Marvel: Lin Hai

The rhythm is very comfortable, and the atmosphere of the protagonist group is also very good. So when will Spider-Man's curse happen, if Uncle Ben doesn't die? 😏 How about arranging for the main character to die in the arms of Little Spider? I can't stop thinking about it.

Chapter 6: I really can't stand it any longer, why don't I just lick it hard? I feel like the protagonist must take the S. H. I. E. L. D. Route When I first went to New York, a master unexpectedly came to me and called me Neijiaquan - the day after I met him After discovering his abilities, he inexplicably set a small goal to save Iron Man because he didn't want his brain cursed by knowledge to be delayed too much by such trivial matters. Tony Stark's wisdom should be used to explore the profound principles of all things. On the first day of school in 2000, my deskmate, Spider-Man (I was born in 2001, I can accept changing the timeline with no problem) and specifically emphasized that it was confirmed to be in the movie universe (how did you confirm it)? Then he showed his abilities to Spider-Man inexplicably because he knew that Spider-Man was a good person. I'm really speechless. How did you do this crazy thing? Original text Lin Hai wanted to set a small goal for himself first, that is, while witnessing the birth of Iron Man eight years later, he would also find a way to use his own abilities to solve his palladium metal poisoning problem, and even cure him completely! Because he doesn't want his brain cursed by knowledge to be delayed too much by such trivial matters. Tony Stark's wisdom should be used to explore the profound principles of all things. The second paragraph (we just met on the first day of school) "It's nothing, it's just..." Lin Hai hesitated and decided to show off his abilities a little bit, because Peter Parker is a good person, a person who can be called a good person in every sense. He opened his schoolbag gently and let Peter see the mint leaves dancing around his fingertips, "a little trick." Peter's eyes widened: "This... This is not scientific! How did you do it? Some kind of chemical reaction? Or some super power?" Lin Hai smiled slightly and ended the exchange with Mint, "Ancient Eastern skills." He said mysteriously.

Chapter 7: Less than a day after meeting, the protagonist told Little Spider about his abilities. Your master is so kind to you and you didn't even tell him. What kind of person are you.

The pace of the novel is very comfortable. If you are used to reading fast-paced novels, you will feel a little slow in the plot in the first few chapters, but the pace of the subsequent plot is brisk but not intense, and full of youthfulness. The abilities and psychological growth among the team members appear delicate, but I personally feel that the psychological transformation and growth of the protagonist is a bit subtle compared to the social animal in the setting. Rather than being a social animal, it is more like a young man who is familiar with the plot and integrates into society but is full of hope for society.

The group portrait article is quite good, but I still recommend that the author strengthen Spider-Man, Harry and Gwen so that they are not too far behind the protagonist. It is also best to have abilities that the protagonist does not have to complement each other, otherwise it may not be easy to write group portraits later.

4 Stars are for the author's writing, which is really good... Very interesting! It's just a bit too detailed. It completely starts with the protagonist's high school, and then college in the second volume... By the time the official plot begins, it's already Chapter 250 at the end of the second volume... It's quite interesting to read as a daily development story. If you want to read it, I guess you have to be able to endure it. I didn't endure it, and I guess many people can't endure it 🤭 "Don't Listen" is already much better than those one-man dramas. Many novels have been written about the protagonist's various development. At least the protagonist team has four people interacting, which is why I am willing to give 4 stars.

On the first day we met, I told others about my super power.

A book worthy of eight points, but because the pace is a bit slow, there is no climax, it does not conform to the basic values ​​of Tomato, and it does not meet the public's taste for daily writing. It only took about three years after the 100th chapter. Let's see if the author can persevere. After all, except for Mijia game fans who are popular among students, other fan fictions are relatively niche. Just Jiang Zi 😎

Poor and boring

Overall, this book is quite good. Judging from the 119 chapters that have been updated so far, it is generally quite daily. It is not a subject that is exciting to fight. Of course, part of the reason is because the main plot of the movie has not yet begun. The protagonist also intentionally forms his own team and does not plan to join S. H. I. E. L. D. By the way, this book should have a single heroine, Gwen, and Spider-Man's girlfriend is Mary Jane. Chapters 1-119 are more daily and relaxed for the time being. If you like the daily relaxed style, you can read it.