[Two male protagonists + rebirth + book travel + fairy tale] (the rating was a bit low at the beginning) Cheng hope traveled into the novel he had read and became the "sensational memory" of the male protagonist.
Thinking that he was just an inconspicuous cannon fodder, after sending the male protagonist to the Immortal Sect to become a disciple, Cheng hope planned to spend his whole life here. However, he did not expect to be brought back to the family of the villain behind this book by someone who claimed to be a "tribe".
I wanted to help the male protagonist find the villain behind the scenes, but I didn't expect it. All the clues pointed to one thing: "Me...? The BOSS behind the scenes?"
Yichuan Sword Immortal Li Xuanfeng had three major regrets in his previous life. One was the sacrifice of a fellow disciple, the other was the death of a close friend, and the third was his failure to kill the devil for the people of the world.
Now that he can do it again, in this life, he must protect his classmates and relatives, and kill the devil who harmed the entire spiritual world in the previous life!
Reader comments
It's well written, please work hard, but the protagonist's character is a bit depressing. Even though he experienced a lot of bad things before time travel, his grandmother in his previous life and the Cheng family in this life were very good to him. Under normal circumstances, people will be more confident, braver, and may even be stressed. Even if someone slanders him, he will have a big reaction and be very excited.
It makes her look like a heroine now. She is still a heroine in ancient novels who didn't have a mouth, so she just gets sulky.
I probably figured it out [exploration]. In the last life, Xiao Liu was snatched away by a wolf but survived but was picked up by the Xuansha Sect. Then he was taken away by Cheng Yandu and the plot of the original book [eat melon] was born. In this life, because the protagonist of the original book was reborn, Xiao Liu changed the core, which deviated from the plot of the original book. In addition, the readers did not know what the villain in the original plot looked like, so the two of them had such an error.
I feel like Xiaoxi has a bit of PTSD and low self-esteem because of her native family. She feels a little stressed about explaining misunderstandings and doesn't dare to tell the truth. It's quite pitiful and I hope she can open up her heart in the future [Sending Hearts]
Come on, the author, it's pretty good [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
[This review contains spoiler warning⚠️]
To be honest, the plot is still interesting. The identity of hope and Feng was very attractive before there were enough clues to deduce [laughs]. After guessing it, I felt like it was expected [I understand]
The main thing is actually the way hope grows. Although it is not obvious, you can see the difference if you look closely [Personally, I feel that the change is exponential] [Shocking]
Moreover, the conflict between the wind and the wind also describes the extreme changes in personal personality [Thinking]
hope and Feng have split personalities and are essentially the same person. Therefore, we cannot judge people based on their relationship. When hope has the courage to swing his sword to the wind, it actually means that hope has the mentality of facing difficulties directly, which is the opposite of escaping [salute]. It is a sign of personality fusion, and it means accepting the escaping self and the wind [learned]
This sentence - "This is what he tried his best to achieve, and what he tried his best to prevent." - I think this is the best reconciliation for Xi [I almost cried]
And ❗Author, you feel deceived. I thought it was a sweet love, but I didn't expect it to be just industrial sugar residue. ❗Although the plot is not bad, the emotional line is really weak [shocked]
It's good to watch, the plot is fast-paced🥰IQ is online, all kinds of good, I won't say a word after watching it, and the last thing I want to say is that it will be finished much faster. I can't stand the appetite. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
After reading the whole article, I feel that the author's writing skills are still online for the first time. The changes in the characters are also gradual and traceable, and there is no sudden collapse. However, I feel that the author is not very good at writing about love (or I didn't get it...). I feel that the lack of love line does not have a great impact on the plot. Although I read it for the two male protagonists, I always forget that it is BL. The plot is also quite smooth. Even the world view of the short story is also complete. Cheng hope's growth is okay. The route is also very clear, and if you don't read it carefully, it is easy to not distinguish the names of the people (because the family names are very similar, I missed the names several times, and I read it several times before I figured it out). Overall, it is a good article, even if there are some obscure places, the author will patiently analyze them, and also wrote a lot of clever ideas in it. I suggest the author try it without cp, it will feel better (four stars because I am really not very satisfied with the emotional line, but the writing is not bad)
Looking at the 65 chapters now, overall it's pretty good, but the character's personality is not clear enough, vivid enough, and you can know what kind of person he is, but not vivid enough. The plot is very good, and the suspense is well set up, making people want to know the truth.
