[Yan Ling] I Walk Sideways in the World of Immortality with My Mouth

1. There is no humiliating female words, and there is no transfer of "neutral words" 2. No female rivalry. Women are excellent, brave, and fearless, and they cherish each other. Even if there is opposition, it is based on conflicts of interest and different positions, rather than revolving around "stealing men." 3. There are many female characters and they all have their own highlights. Many of the people in high positions are our outstanding women (I really don't like sect stories with 1 female protagonist vs. Multiple male supporting characters). 4. The plot is compact and does not drag out, and the plot is not a common routine! This is the female channel I love, Nvwuwen!

It looks good, the setting is very novel, I like this theme very much, (˵¯͒¯͒˵) the protagonist "Shen'an" can "spoke in the spirit" ahhh! "Yan Ling" ah! In the later stage, who do you think will die? If it doesn't work, it's great. (✧∇✧) So, I'm really looking forward to it. The literary novels I've read in the past were either poorly written or lackluster in plot... But I think this one is interesting! This is my first review of the protagonist Yan Lingwen (let me tell you quietly: In fact, there are very few protagonists with the ability to speak spiritually, and the writing is so poor that I can't even read it, woo woo woo XX). I wanted to read it a few years ago, and I was scratching my head, but there was nothing good. I even wanted to secretly practice writing on my own, but it was too troublesome, so I gave up. Anyway, I saw that he was not the protagonist, but a "supporting character with a spiritual spirit". He was amazing, but not the protagonist! ! ! This is a dream come true (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Love you, the author greatly. (Chi v Chi)

It's really good-looking. Whether it's the setting of the heroine or the protagonist group, they are great. I like everyone in it, whether it's the brother, sister, mother-in-law, and other people who came from Guixu. They are all well described, as well as the Xizhou monk who likes to join in the fun and make a pot of porridge. The two pets of the heroine are great! ! Like it very much! When I first watched it, I didn't dare to watch it because it had a score of 6.9, But the more I watched it, the more I liked it! It must be a high-scoring work! ! ! ! ! ! It's really good to read. Why is the rating so low? [Crying] [Crying] As a bookworm for many years, this book can really reach a 9.1 Rating! Friendship, family affection, strategy, growth, fun, responsibility, etc. Are all there! ! Really good-looking! ! ! !

Generally speaking, it is a story about a few young people who venture into the world of cultivating immortals. What makes me happy the most is that there are more female characters than male characters. I really don't want to watch one junior sister and one senior brother again...

We really have struck gold! ! ! The heroine is smart, calm and steady when in danger, and she is a bit talkative (which really pokes me, she feels cute), and the setting of Yan Ling is really cool. I personally think the supporting characters are also very successful. Everyone has their own personality and hobbies, and the spirit beasts around the protagonist are also very good. A cute creature that fights fiercely), and Xingxing~ A good parent who takes care of his little cub also brings along his lazy master (Xingxing is a spiritual beast born in the protagonist group) and the world view of this book is very complete. At least from now on, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings, but it does not make people feel unreadable. On the contrary, the more I read, the more I want to know what the people of Kyushu are doing. In the end, I really want to see our little Shen An and his brother and sister meet up. Can you do a hundred chapters a day~

Not bad. The horizontal comparison of the platform is quite complete. The author's writing style is very mature, and the plot arrangements and descriptions are all at hand. But I feel like the character interactions are rather dry. The characters are clear in terms of positioning, but once they interact with each other, something is missing. Especially when it comes to long dialogues and psychological descriptions, there are occasionally some laughs, but most of the information, emotional shaping, and entertainment are not enough. When the protagonist and her assistant analyze the situation, they are extremely detailed but make no real progress. It feels like putting away the calculation scratch paper for a math test paper. It seemed even more enjoyable when I was rushing through the plot near the end.

I've just read the latest chapter. Overall, it's pretty good. The heroine's small team is composed of 3 women and 1 man. The number of other supporting characters is also more female than male. The author consciously uses words such as "God's breasts" and "female falcon". I quite like this. There are probably more female cultivators in high positions than male cultivators. There is a very small amount of "I'm going" in the article, but there are probably no other words about women. I think they are used because I read the book with a mixture of listening and reading, so I'm not sure about some things.

