyin by the plot. Various misunderstandings prevented Xiao Ji from having a safe friend in the early stage. The same goes for Lu An. When Lu An was beaten by Xie Changyin, the author also explained at the end that Lu An deserved the beating. It didn't make me feel happy that Xie Changyin protected his wife. Instead, it made me feel more and more pitiful for Xiao Ji. In such a large sect, there is no one who is sincere/there are barriers between sincere people The eldest sister is bloodthirsty, covets her body, has a weak mind, has a bad taste, loves to lie, tells half-truths, and has a perverted mind. The second senior sister wanted to use herself to refine the medicine (for a moment), but she was separated by Xie Changyin after she had finished it. The master is doing well but is running out of electricity. The poor people on the mountain can't even give Xiao Ji a piece of clothing. I also borrowed money from Xie Changyin and owed Xie Changyin money. Generally, when the protagonist exchanges treasures in the attic, he will get a great opportunity with a small fortune. What our Xiaoji got was a useless bead at first to increase his favorability. (I know that the positioning and love setting in the later stage is not bad, but it is really frustrating not to add combat power to the protagonist) Don't say don't look for strong women in love stories, Xiao Ji hopes to become strong. She doesn't want to be trapped in the protection of ice, she doesn't like being a canary, she will find a way to return the favor, and she wants to live well. So Xiaoji's counterattack even has a bit of an s0/s1 trend, which is really cool. I have no objection to Xie Changyin's role. There is a carrot in the brain, but there is no muscle, and it is stoned and stupid. I understand how bad she was in the early stage. I didn't particularly like her in the early stage because she was not confused or unintentional, but deliberately enjoyed Xiaoji's tears, panic, dependence, and seduced the girl's body. It wasn't until Xiao Ji was bitten on the neck and disappointed, and Xie Changyin was in a trance, hiding, obediently being beaten, and clingy, that they looked like a young couple. Abusing the heroine is a common routine. A cool novel can't always be happy. Only when the injuries are gently put aside will you know whether the protagonist is taken seriously. Xiaoji's forgiveness was because she was not really hurt. I suffered more emotional setbacks. I was frightened, cheated, and bitten, and I was disappointed at the time. It would be better to make it clear that Xie Changyin was just bloodthirsty and would not hurt anyone. Xiaoji's gentle letting go was a sign of letting go in her heart, and she also slowly guided Xie Changyin to let go. She calls and controls Xie Changyin, which makes me feel good and Xie Changyin feels good too. Xie Changyin likes it. Xie Changyin's cultivation into adulthood is entirely due to Xiao Ji's contribution. I just love the heroine. Thoughts on Xie Changyin. Xie Changyin was miserable when she was a child, so miserable that I forgave her for her stupidity in the past. But she has people who love her, her master loves her, her mother loves her, her sister loves her, Xiao Ji loves her, and the author also loves her. They give her the talent to cultivate as easily as drinking water. She walks sideways in the sect, is the little elder, and is the one she wants to spend the rest of her life with most. She was still so miserable. She was kidnapped at the age of three and suffered for ten years, but she couldn't cry anymore. Such a poor little baby. Master is also a nanny. A skinny thirteen-year-old named Xie Changyin, who can only crawl, speak, or write, is raised to look like a human and a dog, so why not love him? Even his wife had to submit to the love of her eldest daughter, and even though Zhuang Wan was almost killed, she was only grounded. (It's hard to be a stepmother) Xie Changyin welcomed another person who loved her. Xiao Jihui burst into tears after hearing about her childhood. In order to survive, Xiaoji gave Xie Changyin an eye in another world. Xiaoji also loves Xie Changyin. Love very much. Fate, wonderful beyond words.

I felt very comfortable reading the whole story. The story was very complete and refreshing. . I couldn't get Zhuang Yun's pair at first, but the later extras completely changed my mind. It's a truly super invincible and delicious pair of master and apprentice! ! The author's writing style is also one of the few that I admire and feel comfortable reading. Hey, I just hope to see more creations. ) Os I like Zhuang and Yun the most after reading the whole article. The characterization is super awesome. .

