For some reasons, Lin Xian transferred to Japan, where he met his first deskmate, Huacheng Yiling.
You say [the sun rises, the moon sets; the moon rises, the sun sets. Is it the sun chasing the moon, or the moon chasing the sun?
I feel like this is not just the sun and the moon
Reader comments
The writing is smooth and has the delicate descriptive feel of old-fashioned novels. The author uses eloquent and flowing strokes to describe the ambiguous emotions of high school youth, especially the heroine. Through various details and actions, he depicts a high school girl who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, facing the temptation of love and friendship, and the tolerance of bullying, etc. But the shortcomings are also obvious. In Japanese daily novels, the side descriptions actually lack the characteristics of foreign schools (the background can actually be substituted in China), and some descriptions still have stereotypes brought by Japanese dramas and animations (such as the rooftop, where 80% of school students cannot go). The supporting characters and villains are relatively stereotyped, the conflicts are not sharp enough, the plot lacks a breaking point, and it is easy to get tired after reading for a long time. The description of the male protagonist is not as delicate as the female protagonist, more like a gentle male character from a female perspective (so I almost thought it was a female author). All in all, the shortcomings outweigh the good points. In the current Internet writing circle where there are many templates and AI is rampant, the author dares to write his own articles, which deserves a five-star rating (help me get points).
It's very good-looking. It has a rare quality in Tomato and gives people a very comfortable Japanese-style feeling. I feel that if the manga is changed into animation, it will be a big hit. It is necessary to add some appropriate psychological descriptions between the male and female protagonists, otherwise the plot will feel a bit abrupt.
The writing is quite good and the plot is understandable. After all, it is the first masterpiece. I hope the author will not be lazy. People can die suddenly but cannot stop updating [laughing]
It's really beautiful. The writing style is plain, delicate, and true. It fits the development of life's emotional lines very well. It's a book that you can calm down and read.
Finally, the author can give me one more chapter. I am dying. Please, brother, just add one chapter. I will never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear that I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now, brother, I beg you, just give me one more chapter, brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just update, just one chapter. I will never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother. I beg you, please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please give me one more chapter.
Come on, brother, the new book has just been released and the ratings are not very normal. Please work hard to update it! Don't run away halfway [laughing and crying]
Encourage and encourage ~ (In response to the author, add one more book review, I don't know if it will be useful)
It looks good, and the writing is excellent. The author likes to write some small details and descriptions of the environment. You can feel the process of the relationship between the male and female protagonists warming up. There are some parts that resonated with me. I personally like it very much^___^.
The rhythm is very good, the description is very ordinary, keep writing, more, more, more, more, more, more! !
Very good-looking brother, don't disappear halfway, more updates are not enough
This book is a chronic novel, the writing is delicate, it is best not to be anxious. I don't know what it will do to you, but I felt calm while reading it.
[You taste it carefully] It's beautiful! It's just that the segmentation format of some words is not divided properly.
It will make readers very tired and may not be interested in them.
I hope the author can make some changes [smile][smile]
Beautiful, well written
Good looking, love reading good books
Pretty good I think
Your writing style has a sense of art, which is very good
There is a peaceful feeling when reading it ☺️
The writing is good and it's very comfortable to read. Overall, it's very good.
The writing is very good, and there is a plot in it that really made me happy. Riqing has such a fun plot, and I also like the relationship between the male and female protagonists before, but there are too few updates [please update]
The writing is very good and the plot is also good, keep up the good work
This is the first time I see this kind of book, it's really nice [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Come on! The writing is very delicate, the pace is slow, the emotions come naturally, and it looks very comfortable.
The writing style is very delicate, and the pace of the article is slow. It is a long-flowing kind of thing. It gives a refreshing feeling when reading, and it is very beautiful.
Very detailed description
I'll give it four stars first, and I'll look at it later.
Beautiful, well written
Good looking. Love to see more.
You can take a look, it's not bad
Okay, good
Feeling a little relaxed
The author's writing is very good, it's not a routine article, I feel it would look great if it was adapted into an anime.