It's so cute, I finally met a team with equal gender ratio. The heroine is so cold-faced and cute. She doesn't express her gender deliberately, doesn't give in to neutral words, and purely uses the subject as the first priority to portray the character [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss] Damn it, after reading so many books, it finally became a hit. The setting It's also very special. It's a bit similar to the cultivation logic of Nangong Sui's book. This one is much more relaxed and has the flavor of a hundred schools of thought contending during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. There are many schools of thought. It's very interesting and has a sense of life. It doesn't follow the same route as the traditional fairy tales. Good luck to the author.

This is my impression from half of the time I've seen it, and it's still pretty good. This is one of the few books that I have rarely read recently. All in all, the merits outweigh the faults. Although the target is a group portrait, as far as my current perception is concerned, this should be the main heroine, and at most the supporting characters are more fleshed out. But since I also like big heroines, I enjoyed watching it. I won't list the advantages one by one. For example, the heroine is very rational, smart and calm (her own interests and the safety of her companions are both within the heroine's consideration). She has a strong fighting ability. Many female characters are well portrayed, and many supporting characters are also well created. There are no vicious female supporting characters or vicious male supporting characters. The villains all have brains. The rhythm of the plot is also very good. The switching between mini-maps is also very smooth. The author's writing is very good. But why do I think he doesn't look like a group portrait? 1. Perspective: The perspective is always stuck to the heroine. Its perspective does not change. It basically stays with the heroine throughout the whole process. In my opinion, there are no multi-perspectives and two-line narrative that are necessary for group portraits. There are basically no multi-perspectives, and the ones that are there are very short, and there are no two-line narratives at all. If you insist on adding up some bits and pieces of other perspectives into a double line, it will be difficult to collapse. (The most important point) 2. The core of the group portrait: The most basic core of the group portrait is that everyone is the protagonist, but in this book you can clearly see that the heroine is more powerful than the rest of the team, and it is super obvious, whether it is from the side description of other supporting characters or the direct description of the combat power. (Actually, you don't need to worry about this at all. Most of Tomato's group portrait articles have this problem. The important thing is the following sentence) It didn't make me feel that everyone in the protagonist group shines in different fields. The above two points are the two most important points in my opinion. These two points make me feel that this article is not a good group portrait. In fact, the second point is okay. Most of the group portrait articles now have this problem, but I think the first point is completely achievable. Let's open up the perspectives of two more protagonists. I'm really curious about how the other two members get along in private without the heroine, and how they solve problems when they encounter them. (There is no such description anywhere I have seen so far) In short, the author's writing is very good-looking, but every time when group portraits are mentioned, I can't help but babble because I really want to see a very good-looking group portrait article. This article is still very readable, otherwise I wouldn't give it 5 stars. If you like reading this kind of article, you must read it, you will never be disappointed.

This book is beautiful! It feels like there are not many people watching it, which is a pity. There are many female characters in it, and they are all described with neutral words such as boy. As for the one who can't tell the gender, the author clearly knows how she is written. He has had enough of boys being boys and girls being girls. I am very satisfied with the main character group! It is a configuration of three women and one man, and the man is positioned as a healing type. Finally, the woman is not blindly put in the position of a wet nurse and a medical type. This is a group portrait, but it doesn't overshadow the heroine. The heroine is the most talented and capable, and she doesn't feel aggrieved when looking at it. No matter how well the female elders were portrayed, I have remembered many women such as Granny Hua Ju, Nalan Xian, Lan Jinye, Lou Zangyue and so on! [Shy] Regardless of whether the author is cheating or not, I have been following updates for so long and have not stopped updating. I have been updating two chapters a day [Love] Also, the author is really good at choosing names. The names of both the protagonist and the supporting characters are amazing and special. They are not perfunctory at all. [Sending my heart] Nice names are really a plus.

The world view of this book is relatively large, and the setting is very new. It is different from the usual books about cultivating immortals. It is a theme of cultivating immortals that is similar to hundreds of schools of thought. It is new to me. The heroine has no cp, and the three girls and one boy in the team are all God-given ones. There are many girls who like this kind of girl. So far, there seems to be no problem. The heroine's character is cautious and decisive, and she is very strong, but not too outrageous. She is with the team. The team has grown up together. From some small details, we can see that the heroine is smart and logical. It seems that the low score is because no one has rated it. The author is also very considerate. Many uncommon words will be marked with pinyin, and some words that are easy to mispronounce are clearly marked. The favorability rating has skyrocketed. Judging from the entire book and the update speed, it can also be seen that the author writes the book with more care. You really should not miss this good book~

