Konoha: Commissar Naruto, the Chainsword Purifies the Ninja World

Different Naruto brings different experiences, this is great. Whether it is the absolute obedience and loyalty of officers and soldiers, or the use of absolutely cold instructions to protect the most sincere warmth, they all have a different color. But Naruto is not Warhammer after all. In the process of becoming an emperor, if you keep making weapons without any fun, it will be very boring. Therefore, I think the existence of Hyuga Hinata can be the last harbor in the protagonist's heart. There is no need to describe too much, because too many words will cause your popularity to decrease. Whether it is an officer and his detector, or his assistant, there is occasional interaction, and to maintain the highest status in each other's hearts, it is enough to choose the most sincere emotions for both parties. (I said so much, but actually I just want some sugar to quench my thirst)

It's a great book that makes my brain spin. I like to read fast-paced books. I couldn't bear to read this one. After reading this book, I feel like reading other books is boring. I have never played Warhammer, and I like the writing style created by the characters, environment, demeanor, and language in the article very much! Forgive me for my lack of words, but I feel that Naruto in this book is very... Sharp! But under the surface of hard and cold colors, there is another layer of warm undertones belonging to him. The author describes Naruto's orderliness and does not portray him as a dull image that is common in the market. The so-called running machine is a protagonist who can truly think, analyze, and truly make decisions. He is shaped by that worldview and fits perfectly. Ah... Every character in the book is very vivid and vivid. It's not like an author wrote the story (praise), it's like they thought, decided, struggled, and experienced what would really happen in that world. I won't summarize the plot of the book. I am an old bookworm, and this is the only book I am following during my book-weary period. [Like][Like][Like]

I feel that the writing is quite good, especially the perspective does not start from the most famous space warrior, but from the political commissar. Only the political commissar can train a group of cowardly mortals into the sharpest blades. The writing is also quite good, and the writing style is very outstanding. Is the author interested in going to One Piece to develop it later? Using Luffy as the perspective, directly joining the navy, and then rectifying it should be a good development path.

I haven't read Warhammer and I don't have any preconceived ideas. However, the author still writes very well. Most of the character descriptions are reasonable. Except for Naruto, no one else has appeared OOC so far. Keep up the good work, author! It looks good. I love watching it. Let's do this first. .

Very good. In the past, Naruto was shouting: bonds, friendship and so on. First of all, there is only one word: loyalty! Anyway, there is no darkness, and there is no Virgin Heart. The image created is very distinct. It is a very good book.

The front is quite nice, but after the entrance examination, there are a lot of poisons when fighting the snakes, the soldiers and weapons of the war hammer have been cut into dogs, and no one can absorb the energy of the wooden dragon to practice the giant sword [face covering]

It's interesting, beautiful, and caters to the user's reading aesthetic. The threshold is very broad, even if you don't know Warhammer, you can still read it.

The author looks like an old Warhammer at first glance, and his writing style is not bad, but he completely follows the original plot line, and I left after reading Chapter 38. If you don't mind, you can take a look, it's quite nice. Three stars, four stars is a bit too much

Rationality, with a typical Warhammer style, should be the reason for Asura. Deep in the rationality, there is still a trace of humanity. The description is repetitive, and it is suspected to be created by AI.

Although I have only read half of this novel, it is really exciting. This novel has made me understand the spirit of Warhammer 40k better. This is the power of faith. I respect the word political commissar more and more, and that heavy will!

The subject matter is very novel, and the transformation of Naruto by Tadashi Academy is also very consistent. The plot development is also very interesting, but the weakening of Astartes and Warhammer technology is too serious. Let's just say that there is nothing in Naruto that can block the power sword, and the decomposition field can It's no joke. The maximum speed of an ordinary Astartes reaches 60km/h (the game and CG are so slow and leisurely to let us see clearly). In close combat, no one (the character in Naruto) can beat an Astartes.

