The Straight Man Who Went Through Time and Space Turned into an Animal and Met a Love Brain

It's good-looking and has a very warm feeling. I like it, but their chapters are too short. Their lives are summarized in just a few dozen chapters, which is a bit uncomfortable. They are willing to give opportunities to the younger generations, and the children also inherit their consciousness and habits. Personally, I don't like to see death. I hope they can grow up forever in another world, and I wish they can live forever. The author's writing style seems to me to be very gentle. He made the above comment when the first world was about to end. Looking back, the author must have thought that there would be opinions similar to mine. Death was inevitable at the end, but the two of them were still basking in the sun in the extra chapter. Perhaps death is not the end of the story, but a new life that puts aside the pain. PS: Remember to kick me when the next world is over

It's a very nice book, a sweet and sweet story. The author's descriptions of the natural environment and actions are very natural, more like a diary. The analysis and recording of the protagonist takes up a large part in the middle (especially in the later stages). In fact, I realized that this is a unit article, and I have only finished writing the first world. It's very heartwarming. I watched Xiao Chen slowly integrate into the wolf pack, accept the customs and love of wolves, and finally grow old. The laws of nature are birth, old age, illness and death, but it is still a bit sad to see the final death. The author is very suitable for writing such a dull story, but the author is so fresh, only a little [please update]

The main theme of this article is a long-running story, which is a slow-moving type. The full text is fresh and fresh. The interaction between animals is very loving. The emotional lines are clearly written, and both parties are growing. Overall, it's pretty good, and it's a great record for a novice writer! For a gold-digging type like me, I am used to eating meat, so it feels refreshing to go vegetarian. The author has a lot of room for growth, and his descriptions are also good. He has literary talent, and it will make people's eyes light up when they first read it. This article is a slow read. The author has good writing skills, but similar words and phrases appear repeatedly, which is a bit boring. If the author wants to revise the article later, he can delete some repeated words and phrases appropriately. Finally, let's clear up the confusion: this article does not only describe the two protagonists, but also contains some descriptions of family ties and team relationships, and is a bit fluid, suitable for those who are more patient [learned] (Of course, I might come back and make changes when I see the later stages)

(It's a bit of a spoiler, if you mind, read it again and again after finishing the whole world) This book is very sweet and has a feeling of peace and tranquility in time. Crow Qing and Chen Bao both have their wildest days, hunting fish in the spring of Siberia, searching for water sources in the dry season, and killing brown bears in the winter. They also have leisure time, playing in the water and snuggling in the cave. But no matter when and where, they are already each other's only ones, cooperation that can be understood without words, love that can be known without expressing it. If Chenbao is the sun in midsummer, then Crowqing is the dusk when the sun is about to set. Chen Bao brings the most splendid and lively life to Ya Qing, while Ya Qing gives Chen Bao the gentlest eyes and meticulous care. The moment of parting will always come, but they let us understand that the essence of life lies in inheritance. When individual lives are integrated into the collective bloodline from humanistic stories, another kind of eternal life is achieved. On the other side of the world, people will always remember the scene of two wolves entwining their tails under the tree (World One is so beautiful 😭 I can't bear to see World Two. I hope Crow Qing and Chen Bao in that world can enjoy their time together)

I can confirm that this is a sweet book, but it is so sweet that I burst into tears just reading it. It's obviously a sweet novel, but it gave me a feeling of being stabbed [crying]. Xiao Chen and Ya Qing must be good to each other! I burst into tears [almost crying] The writing is very good, the characters are strong, and there are no surprises! ! Come on!