Very nice! There is no cp, no ambiguity, no one female protagonist with multiple male supporting characters, there are many female characters and there are many highlight moments for the female characters! Those in high positions are basically female characters! These points are really great! ! I'm really tired of seeing the non-CP label and then there is no girl around the heroine. There are also many male supporting characters who are either seniors or brothers or uncles. Moreover, the author has created the characters very well. There are no black and white characters or brainless bad characters. They all have their own standpoints! This novel is really good! Why is the rating so low! ! Come and take a look! I can't stand to suffer, I can't stand to be fooled! It only costs 0 yuan to take home! (Of course you can give the author a free gift)

I think it's super good-looking. Shen'an really allows people to see her perseverance when she is practicing outside, her calm side when she encounters difficulties, and her childish side in front of the Chinese patriarch. Shen'an and the people in Guixu all love Guixu and this big family, and those who watch it are so moved [that they almost cry]. And Sister Nalanxian, she is really amazing. She is the first person in the Kyushu Project and has made a lot of contributions to the people who will return to the ruins in the future. "Those who are motivated will succeed" [Shy]. Everyone's character image is very distinct, and the most important thing is that there are many female bosses in it. Most of the patriarchs of Guixu Shiren are women. There are also many women in the holy realms of each family. Many women can be seen in various fields. I love you the author [][][]. I hope that the female channel can have many outstanding and powerful female characters. The author gives you a big boost [][] confess your love [] Come on, come on, come on, come on!

I rarely take the initiative to comment, but this one is really nice! ! The main characters are three girls and one boy. It's very comfortable to read. This is a real heroine story. Baby Shen'an's family and friendship are all described very well. People who read it felt very soft ww. I have always wanted to read Yan Ling's story. This is the first one that I really think is delicious. Everyone's abilities are very reasonable, the fighting scenes are enjoyable to watch, and the villains are well-characterized and not flat. Anyway, please come and watch it, I love this author so much! ! It's really well written 😭

No more posing, it looks great and the setting is very novel. The story of the Guixu people looked very funny. Although there were some "fights", everyone was really united. The forerunners are very admirable (except for the betrayer), and the leaders and other Guixu people who guard Guixu are also completely intact. In addition to the main line, other forces in the southeast, northwest, and central states also have their own strengths and weaknesses. Some are good and some are bad, but they are not absolute. As for the main line, I don't like it. Some of the younger generation disciples who join the academy are okay. The friendship stories and adventures of young prodigies from all generations are heart-warming and exciting to watch, and even the spiritual pets are laughing. The end of the book means that the story between me and you in the book has come to an end for now, but your story is still going on. I hope you can continue to be free and unrestrained and have no regrets in this life.

Ahhhhhhhhhh it's only so beautiful! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting novel. It's logical. There are no male and female partners who are vicious for the sake of being vicious. There's no jealousy. There's no drama of multiple senior brothers doting on me. They are all growing up tenaciously, for themselves and for their loved ones.

The plot is smooth, a rare heroine story, there are many female characters/superiors, basically no insulting words for women, and no neutral words (young people, etc.) Are used. It is worth watching. In the process of reading the article, I can clearly see the progress of the author's beloved daughter. When I read it last year, it was still being serialized and I only read a little bit. I opened it this time and read it smoothly. In the first part of the article, I used senior brothers and senior sisters, and in the later part, they were all senior sisters and senior brothers! There are more and more female characters with full characters! There are many similar improvements, praise! ! !

It's nice to watch, I quite like the character of the heroine, and I also quite like the several important supporting characters that have appeared so far. The author's names are really nice [Blow Kiss] I look forward to An An's use of the spirit of speech next time! Super cool ability [blowing kiss]

It's a group portrait of cultivating immortals. The heroine's skills are very interesting, and it's so fun to make her words come true. I also like the character of the heroine, she is very decisive and straightforward, but also cautious, and has intelligence and force. The world view is also quite interesting. The entire continent's cultivation system is mainly based on the four major families, including the Yin Yang family, the Legal family, and the military family, which refers to the ideological schools of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States period. The heroine comes from a place where the spiritual energy is cut off and there are only mortals. The reason why the spiritual energy is cut off in this place is related to these four families. The female lead group is currently on the way to be decrypted, and we look forward to the follow-up development.

It's good to watch. The early description of the heroine is so good. People who have never had any knowledge about the outside world are like this. In the later stage, they gradually understand the external environment and the secrets of Guixu and the four major families in Zhongzhou, and start the road to counterattack. The spiritual skills are officially opened up. It's really cool.

