Card Vanguard: A New Era

After reading Chapter 10, I felt that it was stiff. The writing is okay, but I haven't seen any foreshadowing or foreshadowing yet. I feel like each plot is an independent entity. Maybe it will get better later on, but the first 10 chapters were enough to make me lose interest. I hope it can enhance the continuity of the plot. For example, in Chapter 10, the person was being chased, and the protagonist appeared directly. In the previous chapter, the Pope was training his perception in the magic of the Pope. There was no connecting point in the middle and he went directly to the next chapter.

There are no shortcomings except for the first few pictures which are a bit boring. Anyway, there are no shortcomings for me. (=^▽^=)