Western Fantasy*************

No one writes book reviews, so the author has to do it himself. It is a Western fantasy novel with two female protagonists. The plot progresses very quickly. You can read it directly without reading.

The writing style in the early stage was a bit naive, but in the later stage it was fine. The portrayal of relatives and friends was meticulous. I hope to make the protagonist smarter, more capable, not at the mercy of others, and it is best to protect others and show off [Thoughts]

It's not bad. I feel like it's too rushed and the characters aren't well-characterized at the moment.

Time travel is just a gimmick, and later on the protagonist completely thinks of herself as Elise. I feel like it would be better to change the beginning to the protagonist awakening his past life memories (but it is also possible that the protagonist is a local, but the author has not written it yet) [Thinking]. Then the pace is very fast, the description of daily life is relatively simple, and the feelings (friendship and love) get better inexplicably. For me personally, it is not very satisfying [I almost cry], but the plot is still interesting. Anyway, give it best to the author [sending heartfelt wishes] The author ran away, so you don't need to read [crazy] Second editor: starting from chapter 78, the author said that he might use AI to continue writing this book [face covering]

The writing is okay, it's a very interesting work. The first few chapters may not look good, but the later chapters are much better. The author is trying to make a big layout.

Author, you must update 114514 times a day! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

In the first few chapters, the heroine is a little overconfident, but the later descriptions are quite interesting. The Witch's Castle is the most interesting. The interaction between the heroine and her sister is so cute. She and O's get along like the Riddler, digging a lot of holes. Let's see how we fill them later.

The book is very interesting, the author's writing style is also good, and the plot is also very interesting. I hope the author can continue to play more. It's really easy to get lost in reading new books! 😦

It's still good. I hope the protagonist has more personal agency (it's OK with wood, but don't feel like he's being carried around), and I hope there are more sugary little daily routines (the protagonist, his sister, and the saint). I feel that the plot of this book is a little too fast. I really want to see Tiantian's daily life, and I want to see the kindness and cuteness of the protagonist. This should enrich the character (I definitely don't want to see daily sugar-making). In short, you can add a little more daily details between the plots, and the protagonist doesn't need to be too dull.

It's beautiful and has a great world view.

It's good to read, I just like this kind of western fantasy novel [Blowing Kiss]

The back looks much better than the front, come on

It looks good, please post it more [sending love]

Beautiful, highly recommended

Can be read as a physical book

Elise is a character, and I've read it [laughs]

It's very interesting, thank you to the author [laughs]

The book is quite good and can be read as a meal replacement for Korean comics.

It's super cool, thank you to the author

The writing is fine and the setting is very bold. Please keep updating the author. I want to watch the education and training [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's a book I like very much. The characters have distinct personalities and the independent plot is also rich and interesting. The author must write it down and it will definitely become popular😍😍😍

It's very interesting to watch. The interaction between the two protagonists is so interesting. I just feel like the protagonist is a bit unsatisfied.

Overall good, but the pace is a bit fast

Before Chapter 31, in Golden Harbor, the pace was a bit fast, and some readers said that the characters were not so obvious [Thinking] Others are pretty good