
A Guide to Making Cards from Alien Wai Niang
异世界人外娘制卡指南
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- 867k Words
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- Urban
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- Urban High Martial Arts
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If You Want to See Cards, You Can Make Cards or Royal Cards.
Don't let Chinese mythology break up, don't let it be a system, I really can't stand this kind of thing
I Want the Protagonist to Be a Purely Numerical Monster, Relying on the Numerical Crushing Mechanism
I want to watch something similar to "One drop of blood forever, I will still be invincible!" Book.
Imperial writing needs to be true and ruthless. Which person who could establish a dynasty in ancient times was not ruthless?
The Most Promising New Book in 2026, with an Absolute Potential of 9.9 Points!
I want to see content similar to "The Battle for Hegemony in Troubled Times Begins with Summoning Xiang Yu, the Overlord of Western Chu". History, historical imagination, martial arts, martial arts imagination. It must be a new book in 2026. Those on the list are not required and will be updated in real time. The logic is online, the plot is smooth, and the fighting is exciting.
Let Me Refute the Rumors. Tomato Does Not Charge Fees, but Some Novels Are VIP
As long as the writing is good, the protagonist is constantly updated (preferably the one that has been completed) and the protagonist is not pretentious! ! !
A Collection of Construction, Survival, Management and Novels.
All types of novels are accepted, whether the pig's feet are birds, animals or monsters, I can accept them.
Articles About Capturing, Selling, and Breeding Exotic Animals
The throne shall be washed with blood. The new king will eventually kill the past king. Now let me announce: My tomato novel's annual best novel selection and three sacred book selections begin now!
Card Worldview➕card Fusion
I want to read a book like "Cards: My Extraordinary Business Empire". Looking for good card novels~
The Protagonist Can See the Qualifications of Others, Buy Slaves or Recruit Qualified People.
The protagonist can see the qualifications of others and buy slaves or recruit qualified people to form a force, preferably those with a title system.
Please Recommend Harem Articles
Please recommend this harem story. I have read it before but forgot the title. I vaguely remember that the heroine's surname is Su and the male protagonist's surname is Zong. Please recommend me. 😍😍😍
Card Fusion, Innovative Card Making
Do you guys have any novel card novels?
A High Score of 9.9. the More You Watch It, the Better It Looks. You Won't Get Tired of It Even After Ten Times!
I want to watch content similar to "The Abandoned Daughter of the Miracle Doctor Returns Again".
Looking for Card Books, Nice Card Books!
Card maker, drawing cards and the like, serious shortage of books
I'm Looking for Someone to Make Cards. I've Recently Become Obsessed with Card Making.
Card making + King, card making + lol, card making + Pokémon, card making + historical figures, card making + Genshin Impact, card making + comprehensive comic. The score is preferably 8.0 Or above, please🙏🏻
The Beast-Taming Style Is No Longer Good, It's All Supported by Old Books
Here are some new beast-controlling books, preferably ones from this year's recommendation list. I've been pushing them back and forth, but I haven't seen many of them this year. I've read all of last year's books, but not many of them are to my liking. I just relied on revisiting "The Charm of Favor" to keep me going.
Card Master, Collect Rare Cards and Build an Invincible Deck
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The Gods of the Whole People No Longer Have a Masterpiece to Carry the Cauldron, Wen Is Not Convinced to Argue →_→
Want to watch something similar to "Age of Gods: Evolution by Billions!" Book.
Invincible, Cool, Sword-Free, Multi-Female Types, If You Satisfy These, Bring Eyes
Occupations in Games, Novels Realized in Reality
Occupations in games, novels realized in reality
Anime Characters Come to Reality and Gain Animation Abilities
A Few People Can Enter the Game That Affects Reality. Do Not Join the Official. Lone Wolf.
I want to see content similar to "Card Game: From Small Puddle to Ocean Kingdom". We are out of books, please help me.


































































































It's a good novel in the card genre. I just hope that the author can extract the negative aspects of aberrations separately and not take up the position of the race in the natal card. After all, the extraction can be sold to wandering merchants in the end.
It can be called a new genre. I have been reading the book for so long, and the writing is very interesting. It is not that AI can be seen as so defiant, but it is definitely a real person. AI still cannot replace humans. Ah, what the host, there must be something wrong with this adventure game. These are somewhat different from this one. This one is a card, so of course it can be considered a variant.