It looks good. The main characters are well-established and the main plot is logical. The most important thing is that it is finally a female channel with women occupying high positions. Whether it is the main characters or the important supporting roles, high-strength women occupy the majority. It is cool.

The overall plot is very attractive, but I feel that the title is a bit deceptive later on. Although the words are very strong, towards the end there are still a bunch of enemies whose cultivation levels are much higher than that of the heroine, and they are always in crisis (well, although the crisis plot may be more interesting, but I really feel that the heroine's cultivation level is too low, which is a bit frustrating). It can be seen that the author deliberately pays attention to the wording, and there is obviously improvement in the later period. However, in the early stage, there are still cases where male titles are ranked first, but it is good to start to have this awareness. There are many women in high positions, and there are many outstanding female characters. The male-female ratio is quite comfortable, especially Hua Tianjiao, who is impressive.

Seeing Chapter 632 "Finale (Part 2)" lying there quietly in the catalog, I really felt an indescribable emotion in my heart. From the first time I was attracted by the title of the book, to the time I kept up with it until now, and watching Shen An step by step to where he is today, I really want to say loudly: Congratulations on the completion! Throw flowers to celebrate! 🎉🎉🎉 Looking back at the beginning, when Shen'an left Guixu, his goal was just to "find his sister and brother." At that time, although she had a seemingly invincible golden finger like Yan Ling, she was still lonely inside. Along the way, what moved me most was not the feeling of "walking sideways" with her mouth, but the sobriety and tenacity in her bones. In this world of cultivating immortals where the jungle prevails, she did not get lost because of her strength, nor did she drift with the crowd because of loneliness [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] She always remembered her original intention, the attitude of "I am a cultivator of immortality" - not relying on others, not forcing love, only cultivating her true heart, and only protecting her relatives and friends. This is the true heroine style! ❛‿˂̵✧ I must also praise the best label of this book - no CP❛‿˂̵✧[Send heart] In the current Internet environment, it is really not easy to insist on writing without CP (•̀ᴗ•́) The author did not forcefully insert emotional lines to cater to the market, but spent all his pen and ink on "carrying out a career" and "building a worldview" ૮ •𖥦• აᐝ And the group portraits in this book are really amazing! ! ! •ᴗ•Not just the protagonist, every supporting character around him has flesh and blood (ꈍᴗꈍ). They are not stepping stones on the protagonist's path to upgrade, but living individuals with their own stories and their own joys and sorrows! ! ! (๑ت๑)♡ Seeing that everyone can find a good destination in the end, this sense of completion is more shocking than any love relationship! ! ! ｡◕‿◕｡ Finally, I would like to say thank you to the author Da Yi Shi Yi Yi ~ (๑ت๑) [Blow a kiss] [Send a heart] Thank you for creating the world of Shen'an, thank you for your stable updates over these 320 days (really a model worker! Heehee◍•ᴗ•◍), thank you for giving us such a wonderful and pure story (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σAlthough the main text is over, I believe Shen'an's story will continue in our hearts❛˓◞˂̵✧ May God be in peace in the days to come, and may he still be able to travel around the world with his words (haha, he is actually a talker), be carefree and carefree! ! ! (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) I also wish the author good luck in writing the article! ≧∇≦Inspiration never runs out! ! (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) Your career is booming and you are in good health! ! ! (ㅎᗨㅎ)[Send heart][Blow a kiss]

A particularly wonderful novel, with twists and turns in the writing. However, I don't think it is a female-oriented novel. It can only be said to be an equal novel, because there are still many high-profile male characters. Although there are also many high-profile female characters, the group portrait description is very brilliant, but I feel that some details are not described clearly. For example, the inheritance that the heroine got in the competition of the four major families, I thought it would allow the heroine to advance. Well, the heroine passed it after meditating for a while without playing a big role. The talents of Shen and Sui both have names, but Shan and Ying seem to have no names, and there is no very detailed description. Moreover, how the main lineage of the four major families turned Guixu into the mortal realm is very vague. There was no fluorite three thousand years ago. What specific methods were used? Do the people of Guixu know? Did you resist? I haven't written anything, but the faults are not hidden, the plot is exciting, and I don't fault the writing style.

