Become Invincible from Leading the Dragon Kingdom and Eating Through the Gray Mist

[Sending Hearts] The subject matter is very good and innovative, and the things are well described, but I haven't finished it yet. (I don't mean to say that the author's writing is bad, it may be due to my personal tolerance) One star is given to the subject matter. Here are some lightning protections and minor spoilers: Although the novel is labeled as having no heroine, the author will add some white, tender and delicate descriptions to the female character, and the writing is very similar to the heroine. I felt a little uncomfortable coming from the novel without a heroine, and felt that the protagonist was more concerned about her career. Too much description of the female appearance felt like it was leading to ambiguity. Also, the way this female student stretches her legs is really hard to say, from a certain comic book of Vision... Then the character creation of this female student is also a bit... She is a prostitute and not very smart. In this way, I hope that the author will write more live broadcasts describing the ingredients compared to diners.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style needs to be improved. I've seen the author's homepage, and there are over a million works. The writing style shouldn't be stuck in the same place. You can really slow down the speed. Even if it's one chapter a day, as long as it is polished, there will be many more readers left. Here are some suggestions for authors 1. Small errors. There are quite a few errors in some details in the first few chapters. For example, when cooking the tentacles of the deep sea monster, an audience member in the live broadcast room said "it smelled" and it seemed to be quite fragrant. I don't know how I smelled it. 2. Regarding the "audience", those audiences are too receptive. The protagonist appeared for the first time and told him where his weird weakness was. The audience actually believed it (ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟдﾟ)!? 3. The mentality of the protagonist. The protagonist is just a "little character" who can hardly survive at the beginning. From facing the fear of the weird to killing the D-level weird without changing his expression in a single chapter, it only takes one chapter, which is too fast. I've only read a few chapters, but I haven't seen the subsequent chapters about quitting. This subject is really good. If you write it well, you can get high marks.

The novel has a clear structure and is super curious. It is simply good news for novel lovers. In the era of evil gods, how did humans survive in hunger and fear, and how did they awaken the evil god's gourmet system? Please read the book to find the answer.

It's not bad, it made me hungry. The only thing I don't like is that there are too many annoying things.

I like it, it looks good, the author describes it very carefully

The anchor's cooking skills are very good and every dish is very delicious.

The setting is super novel! In the apocalypse of the Gray Mist Evil God, the protagonist awakens the food system and uses the terrifying evil god as top ingredients for live cooking, charcoal-grilled shadows, pan-fried tentacles, hunting for novelties and cooking, and his brain is bursting ~ Leave a review after reading!

No wonder there is no heroine, it's so good

After reading it, I have endless aftertaste. I feel that the writing is very exciting. I will continue to read it later.

This weird food + imagination combination is definitely my first, and the author's thought is rare!

This setting is very easy to use, beautiful, five stars

Have ideas. There are ideas, content, writing style, plot, rich and beautiful

It's very good, it has a great sense of immersion, and it's a little scary.

Absolutely exquisite and delicious, I have no words to say, this book will be a hit

Very good, very beautiful, totally worthy of five stars

I like it, I will continue to read it

The author writes so well that I can feel the temptation of delicious food through the screen

Using novel techniques and a novel perspective, a good work was written

A very interesting novel, I support it with five stars.

The perspective of this article is not unique, and the author's imagination is not comparable to that of ordinary people. [Stare][Stare][Stare]

Very novel subject matter and very well written.

Very interesting. I like it very much. The author really thinks, haha, interesting novel

As someone who loves food, I absolutely love this book. The content is very creative and novel, and the characters are very interesting and natural. Come on, I will continue reading.

The pace of upgrading is well controlled, not too fast to make people feel vain, not too slow to make people anxious, and relaxed!

The evil gourmet, every meal can increase spiritual power, which is interesting.

The more I watch it, the more I like it. It's so attractive that it takes me to watch it all the way.

The novel is wonderfully written, the writing is eloquent, the writing is great, and it is very attractive.

The content is great. The plot is exciting, with delicious food and martial arts, and colorful content.

A good novel, I will continue to read it

Very good, the more you look at it, the more you like it