Enemy*************

I realized it when I saw Liu Ruyan's evaluation of the protagonist in Chapter 9. The plot design is similar to a Korean comic I've seen before, except that the protagonist's abilities are replaced. He is hunted down at the beginning, misunderstood, and has special abilities, but the protagonist can become stronger in some ways.

The fake protagonist Lin and the real protagonist Long are so fun. At first, I was a little speechless about the setting that dragons cannot die. Later I found out that this guy is the highlight of the whole story and plays a funny role [laughs]

There is nothing poisonous about this book. I personally think that if the author polishes it well, it would be rated at least 9 points. At the same time, I also hope that the author can carve the story well. The storyline is pretty old-fashioned, and there are similar books and comics on the market, such as The Flash Genius at the Magic Academy. But the author has more than 3 female protagonists, so few. [Pause face] I hope the author can polish the emotional scenes well. After all, many novels have many female protagonists who only have everything. [Smile] Finally, please update quickly. Hey [angry] [angry] [angry]

The writing is very good, keep writing. The only dissatisfaction is that I hope that the protagonist will be happy and become stronger quickly. Also, everyone in the novel naturally looks down on the protagonist. Even if he becomes stronger, he will still look down on the protagonist. For example, the character of the principal plays with the protagonist casually. Besides, the world is in danger of annihilation. I am still stuck in this small area of ​​​​the campus. I don't want to take advantage of the opportunity and work hard to become stronger. If you get stronger later and fight against these people who have always looked down on the protagonist, you can fight the entire world by yourself before the final boss comes, and finally let the final boss challenge you. Let everyone, including the system and the mastermind behind the scenes, see how violent the anger and anger can be in a person's heart by casually pulling people over to face a world where death can occur at any time.

So far, the writing is pretty good, but I hope that when the protagonist blocks, he will also lose some blood. Let's erase this last bit of shortcomings. If you block without losing blood, you are really invincible.

Divine novels, divine authors,

Why does the protagonist like to tease fools so much?

It's quite nice and fun to watch.

Looks good, I like it

It's great to see an explosion [laughs]

Fortunately, the setting feels like a fusion of online games and "the dog-licking villain just wants to fuck, and the heroine doesn't follow the routine", which made me feel like I was reading a book.

I still like to watch western fantasy

Not bad, very pretty

Okay, just a little less

Not bad Not bad

The author lets himself go quite a bit

Tuen Shu first, five stars first

Good. Quite like it.

It's okay, not bad, pretty good-looking

Funny article, good-looking, love to read

Can you tell me if it is a harem or a single girl or no girls? I will withdraw from the harem.

Special. You don't know it until you see it, you only know it once you see it.

It looks pretty good so far

It feels a bit like Lu Wen, Long Aotian, and Zhao Ritian from Western Fantasy

It borrows a lot from Flash Genius in the first few chapters and then it doesn't take long to start laughing, it's actually kind of funny

It's pretty good-looking. I still prefer this kind of one with emotional lines.

It's wonderful, I don't know how to describe it. In short, only after reading it can you feel the excitement of this book.

At least it's much better than most novels, give it 5 stars

The plot is interesting, the narrative is witty, and you can travel to another world.

Personally, I think it's very beautiful. I like this kind of sadness without any brain. The author will update it soon.