Mecha Girl Search, Fight, and Evacuate: From the Start, I Force the White-Haired Girl to the Front Lines

The subject matter is novel and the imagination is unique. It combines these elements of the gold-touching game, the two-dimensional machine girl, and the virtual online game. The overall look and feel is relatively good. Ella is cute, the children love to eat, and the protagonist has a brain and is well-shaped. I like to watch romantic comedies. However, it can be seen that the author is a bit deeply influenced by Delta. The author of the gold-touching game currently prefers competition. The characteristics of searching and withdrawing are ignored for the time being. The gold-touching game opens blind boxes and produces rare and high-value items. At the same time, as a newcomer, the author is good at shaping the characters, but the control of the roles of the characters is not very good. For example, in Chapter 50, the author states that he has not thought about the follow-up treatment of Lonicera, and Lonicera actually has no role in the previous plot. Although her character is shaped, it is obvious that she is not a useful character before Chapter 49. If the author has no idea about her role, I think it is better not to write about her from the beginning. In summary, this is a novel novel with great potential. There are no major problems and it is worth reading.

It is recommended that the protagonist, the girl, grows up faster. If it takes a long time, Shuangwen will become a female channel. At least she can be independent, or do things with some sense, or simply transfer to logistics or support. Entertainment-type support is good.

It's good to watch, a must-eat for those who love two-dimensional sweets, but don't come here if you are a literary youth or someone addicted to cool writing. The male and female protagonists feel comfortable getting along with each other, and the King of Soldiers is not a poisonous point but a point of laughter. Now this emotional interlude that has not yet entered the main line looks very delicious, but I am more afraid that this feeling will disappear when it enters the main line later. But as long as the main line is not pushed hard and goes all the way to the finale, the daily plot with characters and holiday plots like ____ will be full, but just from what I say, it will only become redundant. It depends on the plot arrangement.

It can be seen that the author is very careful. There are indeed a few problems for new authors, but the overall feeling does not affect reading. You can wait patiently for the results.

I suggest you form a team

To be honest, this book is okay, it's quite good.

How to say it?! Maybe I didn't look carefully. I wonder what kind of machine girl it is. Is it in robot form?

Very nice! The author already has his own writing style and future plans, and the follow-up development is strong. Therefore, I give the author affirmation here!