Become a White-Haired Villain? Reborn Heroine, Don't Kill Me!

Nice! 💡 Analysis of highlights - Anti-routine setting: The protagonist has changed from the traditional "Long Aotian" villain to a vulnerable character who needs to survive under the reincarnation of the heroine, which is full of contrast. - Emotional tension: It combines the elements of "yandere" and "sadistic". The heroine has complex emotions towards the villain, including hatred for revenge and other hidden feelings. The plot is full of suspense. 1. Rhythm and writing style: The author admits that the rhythm in the early stage was chaotic and the writing style was immature, but the subsequent writing level gradually improved; there was a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and the plot was depressing. 2. 3. 4. Highlights: Contrasting character designs (cute time traveler vs. Vicious original owner, tough and vengeful heroine), delicate psychological portrayal of the characters, many plot foreshadowings, and gradually unfolding the power lines and character relationships. (Actually, if you play with AI-generated pictures, some character and scene pictures are also very beautiful, but no one mentions them)

I've finished reading, and this review reaches chapter 48. The author's writing style is quite good, and the narrative has everything it needs. In the first thirty chapters, the protagonist is almost purely tortured. In chapter 31, there is a turning point and the follow-up plan begins to escape. In chapter 45, he is chased by the heroine and then escapes death, and then reconciles and apologizes. The author said that after the people bullied by the original owner are dealt with in Chapter 50, the plot of the female protagonist and the sickly protagonist will follow. The heroine's inner and mental state in the early stage is quite worrying. In addition, the protagonist's eyes are clear and stupid, and there is basically no intrigue before the turning point, so the plot is very stiff. After reading Chapter 30, I started to doubt whether the yandere in the author's eyes was simply a victim of abuse, and the difference in fighting ability was too big. I just hope that the protagonist in the follow-up will be strong-willed. Whether it is to reconcile with A, or to chase his wife in the crematorium, he must make up for the anger suffered in the first thirty chapters. Follow up and wait and see.

I am the author of this book. I am quite interested in this book, but I am not very good at writing books. As a result, some plots in the book may have some problems. However, I am happy to correct them. As long as everyone puts them forward, I will modify them. At the same time, I will also learn lessons so that similar mistakes will not appear in subsequent plots. (Ps: I try my best...) First of all, about the first 50 chapters of the two protagonists are daily chapters, and the main atmosphere is relatively relaxed and funny. It may be a bit boring, but I will add something interesting at the end. The last 50 chapters should be regarded as flavor content, mainly about forced love and yandere. The atmosphere may be a bit serious, but you can look forward to what the yandere in my heart looks like, how the protagonist will respond and develop under the influence of yandere, and what interesting plot will happen in the end? In fact, I am also looking forward to it. The third volume is supposed to be the finale, but I haven't really thought about it yet. However, I will make it based on everyone's feedback, so it is up to everyone to decide whether it is he or be. Maybe there will be some more interesting endings. Finally, everyone please comment, I will read every one carefully, no matter it is good or bad, even if you scold me, I will find my own reasons. Thank you all The poisonous points criticized by readers have been completely reset. You are welcome to find new ones for me to modify [Blow kiss]

The whole book is okay to read, except for the beating scene in the first ten chapters, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. Let's not ask the heroine to pay the price, but don't just give a light apology. Can the protagonist not be bullied by so many people? The plot tends to be bullied silently by one person. The plot between the two protagonists can be said to be interesting, but being bullied by others like this really feels aggrieved. Let's leave it like this. The whole book is still okay for the time being. Please give your best to the author ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark, a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words, day by day, and night by night.

The second five-star serving [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] Forget it, I can't stand it after reading four chapters [stare] [stare] [stare]

This is not the way to a sweet pet novel! Let me down! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

If the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine can be properly handled in the future, and there will be no sudden forgiveness plot, then this book can be said to be very good [Love] [Love]

The children are really proud of themselves. Come on, author!

It looks good, I wish Xiao Tang will be eaten soon [laughing]

Very, very, very nice to look at! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Be sure to keep updating! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

After reading it for so long, I realized that I haven't posted a comment yet, just Qian Qianshui [laughs]

Come on, author, it's very beautiful. You must write a book for me for a lifetime [crying]

Chapter 8: It's good to see, the heroine went to the hospital, severely injured the protagonist, and almost killed the protagonist. In this novel, no one can be killed or the police can be called. It's a good read.

It feels refreshing, the plot is very exciting and worthy of praise, the author, please give me a lot of support, I will definitely keep updating.

It's really good. I finished it in one night. Please update it soon. I want to see blood flowing like a river [crying]

The plot is very good and successfully attracted me.

So far, it's okay. I'll review it when I catch up.

There are quite a lot of people reading this, why are there so few comments [Thinking] Hey, let's go, the author made some sweets in the latest chapter [laughing]

I enjoyed reading it so much. Keep up the good work, author. I want to see blood flowing like a river [Adoration]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I still want to see yours Chapter 10 One Hour, 6

Come on, come on, come on

Good books need no words

It's very interesting, but why is the rating so low, and why the author's updates are so slow?

Listen to my brother's advice, just look good.

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I have no choice but to love looking at lilies. The lilies in my hometown are blooming again. What else could I say? I gave it directly. And the author will update soon! ! !

Good to read. Although I have a lot of Bianwen books on my bookshelf, the author's books in Bianwen can also be said to be overwhelming. I just hope the author can give a good ending.

Come on, author, I feel like Hao is reading a lot