The writing is very sweet, and the relationship between the protagonists is very touching, but the whole thing is a bit too humane. It is better to write it more wildly. In addition, humans should not appear too much, which is not a good thing for wild animals. They will get used to the presence of humans and will not be wary of thieves. You should also be careful with repeated plots. The leg with an old injury is mentioned all the time in the back of the first world. It should be fine. If there is no major plot, don't emphasize it. But it's the first time the author has written it and it's already very good, great, great [blowing kiss]

Mad, I'm going to cry when I see it [I'm about to cry] Not to torture, just to be moved by their (their) affection for each other to the point of crying [crying] very loudly. Remember not to watch it late at night, as you will not be able to sleep. The author's writing style is excellent. There are no gorgeous words to show off his skills, only simple and sincere descriptions for readers to understand carefully. It's just annoying that it's not finished. Author, you'd better come out and finish the update, otherwise I will really dream of asking you to urge me to update [smile]

Very beautiful, very sweet and not mixed with any interests. There is only the warmth of each other's company to survive the cold winter. What is close to each other is the fiery heartbeat and the details and love hidden in daily life. Very sweet

Although I only read this article by Wolf, I suddenly felt that the word love is heavy. If you want to experience what love feels like, I recommend reading this book. He was very tear-jerking and loved it.

I was really touched by the love between Ya Qing and Xiao Chen. It was very warm and sweet. I felt warm in my heart. I got full marks in the first world! ! ! The writing is so good, the descriptions are very detailed, and you won't find it boring. The more I read, the more I want to read. This is the first time I have seen such a good book on Tomato! ! ! Really highly recommended! ! The author writes so well! ! ! Come on! ! ! [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][shy][shy][shy]

It's really good to watch. I'm really moved by ordinary love. The first world made me burst into laughter. It was too strong and I didn't feel like jumping into the second story quickly. The interaction between the two Siberian wolves was really amazing, especially when they died in the end, and Gong had been waiting in that place. Facing death and meeting my loved one again, I was instantly transported into the scene of the loyal dog Hachiko, crawling every day to wait for his master, and in Wolf Boy, the last protagonist is alone in the snow making a snowman, following the promise of another companion, waiting for the arrival of his beloved [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's so beautiful. This is a pure animal novel. Unlike other animal novels that are anthropomorphic, various animals can communicate smoothly. This novel completely relies on delicate action descriptions and body language to show the feelings between two furry animals. It really feels like watching a documentary about the animal world. The communication between animals may not be as simple and easy to understand as humans, but this kind of warm interaction really touched me. I almost cried to death at the end of "Wolf Wolf". Come on, author, please don't stop updating [Love]

It's pretty cool, but I can't understand what the other person is saying. I feel like something is missing.

Super beautiful!!! Especially the scene about Siberian wolves, it's so beautiful [crying] [love]

The author's writing style is very good, every detail is well described, and there is a sense of a long stream of water. I rarely see this kind of subject matter, but it is very well written. I hope this article will become popular, and I hope the author will update it more (

It's really beautiful! ! ! I have read this article for so many years, and this is the only one that made me cry in the middle of the night. It does not use torture to make you feel uncomfortable, it uses the most plain and sincere words to impress you. It is really beautiful! ! ! You have earned enough tears from me. Teacher, I must continue to do more. I will always follow you! ! !

The writing style is quite good, and it feels a bit like prose. I want to find wild honey from the mountains, which is sweet and refreshing. However, there are too many repetitive sentences, or the author's writing is not strong enough. It feels a bit boring to read more, maybe because I have eaten too much honey, and it is a bit harsh.

A complete story, from the protagonists meeting to falling in love, to growing old together. This is the best, there is no need for human complexity, as long as the two wolves are together From curiosity about the development of the story at the beginning, to excitement, to melancholy at the end of the first life Just show me crying again and again It's definitely worth reading this article!

The author's writing is so good [blowing kiss]. To be honest, I kept crying when I saw the back of the first world. I used to think that love should be vigorous, but through the author's writing, I realized ordinary love. This is really the first time I have seen the love of C P The life of the elderly is described in such detail [cry], but the plain love of the elderly makes people want to cry [cry] It is really sad to see them grow old [cry] The author's writing style is also good [KISS] The author loves you ❤️[KISS]

Not bad, the author's writing style still has room for improvement. Emotional lines account for the majority and plot lines are relatively small. The author used a lot of pen and ink to describe their feelings in the article, but it was too much, and it seemed like writing to make up for the word count. The descriptions in some places are inappropriate, which is not bad, but they are used in the wrong place. The first world, I saw a lot of descriptions and thought it was going to end [face covering] [face covering] Overall it's still very good. If some descriptions of emotions could be deleted and more plot lines added, it would appear smoother, more vivid and natural.

