Collapse of Iron: There Are Sun and Moon Hanging in the Morning and Evening

Xiaobai Xiaobai, we like you! The greatest and most perfect man! Savior! God! But I hope Xiaobai is happy and happy! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! When will Xiaobai re-enact? MiHoYo, I want to smoke Xiaobai! E is suppressed [crying] I can't draw out Bai E's two souls and I'm going to die [cry] [cry] [cry] I'm sorry, I miss Xiaobai again [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry]

Excellent work! ＼(`Δ')／A masterpiece that is so intoxicating that I can catch up with it all night long! (≧ｗ≦)⌯ Whether it is the exquisite writing style or the delicate emotional description, it makes people feel excited after reading it, and it is difficult to calm down for a long time. Anyone who has read Bai E's novels knows how rare (sad) it is to read a good E Yi novel, and this one has been updated with more than a hundred chapters! Eat a lot and be full! There's also a super sweet little extra! ! ! Super fragrant! (✧∇✧) And the author is cute~ He will reply to every comment, everyone in the book group is also very easy to get along with, and the group has a very warm and warm atmosphere ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳ (Of course, newbies remember to read the group rules, this is very important (›´ω`‹ )) And the author is also very active in the group (laughs) Everyone is a good member, and there are two big writers in the group who are good at producing food (I suggest everyone who sees this comment to join me in urging updates) (rice hungry ˙ᗜ˙) Ahem, that's too far off topic. (．-ω-)Zzz Back to the novel, something serious. The author's portrayal of the emotional flow between the two protagonists, between Bai E and Lin Meng (of course this article is E Yi's text, the author himself does not have a very detailed physical description, in fact, it is to make readers feel more involved), in daily interactions, like a stream flowing over a bluestone, naturally infiltrating each other's lives. The two different timelines are intertwined with day and night. From Lin Meng's perspective, we can witness the daily lives of Dabai E and Xiao Bai E. It's really warm and immersive, and it's such a clever idea! But no matter how big or small they are, they all laughed at it (laughs:-D). The plot is coherent, the story structure is ingenious, and the plot progresses smoothly. There are exciting twists and tender daily life. It makes people want to read it. This is why I found that I stayed up all night to read this article. ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥ Every bit of daily life is filled with the lingering feelings of both parties. Xiaobai and Lin Meng's love for each other is revealed inadvertently. These moments are infinitely magnified, and the emotional tension quietly accumulates in them. Until the two people talk about it, they will only feel that it is natural and natural. Character creation is undoubtedly the soul of this novel. The author does not stop at the appearance of the characters, but digs deep into and enriches their inner worlds. The Lin Meng we see is by no means a brainless vase. She has her own persistence, wisdom and strength. Her gentleness contains tenacity, and her tolerance shines with the light of independence. In this way, they are not a simple "strong man and guardian" model, but they illuminate each other through mutual attraction and grow together through mutual support. Don't you think this kind of soul-resonating love is particularly moving and delicious? (Of course, it may also be because I like this (*´I`*) The author's writing style breathes life into this story very well, and the author has a good habit of editing! Usually, if you see a typo, you can ask her to correct it. The author is very talkative (even very active) and the language of the novel is precise and has a strong visual sense. It is as if the scenes are flowing in front of the eyes, and the imagination is directly making up small animations in the mind. ੧ᐛ੭ All in all, this is not only an excellent fan novel, but also a touching interpretation of "love". It makes us believe that in another carefully constructed world, Bai E and Lin Meng love each other so truly and deeply. Thanks to the author for using such delicate writing style to weave such a beautiful dream for us that is worth recalling again and again.

The novice and the author are very cute (of course I don't mean that others are not cute) (.•ω•.)ﾉ♡ Personally, I think the writing style is very delicate, and it is more daily-oriented. Even if you have not watched the plot, it will not affect your appetite. It is a sweet and pure love story. The author is so skilled at giving a sweet date a slap in the face. Every time he is slapped, the emotions surge up and he is so sweet again when he looks back, and the tears are endless (*/ω＼*) Also: The teacher really reads everyone's book reviews and paragraph reviews carefully, I'm so touched (˘̩̩̩ε˘̩ƪ)

Doesn't anyone understand this apt and boundless title? It can be seen that the author's cultural level is very good. Different from those articles that reveal bookishness and literary beauty between the lines, the author's large-scale writing has a close-to-life intimacy and does not flatten the character's personality but does not shy away from it. It displays their advantages and disadvantages together in a more three-dimensional manner and presents them to readers in a more three-dimensional manner. It is definitely the first echelon among Tomato fanfics. The plot rhythm is also well controlled. Although it is slow-paced, it does not make people feel dragged out. The two-line parallel plot is very novel in Bai Irwin! There are sun and moon hanging in the morning and evening, and there are ghosts and gods holding the power of life and death. - "The Injustice of Dou E" (When I first read the title, I thought it looked familiar. It seemed to be a sentence about Dou E's injustice. I didn't expect that the real focus was the second half of the sentence)