My Appraiser is indeed a good book. It may be a little slow and wordy in the early stage, but if you follow its plot and foreshadowing, it will actually be more enjoyable to read. Overall, the density of this article is enough, and it will not be as large as other paragraphs, so it will look a bit dense. But the relationships and foreshadowing are really deep. At present, I feel that the development of the plot is a bit soft. However, the foreshadowing is very attractive. I feel that the author has already finished saving the manuscript, so it should not collapse. Now I am just looking forward to updating it as soon as possible\(//∇//)\[smile][smile][smile]
In fact, it may be because of the newbie, the writing is a bit draggy, and the emotional line is also very complicated and confusing. The most important thing is the important plot. Maybe because I am following the update, so it is continuous and intermittent, and I can only come up with one that I feel will be after the end of the year. It may be better to read it in one go. Then, the author can divide the structure into more paragraphs, because sometimes there are too many words in a series, which makes online novels a bit unaccustomed to reading. Then give me some encouragement. In fact, I feel that the five stars I gave before may indeed be a bit high.
It's a very good book [sending my heart]
First of all, if you are new to the book, don't be too anxious. This book should be considered a coming-of-age story. The male protagonist's behavior may be a bit unfavorable at the beginning, and his character may be a bit cowardly. But there's a reason for that, and it's a line in the plot synopsis. If I say too much, it will be a bit of a spoiler (I hope you can still watch the last one)
Secondly, personally, I think this is a very novel book about the world of immortality, both in terms of the male protagonist and the direction of the story. But because the book is relatively short, you need to take a closer look at the characters (because I read the reviews before and felt that some of the evaluations of the male protagonist Cheng were very distorted)
Finally, I personally feel that I can still appreciate the CP of Cheng Yanxi and Li Xuanfeng in this book, but their emotional development is indeed not obvious, and even if you are not careful, you will feel a little jump? But still good.
Of course, you can also read this book as a group favorite (after all, the author mentioned that the emotional line is really not obvious)
......... Actually, it took me many days to write the review. I can't remember what I wanted to write when I read the book, but I quite liked this book. I also hope this book can be liked by more people...
Forget it, hope their lives go on. (Still squatting again)
(Maybe more to add?)
Cheng Yanxi/Cheng Yanfeng, Cheng Yanxiu, Li Xuanfeng
1️⃣I haven't seen much of Li Xuanfeng's shining points. Compared with this official official role, I may take a bite of orthopedics (x)
2️⃣Personally, I think the main plot is quite interesting, and the setting of the Cheng family is also interesting.
3️⃣The supporting characters are quite vivid
It felt like the ending was a bit rushed, and it felt like it took a long time to prepare for the evil tribes outside the territory, but in the end they were hastily prevented from coming (? Maybe I didn't understand)
But overall I think it looks pretty good.
Btw, I feel like Cheng Feng is a pathetic guy, but to say he is pathetic would be insulting.
The writing is really beautiful! ! ! !
The character of the protagonist felt a little inferior in the early stage, but then the protagonist is quite talented. The latest chapter seems to have improved a bit, and he is not so inferior [note]
I think it should be Li Xuanfeng, I also like his character very much
The good-looking family members are just right for my recent love of cp porn in male videos. It satisfies the growth of men's videos and solves the problem of being unable to make points in men's videos. The story is also very interesting, a type of story book that I have never seen before.
Okay, I've finished reading it. I heard that this is the author's first book! The plot is very good, although the love line is still a bit flawed. Then the ending chapters are a little confusing, but it's understandable if you're not a serious person. Overall, it's very good, novel, and there is still room for improvement. It's great and awesome🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
I have finished it. The story is quite interesting. It is the first two-male protagonist novel that I have been able to finish on Tomato after a long time. There is not much emotional drama (it can be said that there is almost none), but I think the main story is quite attractive, so it is still worth reading. But after reading it, I still feel a slight regret. Although the ending is he, but... It may be a bit rushed. The tragic color of Cheng Feng is still very regrettable. After knowing his experience, I feel that everyone is very good to Cheng hope. It can be said that it is because of love. Bonds and concerns changed his character and made him grow into a better person; only Cheng Feng, whether before or after time travel, he had never had a heart-to-heart relationship with anyone and established a bond. After accepting all the negativity and the fact that everyone did not truly treat him sincerely, (PS: Those parents are not human beings.) His obsession is his grandmother who gave him warmth and was the only one who loved him. I think this may be his regret. Although what he did cannot be forgiven, I also hope that he can return to his grandmother in the end... In summary, it is a good article.
It's very beautiful🤤The low score is really just because there are few people. Friends passing by, don't miss this good book, okay?