The writing is really good and the plot is okay. As long as I keep writing, there won't be any big problems.
The writing is smooth and has the delicate descriptive feel of old-fashioned novels. The author uses eloquent and flowing strokes to describe the ambiguous emotions of high school youth, especially the heroine. Through various details and actions, he depicts a high school girl who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, facing the temptation of love and friendship, and the tolerance of bullying, etc. But the shortcomings are also obvious. In Japanese daily novels, the side descriptions actually lack the characteristics of foreign schools (the background can actually be substituted in China), and some descriptions still have stereotypes brought by Japanese dramas and animations (such as the rooftop, where 80% of school students cannot go). The supporting characters and villains are relatively stereotyped, the conflicts are not sharp enough, the plot lacks a breaking point, and it is easy to get tired after reading for a long time. The description of the male protagonist is not as delicate as the female protagonist, more like a gentle male character from a female perspective (so I almost thought it was a female author). All in all, the shortcomings outweigh the good points. In the current Internet writing circle where there are many templates and AI is rampant, the author dares to write his own articles, which deserves a five-star rating (help me get points).
It's very good-looking. It has a rare quality in Tomato and gives people a very comfortable Japanese-style feeling. I feel that if the manga is changed into animation, it will be a big hit. It is necessary to add some appropriate psychological descriptions between the male and female protagonists, otherwise the plot will feel a bit abrupt.
The writing is quite good and the plot is understandable. After all, it is the first masterpiece. I hope the author will not be lazy. People can die suddenly but cannot stop updating [laughing]
It's really beautiful. The writing style is plain, delicate, and true. It fits the development of life's emotional lines very well. It's a book that you can calm down and read. Finally, the author can give me one more chapter. I am dying. Please, brother, just add one chapter. I will never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear that I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now, brother, I beg you, just give me one more chapter, brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just update, just one chapter. I will never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother. I beg you, please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please give me one more chapter.
Come on, brother, the new book has just been released and the ratings are not very normal. Please work hard to update it! Don't run away halfway [laughing and crying] Encourage and encourage ~ (In response to the author, add one more book review, I don't know if it will be useful)
It looks good, and the writing is excellent. The author likes to write some small details and descriptions of the environment. You can feel the process of the relationship between the male and female protagonists warming up. There are some parts that resonated with me. I personally like it very much^___^.
The rhythm is very good, the description is very ordinary, keep writing, more, more, more, more, more, more! !
Very good-looking brother, don't disappear halfway, more updates are not enough This book is a chronic novel, the writing is delicate, it is best not to be anxious. I don't know what it will do to you, but I felt calm while reading it.
[You taste it carefully] It's beautiful! It's just that the segmentation format of some words is not divided properly. It will make readers very tired and may not be interested in them. I hope the author can make some changes [smile][smile]
Beautiful, well written
Good looking, love reading good books
Pretty good I think
Your writing style has a sense of art, which is very good
There is a peaceful feeling when reading it ☺️
The writing is good and it's very comfortable to read. Overall, it's very good.
The writing is very good, and there is a plot in it that really made me happy. Riqing has such a fun plot, and I also like the relationship between the male and female protagonists before, but there are too few updates [please update]
The writing is very good and the plot is also good, keep up the good work
This is the first time I see this kind of book, it's really nice [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Come on! The writing is very delicate, the pace is slow, the emotions come naturally, and it looks very comfortable.
The writing style is very delicate, and the pace of the article is slow. It is a long-flowing kind of thing. It gives a refreshing feeling when reading, and it is very beautiful. Very detailed description
I'll give it four stars first, and I'll look at it later.
Beautiful, well written
Good looking. Love to see more.
You can take a look, it's not bad
Okay, good
Feeling a little relaxed
The author's writing is very good, it's not a routine article, I feel it would look great if it was adapted into an anime.
The writing is really good and the plot is okay. As long as I keep writing, there won't be any big problems.
It's quite comfortable to watch
The rhythm is slow and beautiful.