Everyone must not listen to "World 1: Siberian Wolf (End)" until the last page. In the end, Xiao Chen died. A few hours before his death, his words to Ya Qing were so cruel that I shed tears.

It was very well written and made me cry. When I finished the first story, I saw the second story about Xiao Chen. It was still Xiao Chen, but he had forgotten it. . . Suggestion: It would be nice if he stayed there forever. After the first protagonist is finished, just write the second one with [new name] Because it means that this is a new story and new characters, instead of letting Xiao Chen forget and start over again... So how to calculate the plot of the first story? What does it mean? It's not that this is bad, it's also good, but it just feels like it's been denied. Xiao Chen and Ya Qing have been denied, and my (as a reader) tears are also... Are they in vain?

The writing is super good. When I just finished reading the first world, I thought I didn't have too much emotion. But when I saw the second world and the fragmentary memories of the protagonist, I realized that the warm and soft words of DaDa have long entered my heart. The words of DaDa are as sweet and light as marshmallows! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss][almost crying]

In the first scene, I burst into tears. I wrote the life of Yao Qing and Xiao Chen with warm and regretful writing. I couldn't bear to part with it😭😭😭

Author, I am so lucky to read the story of two wolves written by you! Recently, I have been troubled by various emotions and have no interest in many things in life. When I happened to see your work, I seemed to be hit. From the two wolves, I saw the purest emotion and state of life. It goes from conflict to love, even if you are afraid, you will never leave. After a brief separation, just to be together again. Hunting together, clinging to each other for warmth, such simple companionship has become the most perfect form of love, without the complicated thoughts, desires and calculations in the human world. In contrast, "being a human being" feels really tiring. However, through this story, I also gained some insights. Although it may not be profound, it is very real: Don't always worry about the future, just cherish the present; when making choices, follow your own heart, and as long as you don't regret it, do it boldly. Death is not terrible. As long as you can experience the various flavors of life and do not regret the choices you have made, your life will be complete. Thank you so much for bringing such a great story!

After watching the first world, this kind of scene happened many times: two wolves were having intimate behavior, then Chen found out that they were being filmed, and started to be shy and awkward. Then Chen and Yaqing got along with each other and expressed emotion. They didn't need to care about the camera or the discussions of netizens. This scene has appeared many times, and every time I feel that I don't need to care about the video content or netizens, but I will go through this scene in order next time. It looks very strange. The author said that this is his first time writing an article, and he hopes that his writing style will improve in the future. Come on.

Very pure love. In the first world when they were at the end, Xiao Chen's "I'm Waiting for You" and Yao Qing's "I'm Coming" were very touching [crying]; in the second world, Xiao Chen was looking for him. It felt like Xiao Chen was reborn after leaving the first world. The person he couldn't remember was because that person hadn't come yet. When he came, Xiao Chen would definitely remember Yao Qing! (I have just read Chapter 2 of The Second World so far. The above are my guesses and expectations)

The first story of Ya Yaqing and Xiao Chen is so touching [crying] [crying] The emotion between them is really [crying] The author's writing style is really good. He writes about them as if they are really around us.

Really, I cried to death [crying], even though there were no knives, Ya Qing and Xiao Chen made me cry in the end.

Baby, you are sincere, brave and kind, and I know your sensitivity and fragility. You are cute and have a good personality. Sensitivity is a gift. It is never a shortcoming, it is a unique inner strength. You are a good baby, the most worthy and best baby in the world. It's okay. Now that you have met me, you no longer have to pretend to be strong by yourself. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box?