World War I: Starting with Saving the Austro-Hungarian Empire

I think this book is pretty well written, with basically no problems, and the plot is connected. Although I don't understand why many people are dissatisfied with the part about returning home from the Qing Dynasty, but in short, from the current chapter I'm reading now, this book is definitely well written. There may be some minor flaws in some aspects, but you can ignore them. In any case, the author's plot is really good and well written. I am not satisfied with most people's views on the recent chapters. I am also dissatisfied with the protagonist's recent addition of a sister and a fucking MI6 agent. In terms of literature, in this book where everyone wants to write about and watch war, a sudden parachuting of a character out of nowhere will indeed cause dissatisfaction among most people. Of course, the author revised the plot in a timely manner. His attitude has been corrected, and he is willing to listen to readers' opinions, which is already rare.

A small suggestion to the author: when writing, you can use more punctuation marks to break up sentences. Firstly, this can reduce the number of words and enrich details (after all, the original sentence is divided into three sentences, and each sentence can add something extra). Secondly, many times a sentence is too long and complex and the clauses give people the feeling of reading in English. The author may not feel it when he writes it, just like I am writing a review now, but it will be more difficult for readers to read than short sentences. After all, novels are mainly for entertainment. I won't comment on the content of the novel because I have only read twenty chapters.

It's a very good historical novel. Although the early Qing Dynasty plot wastes a little time, the overall sense is still good. [Praise]

The writing is very good (except for the part about returning home from the Qing Dynasty), which has a bit of a pre-censorship Hans style.

It's okay, just a little bit poisonous but not serious.

It's very well written. I like the description of naval battles very much. It's a very good article about the First World War. The author should not stop updating it.

Very good-looking, um, yes, British to Lion

I have to say, this book made me listen from beginning to end, and I support

Nicceee I think it's quite interesting, it's rare to see this start

A good novel about Austria-Hungary

It's very good. I've been reading it for a month. It's very good. I just don't know who the heroine is. I think she could be the daughter of Rudolf or Ferdinand [smile] [smile]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author is very good at writing to this level (✪▽✪)

This one star is missing because of the character of the protagonist, everything else is good You deceived my feelings, it turns out I'm not dead

T0 First World War character Conrad with elite troops (the strategy in OTL is very strong, but because the Austrian army itself is too weak, the plan cannot be successfully implemented)

When did he become a marshal?

It looks good, but I don't know if there is a heroine or not.

It's a rare book about Austria-Hungary. I'd like to support it with a good review. Apart from some idealization, there are no big problems.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen one about Austria.

Clear organization and reasonable setting. The plot is fascinating. Please update it