The protagonist is super cute, a little boy who is a little sensitive and has low self-esteem. The plot is also very interesting. I can't predict the later development at all. I am being fished for updates every day [shy]
The writing is particularly good. I just want to know when Xuan Feng will be able to recognize Cheng hope, and hope that the misunderstanding can be revealed as soon as possible.
I had a lot of feelings when I was reading it, but I don't know what to comment on after reading it. Xixi's psychological description is really good, and it's a very well-written group portrait. The only thing I want to ask the author is how can he not confuse people when writing about so many people in the Cheng family?
Treasure.
I have finished reading 61 chapters so far. It's really rare. I rarely see such comfortable and natural looking articles. There is no nonsense, there is logic, and the cause and effect of what happened is clear. He did this not because the plot required it, but because of his character.
The overall plot is quite smooth. As the author's first book, I personally think it is above average.
But after the ending was pushed out in the later stage, the ending was a bit sloppy, and the foreshadowing was generally taken back, but some subsequent explanations were a bit vague.
But overall it's good.
I think it's very interesting, and I also like Yanxi's character. The subject matter is novel, and the suspense set up is also very attractive. Damn, please update soon. Don't be tired, but don't rest either. I log on Tomato every day just to update you.
My family is very delicious. I have already experienced so much pain [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Damn it, I finished it all at once, why didn't I see woooooooooooooo at the end?
It's pretty good, but has the misunderstanding been resolved? It feels so uncomfortable to kick me once it has been resolved.
It's good to watch, but I'm a little curious about what's going on with the protagonist and Cheng Yanfeng who is coming out now.
Link by link, the plot is still very good, so Cheng hope and Cheng Feng are indeed twin brothers to a certain extent. By the way, when did Cheng Feng enter Xixi's body, and was the grandmother getting worse and worse during that time? Tied, suddenly I had an ominous premonition, don't do it
The whole story is pretty good. I prefer the pairing of the protagonist with Cheng Yanxiu or Cheng Yanfeng. To be honest, the other male protagonist doesn't have any sense of CP.
Nice! The author's worldview is very good and new. His writing style is plain but very attractive. Tomato has a very unique writing style.
It's pretty good-looking, not the current routine or anything like that. It's just that there are too few descriptions of emotions or expressing the inner feelings of the characters, and the empathy is not particularly strong. The main line design is quite good, and the content is also good. But sometimes when I write about something important or attractive, I suddenly switch to another scene, which is a bit abrupt. Probably just to keep the taste alive. All in all, I recommend reading it in one sitting
The teacher's writing is still good ~ the growth-oriented protagonist, although, it may not be that exciting. Although there are two male protagonists, there are not many emotional lines. It is good-looking. The overall main plot of the teacher is still very good, and the characterization is also good.
It's well written, please work hard, but the protagonist's character is a bit depressing. Even though he experienced a lot of bad things before time travel, his grandmother in his previous life and the Cheng family in this life were very good to him. Under normal circumstances, people will be more confident, braver, and may even be stressed. Even if someone slanders him, he will have a big reaction and be very excited. It makes her look like a heroine now. She is still a heroine in ancient novels who didn't have a mouth, so she just gets sulky.
I probably figured it out [exploration]. In the last life, Xiao Liu was snatched away by a wolf but survived but was picked up by the Xuansha Sect. Then he was taken away by Cheng Yandu and the plot of the original book [eat melon] was born. In this life, because the protagonist of the original book was reborn, Xiao Liu changed the core, which deviated from the plot of the original book. In addition, the readers did not know what the villain in the original plot looked like, so the two of them had such an error. I feel like Xiaoxi has a bit of PTSD and low self-esteem because of her native family. She feels a little stressed about explaining misunderstandings and doesn't dare to tell the truth. It's quite pitiful and I hope she can open up her heart in the future [Sending Hearts] Come on, the author, it's pretty good [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
[This review contains spoiler warning⚠️] To be honest, the plot is still interesting. The identity of hope and Feng was very attractive before there were enough clues to deduce [laughs]. After guessing it, I felt like it was expected [I understand] The main thing is actually the way hope grows. Although it is not obvious, you can see the difference if you look closely [Personally, I feel that the change is exponential] [Shocking] Moreover, the conflict between the wind and the wind also describes the extreme changes in personal personality [Thinking] hope and Feng have split personalities and are essentially the same person. Therefore, we cannot judge people based on their relationship. When hope has the courage to swing his sword to the wind, it actually means that hope has the mentality of facing difficulties directly, which is the opposite of escaping [salute]. It is a sign of personality fusion, and it means accepting the escaping self and the wind [learned] This sentence - "This is what he tried his best to achieve, and what he tried his best to prevent." - I think this is the best reconciliation for Xi [I almost cried] And ❗Author, you feel deceived. I thought it was a sweet love, but I didn't expect it to be just industrial sugar residue. ❗Although the plot is not bad, the emotional line is really weak [shocked]