This is a slow-burning book, and the protagonist's emotional arc may be slow, but it's still interesting. The first thing I do when I get home every week is read this novel. Anyway, this novel inexplicably pokes me. And the improvement of the protagonist's cultivation is relatively normal. It's not like other immortal cultivation novels in the photo album, where the cultivation speed increases very, very, very fast. And as for the plot, some of the content is very novel and I have never seen it before. Then his logic is also very smooth, interlocking [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It contains a lot of femininity, the words are female-conscious, and the viewing experience is comfortable. At first, I thought it was a rustic theme, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly exciting. Some of the flaws were rounded up, and the two heroines were very interesting, and they actually knew how to fight each other. The heroine Nalan is very casual and handsome. She has a very charming personality and her senior sister is not bad either. The second volume of the mother group is better to watch, and it doesn't matter if you read it alone. In the third volume, the senior sister is a little in love with her master. It is more reasonable to love her master than the heroine, but it is not harmful. . . It's just that the randomly refreshed leg hair in this book is a bit scary, but it's harmless

It's okay, the writing is light, it can be regarded as one of the two heroines, and the emotional line is also well written. It's just that the emotional line after the hundredth chapter always felt weird, the heroine's character always felt a bit broken, she suddenly became mature and sinister, and the senior sister's yandere character was also inexplicably weakened. Of course, there may be changes brought about by two years, I have nothing to say about this. Anyway, I finished it in one sitting in the middle of the night, or even stayed up all night. When I watched it in the middle of the night, I always felt a sense of separation, as if two people had been taken away from each other. I always felt a little uncomfortable while watching it. . I thought Lu An would arrange a Shura field, but in the end the author probably wanted to force the situation and arranged a deputy CP for her. As a result, her relationship with the heroine was a bit off-putting. If you only look at the first hundred chapters, it is indeed well written and can be written without overthinking. The characters such as Lu An are also well written. The other pair of secondary characters surprised me. The master-student relationship is very good at any time. You can read the later chapters if you don't mind the character design. After all, there are very few female protagonists in Tomato nowadays, so it's good to write it to this level. In the end, it's just my opinion. It's purely subjective. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

This author is awesome. Thunder is so good. Lily is awesome. I finished reading a novel in three days. I read it when I wake up. I read it even when my eyes are squinted due to sleepiness. I also read it when I take a break from work. What I saw was a lingering thought in my heart. Is Lily awesome? The characters have distinct personalities, including love and hate, as well as swings. The author's literary talent is also awesome. It's so beautiful that I feel refreshed and straight-eyed. People who read it are alive and refreshed. I don't feel anxious anymore. I don't think too much about it. I just want to read Lily. This is the article I have given the highest evaluation in all the years of exploring Lily.

This book is so good, there are no flaws throughout, my god, and the plot is also very well written. The author writes emotions very delicately, and the characters in it feel very full. Oh my god, it is really, very good, because I am in the series. This is my favorite novel so far. I really don't have any flaws in any of it. I almost cried while reading it. The plot is very smooth and coherent, and I feel very comfortable right away. Moreover, the heroine is not stupid at all, and the senior sister is really amazing. Please hurry up and read it, okay? Really hurry up and read it, I really like this book so much Why does this book only have a score of 9.2? Such a good book deserves 10 points, oh my god

That's right, there is no male supporting role, the plot is not formulaic, and it is right to attack each other. Although the senior sister is a common cold-faced and paranoid dog type, she is portrayed in a non-greasy and non-offensive manner, and the mouthless one is not annoying. The emotional progression and dependence are also reasonable, and the character can stand up. Although the early progress seems to be fast, it is clearly explained and there is no weird feeling of speed racing. The heroine is not a pure white flower character, who dares to love and hate, has real interests, is passionate, has her own growth path, and is not a purely cute accessory with golden fingers. There is no situation of being led around by others in the article. Instead, he is the emotional leader and will guide the younger generation to form a healthy emotional relationship. This kind of independent and defiant protagonist is particularly charming [sending my heart] At present, it seems that both parties are becoming equal in terms of emotional status and career status, and the evenly matched duo is very healthy. The only weird thing is the plot where the supporting character fakes his death to avoid voting. It still seems a bit incomprehensible now [covering face] that such a trivial matter is such a big deal. And there are a lot of foreshadowings at the moment. I hope I can control them one by one in the future, and don't give up. 🥺