This is the first time I read a novel where the heroine is Yan Ling. There is a light sense of humor in the whole text and I really like it. There are also many female characters. I felt very comfortable reading it [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Highly recommended

1: The characterization is very good, the characters are clear and three-dimensional and not mentally retarded. Everyone knows what they should do. The protagonist and supporting characters have their own story lines, and the image of passers-by is not solidified. 2: The plot is reasonable and unique, the logic is closed loop, there are no hidden pitfalls, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings, and it is highly readable. 3: The world view is not particularly grand, the combat power system is complete, the gap between realms is clear, and there is basically no cross-border killing (if it exists, there are prerequisites for it to be reasonable). Highlights: 1: The protagonist's natural ability is refreshing. The protagonist's group combat power is basically invincible at the same level. The word spirit is used reasonably, and there is no need to worry about the ambiguous combat power caused by the word spirit ability. 2: There are many group portraits of high-spirited people besides the protagonist. 3: The world created is very beautiful. If the four major families are excluded, I think this world can be compared to Peach Blossom Spring. 4: The unity of people, the persistence and freedom of putting life and death aside for the truth or what needs to be protected, the awe-inspiring righteousness of the predecessors who use their lives to pave the way for future generations, are in line with the spiritual core of the Chinese people.

Wow, this book is really good. Really, his rating should reach 9.8 Which is normal. Whether it's the characters, the plot or the writing, it's very fun and interesting. Although it is also a type of saving the continent, it takes away those heavy things. Only with the courage of the predecessors can there be a path for future generations. Laughter is greater than sadness, but occasionally from the joy, people can taste a few hints of the unyielding and bravery of the predecessors. It is sad, and it is much better than that kind of straightforward narrative. This book also depicts the customs and customs of various places very well. The people of Zhongzhou are selfish and snobbish, the people of Xizhou are eclectic and generous, the people of Beizhou are sword-oriented and generous, and the people of Guixu are pure and united, which are all distinctive. What I like most is that this book does not put the important matter of saving Guixu on Shen'an alone, and there are no unnecessary sacrifices. Shen'an has friends, mother-in-law, and older brothers and sisters, so while she has the gift of speaking and spirituality, she is also a carefree child. She does not have those cumbersome love affairs, and her family and friendship are warm enough. I haven't found such a good book for a long time. This book is really a rare book! Go watch it, leave a comment after watching it, and let's play together in the comment area hehehehe~

I stayed up late to finish reading the main text and couldn't bear to watch the extras (ToT) The author is really good at portraying group portraits, and the male-female ratio is very touching. Whether it is the protagonist group, the villain, or the upper hand, there are more women than men. She has a certain sensitivity in word choice. There are no naughty words in the whole book and there is nothing uncomfortable about it. Finally, the setting is so interesting and the author is so good at naming names. From the beginning, I was attracted by the setting of drawing on the hundreds of schools of thought, and facts have proven that it is indeed very different from the general fairy tales. I really like reading these novels with unique world views, it's like entering a whole new world. Author, you must keep writing...! !

Finished reading! I feel so satisfied and happy, the charm of the group portrait [sends my heart]. The subject matter is very novel (I think) and I was attracted to it the moment I saw the title. The character settings and background are also eye-catching. The author's writing style is good, very vivid and picturesque, the words are beautiful and comfortable to read, and the overall logic is smooth. Occasionally typos and wrong words are acceptable. The ratio of women to men is extremely comfortable, this is how female videos should be! The names are also very nice! I read it when it was serialized, and after it was tied up, I kept it for a long time until it was finished. Because I like the theme and setting, I have always remembered this book. I picked it up a few days ago and read it. When I saw it near the end, I had a feeling of "nostalgic shyness". I couldn't bear to part with it, so I read it with all my heart. After reading it, I felt empty but very happy. The bad guys were punished after returning to the ruins to save themselves. There were no bloody scenes that abused the body and mind. The ending was happy, the author was kind, and the readers were happy. It was perfect! 🐣 (Actually, I am still looking forward to what unique skills Shen An Ying Wu Haoshan Songyue and Sui Chunsheng and the four others will learn to break through to the saint realm hahh). Book

The writing is particularly brilliant. I haven't read such a long novel in one sitting for a long time. First, the characterization is very three-dimensional, each character has a distinct personality, and many choices are made that are consistent with the identity but feel unexpected and reasonable. The female characters in the book have many roles and rich characterizations; Secondly, the rhythm of the plot is very comfortable. Although it is long, it is compact throughout, and there are almost no sections that make people feel deliberately dragged out; Third, the world view constructed is very beautiful! ! ! It's really beautiful! Of course, there are some small regrets. Some small foreshadowings could not be concluded, but most of the foreshadowings have been fully recovered, and the overall performance is still very good. Why is the score so low? I almost missed this article! !