It's good to watch, the plot is fast-paced🥰IQ is online, all kinds of good, I won't say a word after watching it, and the last thing I want to say is that it will be finished much faster. I can't stand the appetite. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
After reading the whole article, I feel that the author's writing skills are still online for the first time. The changes in the characters are also gradual and traceable, and there is no sudden collapse. However, I feel that the author is not very good at writing about love (or I didn't get it...). I feel that the lack of love line does not have a great impact on the plot. Although I read it for the two male protagonists, I always forget that it is BL. The plot is also quite smooth. Even the world view of the short story is also complete. Cheng hope's growth is okay. The route is also very clear, and if you don't read it carefully, it is easy to not distinguish the names of the people (because the family names are very similar, I missed the names several times, and I read it several times before I figured it out). Overall, it is a good article, even if there are some obscure places, the author will patiently analyze them, and also wrote a lot of clever ideas in it. I suggest the author try it without cp, it will feel better (four stars because I am really not very satisfied with the emotional line, but the writing is not bad)
Looking at the 65 chapters now, overall it's pretty good, but the character's personality is not clear enough, vivid enough, and you can know what kind of person he is, but not vivid enough. The plot is very good, and the suspense is well set up, making people want to know the truth.
My Appraiser is indeed a good book. It may be a little slow and wordy in the early stage, but if you follow its plot and foreshadowing, it will actually be more enjoyable to read. Overall, the density of this article is enough, and it will not be as large as other paragraphs, so it will look a bit dense. But the relationships and foreshadowing are really deep. At present, I feel that the development of the plot is a bit soft. However, the foreshadowing is very attractive. I feel that the author has already finished saving the manuscript, so it should not collapse. Now I am just looking forward to updating it as soon as possible\(//∇//)\[smile][smile][smile] In fact, it may be because of the newbie, the writing is a bit draggy, and the emotional line is also very complicated and confusing. The most important thing is the important plot. Maybe because I am following the update, so it is continuous and intermittent, and I can only come up with one that I feel will be after the end of the year. It may be better to read it in one go. Then, the author can divide the structure into more paragraphs, because sometimes there are too many words in a series, which makes online novels a bit unaccustomed to reading. Then give me some encouragement. In fact, I feel that the five stars I gave before may indeed be a bit high.
It's a very good book [sending my heart] First of all, if you are new to the book, don't be too anxious. This book should be considered a coming-of-age story. The male protagonist's behavior may be a bit unfavorable at the beginning, and his character may be a bit cowardly. But there's a reason for that, and it's a line in the plot synopsis. If I say too much, it will be a bit of a spoiler (I hope you can still watch the last one) Secondly, personally, I think this is a very novel book about the world of immortality, both in terms of the male protagonist and the direction of the story. But because the book is relatively short, you need to take a closer look at the characters (because I read the reviews before and felt that some of the evaluations of the male protagonist Cheng were very distorted) Finally, I personally feel that I can still appreciate the CP of Cheng Yanxi and Li Xuanfeng in this book, but their emotional development is indeed not obvious, and even if you are not careful, you will feel a little jump? But still good. Of course, you can also read this book as a group favorite (after all, the author mentioned that the emotional line is really not obvious) ......... Actually, it took me many days to write the review. I can't remember what I wanted to write when I read the book, but I quite liked this book. I also hope this book can be liked by more people... Forget it, hope their lives go on. (Still squatting again) (Maybe more to add?)
Cheng Yanxi/Cheng Yanfeng, Cheng Yanxiu, Li Xuanfeng 1️⃣I haven't seen much of Li Xuanfeng's shining points. Compared with this official official role, I may take a bite of orthopedics (x) 2️⃣Personally, I think the main plot is quite interesting, and the setting of the Cheng family is also interesting. 3️⃣The supporting characters are quite vivid It felt like the ending was a bit rushed, and it felt like it took a long time to prepare for the evil tribes outside the territory, but in the end they were hastily prevented from coming (? Maybe I didn't understand) But overall I think it looks pretty good. Btw, I feel like Cheng Feng is a pathetic guy, but to say he is pathetic would be insulting.
