(Marvel movies + a little DC + Honkai: Star Rail characters appear + male protagonist Gudao + no couples) (The novel was reset, and it was too hard to revise, so I can only start posting Volume Two directly. Marvel is the main setting, but characters from other anime will appear too!)
I'm a new author and have never written a novel before, so my writing is immature. I'll try to avoid OOC (which means there's a good chance of OOC!). I'm sensitive, so please go easy on me. Thanks. Here's the plot summary.
“Shocking! Is it a distortion of human nature or a collapse of morality?”
“During the Battle of New York, a white-haired girl wielding a scythe summoned a giant dragon. The Chitauri were caught off guard by a dragon flying right into their faces!”
“King Arthur has returned! It turns out the legendary king was a woman in disguise. Britain's historians are in an uproar, and the legend of King Arthur is being rewritten!”
“Tragic news: The history of China has been turned upside down, and a history student's thesis is ruined! China's Great Wall is actually a railgun! The First Emperor destroyed an alien invaders' warship with a single strike!”
“The purple potato monster invaded Earth and was given a warning by a helpful ‘Galaxy Ranger.’”
“You will die. I mean, all of you will!”
The writing is very good, and the character of Ritsuka is also maintained very well. The author writes that Ritsuka is not particularly ambiguous towards the female servants. He treats them completely as a family member, which is very comfortable. It is not like what I have seen before, where Ritsuka is completely used as a cover. Come on, author!!! 😢😢😢
There are too few people writing type moon articles, so I encourage you to give me one star. Xingyue plus Marvel Cinematic Universe, the subject matter is quite good, but the new author can't control the scenes to some extent. "The character creation is one-sided, he likes to use colloquial language, the description of the battle scenes is not specific enough, and the understanding of combat power levels is not thorough enough." I am purely motivated by love, and I hope I can finish this book smoothly and use it as a pen practice to improve my writing skills.
It's good, as long as you keep it up, but the author has to guarantee a minimum of 4,000 words. In this case, you will get a perfect attendance award. At least having a minimum guarantee is not to generate electricity for love. Also, try not to have too many lines. For example, a new enemy suddenly appears in the middle of the killing. After all, many novices write too many lines at the same time and there is no focus at all.
The writing is good, much better than some novels about the shape of the moon. However, some aspects still need to be improved. For example, there is no need to talk about the Noble Phantasm 1. After all, reading a novel is not about the introduction of the Noble Phantasm, so I give it 4 stars. I hope this book can set sail [Chigua]
The look and feel is okay, but I can't understand any of the elements related to Iron Breaker. Maybe it's because I only play Fgo [smile]
The author must work hard and keep writing. It's really hard to find novels that suit your heart.
Well written and beautiful!
It's great, but updates are too slow.
Come on, the author is great