Naruto************

Overall it's pretty good! The couple moments between Sharin and Obito are quite good, but some timelines don't match up, and there are some details that don't match up. For example, Kamui is the ability of the kaleidoscope. It's better to be able to use Kamui when the kaleidoscope is not unlocked. After all, the protagonist traveled to Hokage in the modern era, not Obito traveled back in the future with the ability of the kaleidoscope. Also, the Sharingan has its own genjutsu, but the proficiency makes some Sharingan genjutsu weaker, not that it is incapable of genjutsu. , And also in the timeline when Obito was a child, Kisame did not obtain Samehada, because the Seven Ninja Swordsmen had not yet been kicked into the Lucky Three Treasures, Kisame had not yet killed the Watermelon Mountain Puffer Demon to obtain Samehada, and then rebelled against the village, and Orochimaru's psychic failure It's the Eight-foot Orochi, it's the Ten Thousand Snakes. The Eight-foot Orochi only appeared at the end of the final battle between Itachi and Sasuke. I'm going to point out the author's mistakes here, but overall, the author's writing is still very good! Obito and Rin are so sweet👍🏻, I hope the author can add more, don't finish it too early, add a few more chapters every day, after all, it's really not enough to read, only two chapters at night are really not enough, it's gone before I can read it seriously, woo woo woo [crying]

It's delicious. I love to eat and have already stocked up a lot. During the banquet, I bought more than 800 tables for 9 yuan. One of the three children was starved to death, the second child flew over the wall, and the last child ran away with several tables.

It's quite good-looking, but there are some minor mistakes, such as the timeline in some places not matching up, but the author is working hard to correct it, which deserves praise.

This book is okay, but it's a bit cloudy and I don't know if it's the author. Ooc I made a mistake and it's hard to comment.

There are so few books that you can read with pleasure, but suddenly there is no more books to raise, although I don't know if I will still remember this book in the future.

It looks good, but the time is not right. If the time is right, you must watch it.

Trust me, it'll look good

Good. It's just that the author stopped updating.

The writing is very clear. This is also the only one I write about Lin. I really like the relationship between Lin and Obito.

Nice looking, but a little weird 😳

Okay, come on author

It's pretty good, you can check it out

Beautiful. Love it. Love it.

Very, very grand

Very well written and worth reading

A good author is very energetic

Suspected to have been written by Obito

It's the first time you can read this kind of thing

Lin... I will never let go of your hand again

The author is awesome, he really wrote everything about my heart.

It's very beautiful, very beautiful. The author will update it for me quickly. If you don't update it, I will choose to send you to Chengdu.

This makes up for the tragic ending in the original work where the power of the gods is hard to hide and Lin bursts into tears.

Very beautiful. If you like Uchiha Obito, you must read it. The details are super good.

The author doesn't have to wear Obito's clothes like the ones in the original novel. He removes the goggles and puts on the clothes directly. Obito's clothes and hair are also the same as those in the later ones.

It looks good, and the emotional line is also good

I think it looks pretty

Very beautiful, very beautiful

This book is so sweet

Awesome, so pretty

Must win