Come on, author! I can see that you really love Xiaobai. This is enough for me to give you a five-star review. Xiaobai is the best in the world! ! (○゜ε＾○)

It's so pretty ^ω^ This is so fragrant, if you like novices, come and check it out! ! ! Everything I write is what I like to read [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This is my first time writing a review. This book is very good. There are no procrastinating plots or too blunt transitions. It's rare… Also, congratulations to Mengmeng for the score~ Rate it 5 points and write a review~ Hee hee [laughing]

It's a very good book, but there is too much daily life. Some fighting scenes can be added appropriately. The image of the rural boy is basically the same as in the game. It may be my personal reason. Too much daily life always feels a bit... Boring? However, the author has a high response rate, and writing according to what readers want to read is a plus. This book seems to be coming to an end, and I hope it has an ending worthy of it. It's funny, I seem to have never seen a love story in Tomato that doesn't involve romance, but this book is different, at least not yet. This book is more suitable for female readers, but it may not be suitable for men. My words end here. This book is far from perfect in my ideal, but it is also the only iron-collapse-themed novel that I gave "full marks" to.

I like the Baier the most, the fragrant and soft Baier. Hey hey hey. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Bai E, why did you change your name to Xi'er? Why did you go on a hunting tour? [Cry][Cry][Cry]

Very nice! Anyway, I finished reading it before I knew it. If the setting is acceptable, it will definitely be a book you won't be able to put down. [Chigua] My message to the author is: Don't be tired and don't rest. (And the author is very easy to get along with and very serious. As long as the comment is not eaten by tomatoes, you can see the reply. It gives a strong sense of being alive!)

This is really the most satisfying fanfic I've found on every platform, and it's really good to substitute! ! ! I was also surprised by the teacher's writing style (maybe because my Chinese is really poor) and I couldn't think of any adjectives. In short, it was very good and beautiful! ! Teacher, please keep writing🥺🫶

This book is really good. My friends recommend it to everyone. First of all, the plot is very novel (it's a handsome Samoyed during the day, and a little white guy at night. Who doesn't love QAQ) The author is also very nice! Enthusiastic and very engaging, such an author is rare (the author is a good person!) The writing style of this book is also very good. Xiaobai's description is very vivid. Although there are different timelines, the plot is not confusing. I really recommend it. (I am currently doing book raising behavior QAQ) I don't know why there isn't much traffic. Such a good novel will definitely be rated 9 or higher in the future. I'll be the first to invest in it!

Let me give this book a five-star rating first. After all, I feel sorry for Bai E [crying] Looking forward to the follow-up articles, I hope it won't be ooc Come on [send heart]

It's good to watch, and I'm looking forward to the main storyline [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Please give me more updates]

It's so cool. You can watch 100 pictures for a long time. It's very daily. Xiaobai, we like you!

Hehe, I've been watching it for so long without realizing it. It's been a long time since I've seen a warm and heartwarming plot. Especially about Xiaobai. The character description is also very good. I feel like it's what he would do. Why don't you care more about yourself? (Distressed (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's a pretty good novel written by a novice, right? I can't put it into words, it just makes people feel that this kind of emotion is the kind of flowing water, or maybe it's because I particularly like the kind of people whose protagonists are wooden [face covering]

It's okay, I quite like it.

I've been looking for a book about Bai E CP for a long time, and finally found it. I'm so happy.

Five gentlemen in the clouds, their friendship is better than gold and silver The blade is often forged in response to the stars, and the life is short and the body is extraordinary. Evil things pollute the body and blood, and it is difficult to die if you want to die. Jingliu is called the sword leader, and he is dedicated to hunting for abundance. Unfortunately, he fell into the devil's shadow and killed his comrades with a sword. Bai Yan was good at flying, but his friend died first She transforms into a dragon and upholds creation, and she is not the one to be resurrected Jing Yuan is wise and wants to travel around the world Abandoning the dream to pick up the mess, wielding a knife in the violent waves The immortal descendant of Dan Feng died and became reincarnation. On the long train, the name Heng is not called Maple

Why did I suddenly not understand Chapter 77 and then Chapter 78? I also couldn't understand the rest of the plot at all. But this book is really good and the characters are not OOC and very sweet [Blow kiss]

It's so beautiful that I want to give my homework to the author! The love of the young couple is so delicious ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈

It's pretty and sweet, but sometimes it's a bit sharp, but as long as it's not a big knife, that's fine! [Shy]

Very good looking, almost no dull spots

It's beautiful, come on

This, this, is very beautiful. The author will reply to every comment. It is very considerate. Although it is not finished yet, there is no need to worry about the update. I hope everyone will support it.

It's so beautiful, thank you to the author! ! !

The white and black little cute dog is so cute. I love love that goes both ways.

Mengbao's writing is so delicious [Admiration] and she is super diligent in updating it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Xiaobai, hey, hey, Xiaobai

It's so sweet, so sweet, the extras are so sweet that I almost cry. I'm looking forward to the main story and more extras [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]