Dumbledore: Remember, We Are Positive Characters

What does a cat call: Meow? What is the sound of sheep? How do cows cry: moo How the dog barks: Author, you are really amazing. I really like reading this flawless and ingenious article. Have you eaten today? What did you eat? Who did you eat with? Good morning, good afternoon, good night. See you tomorrow.

The writing is very good, the unique insights into the occult are refreshing, and the character creation is also very restorative. However, I think Dumbledore's character is too cold and cold, which does not fit the kind but calculating character of the original work. However, it is also very good. Big boost for the author! [Smile] [Laugh]

When I read the book review, I thought it was a bad story. It's kind of interesting. Just the idea that ritual is a reflection of a pattern is a very clever understanding. It's been a long time since I've seen HP fans who really understand the mysticism so deeply. It's finally not the kind of weird fantasy magic story + a lot of settings. How can I put it... As I read further, I do feel that the introduction is a bit deceptive. I'd better downgrade it by one star, it seems a little bit, anyway, it feels like a forced plot conflict like a traditional web novel.

Interesting ideas and wonderful stories. When I read the middle and later stages of the story, I think I can give it a high score of about 9 points. But the final ending feels a bit hasty perhaps because the author couldn't continue editing it, or maybe he didn't want to write it anymore. But the overall story is still pretty good, so I'd give it an 8 rating. It no longer feels like a children's book like Harry Potter. His early design is more like a larger and more complex Western fantasy magical world. In the end, I felt that the wizard was mainly the protagonist and he became a state similar to the visionary in Lord of Mysteries. It changes directly from a life-and-death battle between a few individual powerful wizards to the protagonist becoming a world-class powerful being who directly obliterates low-dimensional life.

It is obvious that the author is an experienced author. He first uses the words of a professor to describe the protagonist's super talent, and then uses his own settings for magic to write about the refreshing feeling of upgrading. The contact with various original characters makes people look forward to the future development of the protagonist. And the current and successful magic makes people look forward to how the protagonist will cause waves between the two demon kings in the future.

It looks familiar, a bit like the gray wizard's

To be fair, the author's writing is great! But I couldn't accept the timeline issue, and the interaction between the protagonist and Hermione!

It's quite interesting. It's not so conventional, but it makes some changes to the original plot. It's quite exciting, but the ending is a bit rushed. It's a life-and-death fight in chapter 120, but it's over in chapter 121.

5.7 Points for such a beautiful book? Not a buddy?

You can come on, come on

Good health, good health, good health, good health

Excellent, I like this kind of thinking and creation

Looks good, the content is okay

Personally, I really think this book is a pretty good hp non-CP fanfic. There are a lot of people in the comment area who mess with the rhythm, and the points are all reduced [vomit]

The logic and plot are very good. Although it ends abruptly, the path is smooth.

It's so exciting, but I don't know why the rating is so low?

So damn good looking This is fan fiction There is no unchanging original plot The author's innovative ability is very good Mine is very enjoyable Update quickly

I don't respect the original work, many settings are very good, I hope the next one will be better

The novel is quite good, it has its own ideas, and it felt like it could lead to a battle with Voldemort for two or three hundred chapters, but it ended hastily in the middle.