The plots of this story are intertwined and suspenseful! The characters are all distinct and their feelings will last until death! There are both tenderness and sweetness that are heart-touching, as well as fierce conflicts that are thrilling! The layout is exquisite and foreshadows thousands of miles, which makes people marvel and have endless aftertaste! You, you will know how good it is when you see it! Will there be Zhuang Wan and Yun Heng in the extra episode [Love]

Full marks! Exploding lights! It's super beautiful. The characters are very full of personality. I feel like they are real people, not just books. I opened this book so much that I couldn't get enough [crying]. I really like the character Xie Changyin. Who knows? I think there is finally a book that combines plot and love. Everyone has their own things to do. It feels like falling in love while doing it [laughs]

It's super, super good-looking. Every character in it is very lively and lively. The smart and cute junior sister is cold on the outside, the senior sister is soft on the inside, I feel sorry for the senior sister's experiences when she was a child, and the evil Qingyuan... In short, I really like this short article [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

A good warm and funny article, the writing is smooth, the plot is not procrastinating, the logic is self-consistent, the writing style is spiritual, and the details are full of ingenuity. It's hard to believe that this is the author's first novel. Personally, I don't think it has any bad points. The slight drawback is that many details are taken care of very well, but the overall rhythm is a bit unsmooth. Especially after the main plot is introduced to the life of the second female lead, the growth of the first female protagonist suddenly stops. The other supporting characters are just to promote the main plot to set off the protagonist, which is a bit thin. The ending is a little rushed. But it's already good! I'm still very happy to see such thoughtful and spiritual articles written by newcomers like this in the current Lily Circle environment ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა! Personal rating: 8 (out of 10), looking forward to future works

This novel really attracted me. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the writing is delicate and beautiful, and the characters have rich emotions. It always seemed like fresh life appeared in front of my eyes. I saw the growth of the little junior sister step by step, and the transformation of the senior sister bit by bit. I really liked the scene where the three of us were practicing outside when Master was young. Her gentle, indifferent and polite character really struck a chord with me. She really seemed to be a god-like figure, making people feel at ease every time she appeared. The senior sister's childhood was miserable. She was abused, tortured, and experienced family separation. Even after the second junior sister came, she was still afraid that she would be abandoned by her master. It is really a very good result that she turned into her final appearance.

It looks good, it looks good, all the settings are perfect to hit my xp. It's so cool to sink in when I'm awake. I feel the speed is very fast. This also makes me happy. It's so cool.

Nice! ! ! The author's writing style is super good. I'm looking forward to the new article. I haven't seen enough of the extras [crying] The content of the article is twists and turns, interesting, and very attractive (I read thousands of chapters in one afternoon, and every couple in it was very affectionate [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]). Although the process is a little sad, the ending is very happy (very suitable for a glassy heart like me [awkward laugh]). The foreshadowing in it is very good, and it is interlocking. It is the best among the many online articles I have read [like] [like] [like] It is amazing! ! !

It's really good-looking and I love it. In fact, in Tomato, many of the stories about two female protagonists cultivating immortals are based on such a setting. Like the author, there are very few people who actually write about the process of cultivating immortals. The senior sister is also very interesting. I just don't know if the plot will speed up in the later period. The author needs to work harder (one of the saddest things in life is that the novel you like is being serialized [I'm about to cry])

The most delicious Quannubai I have ever eaten. You can see the steady emotional changes between each pair of CPs. It is a very delicate and easy-to-knit love. The tension between the heroines is full. I have never read a novel before, but this is the only one I have finished reading without feeling any discomfort. It is really delicious! It's also very enjoyable to read about women. There are no stereotypes, only women with all kinds of different personalities, women who repay a favor, selfless dedication, and women who do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. They all live vividly in this book. If possible, I hope to see more and better works by the author's sister! ><Hungry, hungry!