"Card Fusion" Once written, the world is astonished, and a book can spread throughout the ages; The pattern is overwhelmingly mysterious, the sense of exhilaration is beyond the long night, the power strategy is steady, the luck is great, and the epic is beyond the son-in-law; Blood runs through the sky, fighting for supremacy and subduing the sky, every word is a god, every chapter is a god; I don't regret what I have experienced in this life. I only regret the author's late update. It topped the list with overwhelming votes, and this book will definitely be on the market for nine days!
I like this kind of accumulation and development bit by bit. Occasionally, I have a chance to accelerate it. As long as it is logically tenable, I can add anything [smirk] Have you thought about how to deal with the cards with negative distortion? Too many waste cards will affect the population and affect the combat effectiveness. It won't work if you merge into your life and you will be resurrected and sent to death. Think about what to do.
I found a treasure, it's very good, very stable, and very comfortable to watch, especially the author, Monster Girl is a bit interesting, the content is also good, the world view is also spreading, I look forward to the future, it's very good [like] Suddenly I thought of Zhao Mengmeng. Judging from the content, either this woman does have some problems and the plot is extended, which doesn't matter, or she is just a newbie. Anyway, my personal suggestion is not to write it as a heroine. You have a monster girl. It doesn't matter whether you have a heroine in reality. Don't touch this point that is difficult to write. If it is purely cute, it doesn't feel too involved. It is too weak. Trying to keep up with the protagonist is a bit fake. The protagonist's progress speed is simply unbelievable [laughing and crying] Anyway, don't let the protagonist rescue you or give too many resources. I'm just saying this in advance. Anyway, you haven't written it yet [laughs and cries], mainly because you're afraid of writing it like this, which is a bit cliche [face covering]
From a side story perspective, I quite like it. . . But I don't know if it's just my misunderstanding. Chapter 110, which is suspected to be AI-generated [face covering], describes every action and expression of the characters in detail, which is really too overwhelming. . . Just keep the quality of the previous one. Although there are flaws, it's pretty good in the marginalia. I hope to return to the original style in the future. .
The previous idea is very interesting, combining card production with followers, environment, items, terrain and so on. The combination of reality and game aspects is also very good. Generally speaking, the main line development cards and the linear daily life are very complementary and beautiful. Updates have been a bit lackluster in the past few days. I expected to give it three and a half stars, but I couldn't figure out how to give it half a star. Thinking about it, I also paid for nothing, so I gave it four stars. I'll give you some gifts after my salary is paid. The further you get to the back, the more you write, the more you draw.
At first, I watched it because of the gimmick of the review guide for different world custom girls, but overall it is more like God Simulator, and there are more emotional scenes that God Simulator does not have, but overall it is much worse than God Simulator, but it is also very cool. The overall atmosphere is relaxed and adventurous, and you are invincible in the world. Very to my liking👍🏻 In the later period, the AI flavor became more intense, and I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away. Moreover, the plot of "I Don't Eat Beef" was not well written. The atmosphere at the beginning was very relaxed, but when the protagonist suddenly kills people in the real world, he lost touch with the character, and it was a bit taken for granted.
The setting is good, the plot is okay, but there are early problems, such as not maximizing physical strength, inexplicable performance when contacting the official, conflicting data and context, and bringing a girl (?), Which affect the perception a bit. The author also praised it a lot in the comments. I don't know if it's because I wrote it later and it's hard to change the front, or I'm just too lazy to change it. I hope the later writing will get better and better.
Come on author! I like to read this kind of synthesis book, just to see what can be synthesized from several different things in the end. I didn't bother to write the back of the synthesis book I read before, and it didn't have the sense of surprise like opening a blind box.
The plot of the novel is laid out naturally, the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood, the dialogue is not stiff, and the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out. The writing is delicate and smooth, the rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and the reading is very visual, which always makes people immersed in it unconsciously. The logic of the story is online, and the emotions are highly contagious. The more you read, the more you will get hooked. It is a very powerful article that is worth following up. The novel is really gripping, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the mood and atmosphere are just right. It feels very immersive when reading, and every chapter makes people want to continue reading. The writing is smooth and natural, the rhythm is comfortable, and it can be seen that it is very carefully written. The whole book is both tense and not cluttered. It is a rare and enjoyable article. This article is really attractive, the plot is unconventional, the characters are distinct and three-dimensional, and every twist is just right. The writing is smooth and comfortable, and the atmosphere is full of atmosphere. It is not awkward at all to read, and the emotions are in place. The more you follow it, the more you get to know it. You can see that the author has solid skills and the story is so exciting that you can't stop watching it.