Okay, this kind of novel. Each character's personality is pretty much controlled. There seems to be no OOC at the moment. The author did not change the characters randomly. I feel that at this rate, it should have no CP or be an official match.

It feels okay. Hammers of this type are rare. I just feel that I have no respect for the emperor, and some parts feel a bit unjustifiable. But it still looks pretty good. I can keep it and see what happens next.

Well, the main character is a machine-like commander, a super soldier. He is also like a paranoid philosopher with obsessive-compulsive disorder, constantly analyzing and structuring the information flow he receives, dissecting all phenomena to discover the essence of things, then assessing threats, formulating strategies, and eliminating subjective emotional interference. Discipline, iron blood, and order are his principles. Protecting the continuation of mankind is his goal. Repairing system loopholes must be efficient and smooth. I have read Chapter 189 so far. If the level can be maintained in the future, I think a score of 9 will be no problem. The protagonist comes from the Warhammer world. His description reminded me of my interest in the Warhammer world and whether the people in that world are so interesting.

Don't tell me, there is still something good about it. Although it still has flaws, it is better than most fan fiction. On the one hand, the inexplicable invincibility and new power system will reduce the sense of reality. On the other hand, as a microcosm of the Warhammer world, it lacks the protagonist's own color. However, the overall flaws are not hidden, the plot is acceptable, the rhythm is compact, and the logic is strong.

The subject matter is novel and the writing is manageable, but I feel the details are not very good. It is worth recommending. Three stars, unique, but not a hit

I don't know much about Warhammer, but the style of this book is very different from other Naruto novels. The protagonist is not just obsessed with his own power, but sees the ninja world as a whole, uniting the ninja world to resist foreign enemies. To be honest, I am very curious about how desperate he must be to see the Astartes Legion when Otsutsuki comes. . .

Nice! ! It makes my blood boil to see it! I finished reading it before I knew it! I can't describe the feeling, but I really like this style anyway, and it fits the original character very well. Make them stronger! Nice! [Blowing kiss]

How to say it? From a Warhammer perspective, it's a pretty good book. It's not bad to see it from Naruto's perspective✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎ If the two are combined, it is still very good for Warhammer fans and Naruto fans. It is very niche and very good.

So far, the writing style is pretty good. The character creation does not rigidly fit into the Warhammer worldview. It incorporates the iron-blooded elements of the Empire while retaining its own character. The Hammer flavor does not become diluted. This boundary is well grasped.

I'm looking forward to a first hand, it's not an invincible article, it still needs time to develop, which is a bit uncomfortable.

Using AI to write Warhammer is a genius idea, it looks great!

After watching the beginning, I was so loyal. Although some details of Naruto's changes were not explained clearly, it was very interesting to slowly explain them as the plot progressed.

The combat is cool, the logic is cool, the characters are cool, long live the emperor.

The writing is very good, full of flavor, and loyalty needs no words!

Although people outside the Warhammer circle don't know much about it, it's really cool to see it [thoughts]

It is very beautiful to watch. There are some minor flaws but they do not affect the viewing. The plot is very good and very consistent with the original work and the game settings. The negative comments in the comment section are basically nitpicking. The plot is compact and enjoyable. I recommend it.

I feel like some of the plots are weird, and Naruto's settings are not clearly explained. For example, Bai Zemo was suppressed and subsumed by Zuidunjia's spiritual power. It was too sudden. Overall it's great. Warhammer's worldview is indeed far ahead of the village version hahahaha

I'll give it a 4 first. It's quite enjoyable to watch so far, but it mostly follows the plot and doesn't have much of my own content. Let's watch it later. Anyway, it's not much different from the original work now, except that the character has been slightly changed.

This is my second favorite Naruto fanfic. The writing is delicate and logical, not sloppy at all. The description of the characters is also very good, and the details are simply full. It seems that there is no female protagonist at the moment. I love Naruto's setting as calm, smart, and sharp. I would call this book top notch! !