I like Yun Heng so much [crying] Master is indifferent and gentle, like the spring wind. How can someone be so charming? Xie Lan 99, Yun Wan 99, Lian Jing 99 The development of the protagonist's emotional line is a little slow in the front, but it gets better and better as you watch the later scenes. It's super cool and highly recommended! The growth of the protagonist is real and touching, and the characterization is delicate, making people often smile when reading [blowing kiss] It's rare to feel like you're quitting after reading a novel. This one is really beautiful, gripping, emotionally delicate and healing. Woohoo, everyone in the other world must be well. Os: I'm really happy to see Master's lingering body getting better little by little. The ending is completely innocuous and so healing! ! Good review [shy]

It's quite good-looking, clearly organized and written fluently. However, the Second Senior Sister and the Master are not mentioned much. Fortunately, the Second Senior Sister has appeared a few times, and the Master has not been missed in more than 40 chapters! I hope that the second senior sister and the master can rewrite the ending of the original book well!

The prude senior sisterⅹthe innocent junior sister, I like it so much, I like it so much [Adoration]

It's very nice [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] There's something about the senior sister's setting, the little junior sister is simple but not an idiot [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

I feel that this is one of the few novels about two female protagonists cultivating immortals. It has delicate emotional descriptions, a grand world view, reasonable appeals for the characters, and most importantly, the author is educated. The words used in it are very appropriate and make people not feel like they are in a drama. Please read them all to me [Sending Hearts]

"The plots of this story are intertwined and suspenseful! The characters are all distinct, and their feelings will never change until death! There are tenderness and sweetness that are heart-touching, as well as fierce conflicts that are thrilling! The layout is exquisite and foreshadows thousands of miles, making people marvel at the case and have endless aftertaste! You, you will know how good it is after reading it!"

After reading the main text, let's give it a review first. There is really nothing cruel about it. Even though it describes the tragic past of the senior sister, I think it's okay because it's described by Fan Sheng in the third person. Moreover, the part where the three of them were making jokes was too sad [face covering]… If a fantasy world was used to make Xiao Ji immersed in the scene, I think it would be just fine. It's really cruel [Hey, so the author is very kind. Although there were some small misunderstandings or conflicts in the early stage, it's actually not bad. It's not a bad knife [those who have seen knives want to send the author a blade], so the author of this article is really good. Not only Xiao Xie Xiaoji is cute, but the supporting cast is also very cute [shy]

The writing is very good. The biggest feeling I have now is shock. I feel that the author Dasan Guanzheng has gone crazy. When Lu An was beaten, I did forget that she helped the heroine earlier because she encouraged the heroine to go to Qiluan Peak, which caused the heroine's pain. Many things seem to be ignored as long as they are related to lust (at least when I read the novel, this is the case). But the author answered this mistake and people listened. It made me realize that the heroine's pain cannot be erased by those desires. Even those of the same sex need to be faced up to. The author is really awesome! ! !

My little Doudou is the god Krass. Okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. Players are also very good, okay. It must be highly praised and supported. It is not rigid at all and ends the game directly. ! OK, I directly wish the author that one will get one, two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine. Anyway, it's really good, so go check it out. It's also extremely delicious. Well, I don't want to do anything every day, I just want to read this novel. The plot is smooth and the characters are wonderful without any idiosyncrasies or stereotypes, making people feel very comfortable. OK, there's also my favorite twin story, '͜' Doubao helped me generate sandwich cookies for the three of them😋

Probably the last batch I saw, I have no regrets at all😭😭😭 It is a rare and unique piece of writing that is all online in terms of writing style, plot, and emotional lines. It knows how to recycle all the foreshadowings, the logic is clear, the plot rhythm is compact and not abrupt at all, the picture is strong and easy to read, and there is no fancy wording. It tells a good story and gives people a particularly good reading experience. The extra plot is also very great. . . I particularly like the Yun Wan couple. The one who offends the superior, the one who indulges the inferior, and they are so pampered. Moreover, because the psychological description is particularly good and has a strong sense of empathy, it is easy to resonate with the characters, and thus I can experience such a good story more deeply. I raise my hands and feet to support the author's new book😭😭😭