It's good to watch. There's not much to say about the 50-plus chapters. I can only say that it's quite interesting to play World Class with Super Cards. The character of the protagonist is also very normal. He's neither a super hero nor a virgin, just a very ordinary player's mentality. I just hope it will be faster [please update]
It's a relatively bland novel, the plot doesn't have too many ups and downs, and it reads quite smoothly. If I want to say something is not good, it is the character creation, such as the water elf, minotaur and so on. The author can't write about women, so don't force the description. Later, the behavior is written like a little fairy, which made me feel embarrassed. There isn't much pretentious plot, the protagonist upgrades very smoothly, he easily ranks first, and there is no bitterness or hatred. It's worth watching. If the female character's characterization was better, I would give it five stars. They are not earthlings, nor earthly women, nor Chinese fairies. Women in other worlds may have different concepts and behaviors, so there is no need to forcefully apply them [face covering] [face covering]
I finished reading it in one go, the setting is good, you can probably tell that you want to go from the pool to the world. That Zhao Mengmeng was a bit sudden. He was discovered first and then he was still in the game. The protagonist just checked in and came out like an NPC. Later, there was a feeling that there would be a conflict with her in reality. It is estimated that this will be the only effect in the end, otherwise it will be included in the harem.
It's okay, just don't use the word "water", don't let the sperm get into your head, otherwise the character of the protagonist will be very bad, and the reader's investment will be very bad later, and the plot is good. The speed is suitable, the calculation of physical strength is a problem, you can substitute the perspective of the protagonist as an ordinary person, not a noble personality, there is no absolutely clear bottom line. (If you have any suggestions, please add them below)
7.5 Points, highly recommended. A book with clear pros and cons. Stopped at chapter 120, wondering whether to continue pursuing it. Advantages: relatively distinct card system. Almost everything in the game can be made into cards. At the same time, the protagonist's gold finger is very open, and the small water pool he carries can integrate most things, giving people a sense of simulation management. There are almost no major difficulties along the way. There are no bottlenecks in terms of resources or cards. At the same time, there are relatively few descriptions of reality, and the reading is very coherent. Disadvantages: The female characters are not described well, as can be seen from the introduction and names. This is a harem-focused novel, but the portrayal of female characters and the interconnection between multiple female protagonists are not very good. Even if it describes a lot of tauren sacrifices and water elements, it feels like carrying two cups with you. It is awkward to get along with each other, which makes people very uncomfortable.
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The subject matter is novel and the world view is clear. Although the writing is a bit problematic for a newbie writer, the plot is draggy and there are many water characters, but the flaws are not hidden. After all, there is no charge to read books on Tomato, eh. . So be it.
Encourage and encourage, the water element is very cute, rua, please have more interactions like this [laughter][like][like][like] I have a weird numerical value. The protagonist punches a trillion kilograms. If you say you can explode stars at this density, I will believe it [fear][fear]
This book is very interesting, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Fight for hundreds of rounds. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I compare Appreciate Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't stop in front of your brother Liang." Angry at the monkey who beat him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.
It's a good book, the writing style is very soft, and it has a sense of everyday life. There are no gorgeous rhetoric or overly pretentious plots where the villain slaps the face, and the writing is very natural. It's been a long time since I've encountered a novel that I liked so much.
So pretty! It is known that not only the protagonist has cards, but also the national team does not exist. As long as it does not make a big deal, no one will care! The laws of the dark forest do not hold true! It's exactly what the author said. The protagonist has a pointy head. Compared with other novels of the same type, the protagonist's IQ is not even a little lower than that of a tame one.
You can see by smoothing out the wrinkles in your brain. After all, it is essentially non-brainy, and it is okay to pass the time. Some operations are very demented. Also, this book was expanded using AI (many people should have seen the prompt words while reading). I haven't read more than a hundred chapters [Chigua]
It has a good plot, which is more novel than the card novels I have read before. It is a good world. You can consider conquering other worlds in the future. So far, it is not bad. The daily life and battles are well written. You can consider referring to wizard novels and some infinite flow novels. The latter tends to be semi-invincible, and you can directly pile up the values, just like in the prehistoric times. Your uncle Pangu took a nap and didn't know what the law was. He killed all the demons with one axe. People in the back called it the law of power. The plot in the back was good, and the world was also very novel.
The writing is pretty good. I stayed up all night to catch up on more than 160 chapters. Except for Zhao Mengmeng's writing in the early stage, there are no major bad points in the writing.
It's okay, but when it comes to writing about God, it gets a bit messy. It's obvious that the author's pace is too fast, and I can't control it. Just write whatever comes to mind. The current eight-point rating is quite consistent
It's a good book. The poisonous part just emerged in the middle. All book lovers have come back to it, so you can read it with confidence.
Although the text is a bit long-winded, it describes the scene and framework of the time very well. The plot is compact and the characters are three-dimensional. I just hope that there will be no harem in the future.
The setting is okay and quite interesting, but this kind of setting tests imagination. The author has to work hard to imagine [shy], and the realistic plot feels a bit too sloppy. It pays more attention to different worlds. I hope the specific details can be improved in the future. This is a book with great potential, keep it up!