The writing is really beautiful! ! ! ! The character of the protagonist felt a little inferior in the early stage, but then the protagonist is quite talented. The latest chapter seems to have improved a bit, and he is not so inferior [note] I think it should be Li Xuanfeng, I also like his character very much
The good-looking family members are just right for my recent love of cp porn in male videos. It satisfies the growth of men's videos and solves the problem of being unable to make points in men's videos. The story is also very interesting, a type of story book that I have never seen before.
Okay, I've finished reading it. I heard that this is the author's first book! The plot is very good, although the love line is still a bit flawed. Then the ending chapters are a little confusing, but it's understandable if you're not a serious person. Overall, it's very good, novel, and there is still room for improvement. It's great and awesome🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
I have finished it. The story is quite interesting. It is the first two-male protagonist novel that I have been able to finish on Tomato after a long time. There is not much emotional drama (it can be said that there is almost none), but I think the main story is quite attractive, so it is still worth reading. But after reading it, I still feel a slight regret. Although the ending is he, but... It may be a bit rushed. The tragic color of Cheng Feng is still very regrettable. After knowing his experience, I feel that everyone is very good to Cheng hope. It can be said that it is because of love. Bonds and concerns changed his character and made him grow into a better person; only Cheng Feng, whether before or after time travel, he had never had a heart-to-heart relationship with anyone and established a bond. After accepting all the negativity and the fact that everyone did not truly treat him sincerely, (PS: Those parents are not human beings.) His obsession is his grandmother who gave him warmth and was the only one who loved him. I think this may be his regret. Although what he did cannot be forgiven, I also hope that he can return to his grandmother in the end... In summary, it is a good article.
It's very beautiful🤤The low score is really just because there are few people. Friends passing by, don't miss this good book, okay? The protagonist is super cute, a little boy who is a little sensitive and has low self-esteem. The plot is also very interesting. I can't predict the later development at all. I am being fished for updates every day [shy]
The writing is particularly good. I just want to know when Xuan Feng will be able to recognize Cheng hope, and hope that the misunderstanding can be revealed as soon as possible.
I had a lot of feelings when I was reading it, but I don't know what to comment on after reading it. Xixi's psychological description is really good, and it's a very well-written group portrait. The only thing I want to ask the author is how can he not confuse people when writing about so many people in the Cheng family?
Treasure. I have finished reading 61 chapters so far. It's really rare. I rarely see such comfortable and natural looking articles. There is no nonsense, there is logic, and the cause and effect of what happened is clear. He did this not because the plot required it, but because of his character.
The overall plot is quite smooth. As the author's first book, I personally think it is above average. But after the ending was pushed out in the later stage, the ending was a bit sloppy, and the foreshadowing was generally taken back, but some subsequent explanations were a bit vague. But overall it's good.
I think it's very interesting, and I also like Yanxi's character. The subject matter is novel, and the suspense set up is also very attractive. Damn, please update soon. Don't be tired, but don't rest either. I log on Tomato every day just to update you.
My family is very delicious. I have already experienced so much pain [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Damn it, I finished it all at once, why didn't I see woooooooooooooo at the end?
It's pretty good, but has the misunderstanding been resolved? It feels so uncomfortable to kick me once it has been resolved.
It's good to watch, but I'm a little curious about what's going on with the protagonist and Cheng Yanfeng who is coming out now.
Link by link, the plot is still very good, so Cheng hope and Cheng Feng are indeed twin brothers to a certain extent. By the way, when did Cheng Feng enter Xixi's body, and was the grandmother getting worse and worse during that time? Tied, suddenly I had an ominous premonition, don't do it
The whole story is pretty good. I prefer the pairing of the protagonist with Cheng Yanxiu or Cheng Yanfeng. To be honest, the other male protagonist doesn't have any sense of CP.
Nice! The author's worldview is very good and new. His writing style is plain but very attractive. Tomato has a very unique writing style.
It's pretty good-looking, not the current routine or anything like that. It's just that there are too few descriptions of emotions or expressing the inner feelings of the characters, and the empathy is not particularly strong. The main line design is quite good, and the content is also good. But sometimes when I write about something important or attractive, I suddenly switch to another scene, which is a bit abrupt. Probably just to keep the taste alive. All in all, I recommend reading it in one sitting
The teacher's writing is still good ~ the growth-oriented protagonist, although, it may not be that exciting. Although there are two male protagonists, there are not many emotional lines. It is good-looking. The overall main plot of the teacher is still very good, and the characterization is also good.
Nice! Delicate feelings [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It seems I forgot to comment Is Cheng Yanfeng Xiaoliu from his previous life?