[Two male leads + reborn + transmigrate into a book + xianxia] (The rating is a little low since it just opened.) Cheng Xi transmigrated into a novel he'd read, becoming the male lead's “heart-wrenching memory.”
He thought he was just an insignificant cannon-fodder character. After sending the male lead to a sect to become a disciple, Cheng Xi planned to settle down and live out his days. But then people claiming to be his “clansmen” took him back to the family of the true mastermind behind the book's events.
He'd intended to help the male lead uncover the mastermind, but all the clues pointed to one thing: “Me...? I'm the final boss?”
In his previous life, Li Xuanfeng, the sword immortal of Yichuan, had three great regrets. First, the sacrifice of his fellow disciples. Second, the death of his closest friend. Third, his failure to slay the demon who brought calamity upon all living beings.
Now that he had a chance to live again, he would protect his fellow disciples and family this time, and kill the demon who had ravaged the entire spirit realm in his past life!
It's well written, please work hard, but the protagonist's character is a bit depressing. Even though he experienced a lot of bad things before time travel, his grandmother in his previous life and the Cheng family in this life were very good to him. Under normal circumstances, people will be more confident, braver, and may even be stressed. Even if someone slanders him, he will have a big reaction and be very excited. It makes her look like a heroine now. She is still a heroine in ancient novels who didn't have a mouth, so she just gets sulky.
I probably figured it out 🧐. In the last life, Xiao Liu was snatched away by a wolf but survived but was picked up by the Xuansha Sect. Then he was taken away by Cheng Yandu and the plot of the original book 🍉 was born. In this life, because the protagonist of the original book was reborn, Xiao Liu changed the core, which deviated from the plot of the original book. In addition, the readers did not know what the villain in the original plot looked like, so the two of them had such an error. I feel like Xiaoxi has a bit of PTSD and low self-esteem because of her native family. She feels a little stressed about explaining misunderstandings and doesn't dare to tell the truth. It's quite pitiful and I hope she can open up her heart in the future 💕 Come on, the author, it's pretty good [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
[This review contains spoiler warning⚠️] To be honest, the plot is still interesting. The identity of hope and Feng was very attractive before there were enough clues to deduce [laughs]. After guessing it, I felt like it was expected [I understand] The main thing is actually the way hope grows. Although it is not obvious, you can see the difference if you look closely [Personally, I feel that the change is exponential] [Shocking] Moreover, the conflict between the wind and the wind also describes the extreme changes in personal personality 🤔 hope and Feng have split personalities and are essentially the same person. Therefore, we cannot judge people based on their relationship. When hope has the courage to swing his sword to the wind, it actually means that hope has the mentality of facing difficulties directly, which is the opposite of escaping [salute]. It is a sign of personality fusion, and it means accepting the escaping self and the wind [learned] This sentence - "This is what he tried his best to achieve, and what he tried his best to prevent." - I think this is the best reconciliation for Xi [I almost cried] And ❗Author, you feel deceived. I thought it was a sweet love, but I didn't expect it to be just industrial sugar residue. ❗Although the plot is not bad, the emotional line is really weak [shocked]
It's good to watch, the plot is fast-paced🥰IQ is online, all kinds of good, I won't say a word after watching it, and the last thing I want to say is that it will be finished much faster. I can't stand the appetite. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
After reading the whole article, I feel that the author's writing skills are still online for the first time. The changes in the characters are also gradual and traceable, and there is no sudden collapse. However, I feel that the author is not very good at writing about love (or I didn't get it...). I feel that the lack of love line does not have a great impact on the plot. Although I read it for the two male protagonists, I always forget that it is BL. The plot is also quite smooth. Even the world view of the short story is also complete. Cheng hope's growth is okay. The route is also very clear, and if you don't read it carefully, it is easy to not distinguish the names of the people (because the family names are very similar, I missed the names several times, and I read it several times before I figured it out). Overall, it is a good article, even if there are some obscure places, the author will patiently analyze them, and also wrote a lot of clever ideas in it. I suggest the author try it without cp, it will feel better (four stars because I am really not very satisfied with the emotional line, but the writing is not bad)
It's a very good book [sending my heart] First of all, if you are new to the book, don't be too anxious. This book should be considered a coming-of-age story. The male protagonist's behavior may be a bit unfavorable at the beginning, and his character may be a bit cowardly. But there's a reason for that, and it's a line in the plot synopsis. If I say too much, it will be a bit of a spoiler (I hope you can still watch the last one) Secondly, personally, I think this is a very novel book about the world of immortality, both in terms of the male protagonist and the direction of the story. But because the book is relatively short, you need to take a closer look at the characters (because I read the reviews before and felt that some of the evaluations of the male protagonist Cheng were very distorted) Finally, I personally feel that I can still appreciate the CP of Cheng Yanxi and Li Xuanfeng in this book, but their emotional development is indeed not obvious, and even if you are not careful, you will feel a little jump? But still good. Of course, you can also read this book as a group favorite (after all, the author mentioned that the emotional line is really not obvious) … Actually, it took me many days to write the review. I can't remember what I wanted to write when I read the book, but I quite liked this book. I also hope this book can be liked by more people... Forget it, hope their lives go on. (Still squatting again) (Maybe more to add?)
My Appraiser is indeed a good book. It may be a little slow and wordy in the early stage, but if you follow its plot and foreshadowing, it will actually be more enjoyable to read. Overall, the density of this article is enough, and it will not be as large as other paragraphs, so it will look a bit dense. But the relationships and foreshadowing are really deep. At present, I feel that the development of the plot is a bit soft. However, the foreshadowing is very attractive. I feel that the author has already finished saving the manuscript, so it should not collapse. Now I am just looking forward to updating it as soon as possible\(//∇//)\[smile][smile][smile] In fact, it may be because of the newbie, the writing is a bit draggy, and the emotional line is also very complicated and confusing. The most important thing is the important plot. Maybe because I am following the update, so it is continuous and intermittent, and I can only come up with one that I feel will be after the end of the year. It may be better to read it in one go. Then, the author can divide the structure into more paragraphs, because sometimes there are too many words in a series, which makes online novels a bit unaccustomed to reading. Then give me some encouragement. In fact, I feel that the five stars I gave before may indeed be a bit high.
Looking at the 65 chapters now, overall it's pretty good, but the character's personality is not clear enough, vivid enough, and you can know what kind of person he is, but not vivid enough. The plot is very good, and the suspense is well set up, making people want to know the truth.
Cheng Yanxi/Cheng Yanfeng, Cheng Yanxiu, Li Xuanfeng 1️⃣I haven't seen much of Li Xuanfeng's shining points. Compared with this official official role, I may take a bite of orthopedics (x) 2️⃣Personally, I think the main plot is quite interesting, and the setting of the Cheng family is also interesting. 3️⃣The supporting characters are quite vivid It felt like the ending was a bit rushed, and it felt like it took a long time to prepare for the evil tribes outside the territory, but in the end they were hastily prevented from coming (? Maybe I didn't understand) But overall I think it looks pretty good. Btw, I feel like Cheng Feng is a pathetic guy, but to say he is pathetic would be insulting.
The writing is really beautiful!!!! The character of the protagonist felt a little inferior in the early stage, but then the protagonist is quite talented. The latest chapter seems to have improved a bit, and he is not so inferior [note] I think it should be Li Xuanfeng, I also like his character very much