Rebirth 97: from Ghetto to King of Hip Hop

So far it looks pretty good, the author has a good grasp of the rhythm, and the subject matter is also very novel. Personally, I listen to more domestic hiphop, and I only know a few of the most famous American rappers, which can be considered an eye-opener. I hope the author will update more. I feel that the author still needs to think about how to present the English lyrics and translations to the readers more intuitively, otherwise it will be a bit awkward. Maybe he can mark the rhymes, or he can learn more about the history of the development of music genres, and the protagonist's style can be more diverse, such as trap boombap drill, Memphis jersy club, etc.

To be honest, I have read this book many times, but I have never opened it. It is difficult to open another book of the same type after reading such fine chaff as 1990. But this book is really good, showing hip-hop from another angle. The theme is apocalyptic, which I think is actually quite good, like a blind box full of surprises. The author needs to control his own rhythm. It was slow before, which made people lose patience, and now it is too fast. Although it is really exciting, it also feels like it can't be slowed down. Finally, I am a person who reads book reviews before reading. After all, this is Tomato. I generally don't read 5-star reviews because I don't know if I bought it. So I gave it four stars. In my mind, it can reach 9 points, but to go to a higher level, it depends on the author's rhythm control and follow-up planning.

The rap is so well written, inner struggle, transformation and breakthrough are always more exciting than complete anger. Not only the rap part is wonderful, the property part is also very good, right or wrong, it's quite real. The story of how a young man who first saw the world dealt with the world.

I think the writing is really wonderful and smooth, and the characters are flesh and blood. I don't know much about rap, but the writing is really wonderful and a very thoughtful book. The author must stick to it [crying] I will always follow

It's very, very good to read. I didn't like hip-hop and didn't know much about hip-hop before, but reading this book made me very interested in hip-hop, and I really like this method of releasing good songs little by little. I didn't like novels that copied songs before because those books always randomly released a bunch of good songs and messed them up. I hope it will be like this in the future, not too many songs at once, and I think the pace is a bit fast now? I don't know how to write anymore. I feel like I've reached a climax now. Don't write too hard. I really like this book.

I don't know much about hip-hop, so I won't comment on it. In terms of writing techniques, the explosive points and conflicts of the plot are too peaceful. Another thing is that there is no need to add brackets after the name to indicate the English name. It is very visual and meaningless for most readers. This is a novel and not a biography. Annotations should not exist. Interested readers will find out for themselves. Overall, it's okay. Although the songs I chose are not to my liking and it's hard to bring in, I still give it 4 stars. It's a niche theme. Let me remind you again that Tomato Listening and Reading accounts for a large part. This is China after all. Even if you want to write original stories, you need to localize it. I don't know if the author has used Listening and Reading to listen to his own books. Once a noun is followed by an English comment, it sounds like it is very uncomfortable. Originally, it is difficult for Chinese people to remember foreign names. The listening and reading experience is a mess, and the reading experience is also very average. Online novels need a sense of substitution. Annotations or the author's soliloquy will be very dramatic. Just cut off a paragraph "Yo, Chris, I heard that you brought back a bottle of 30-year-old Port Ellen (whiskey brand)," Li Jie looked at Chris who was about to get the wine with some evil intentions. "Try the Cohiba Spear (cigar brand and model) from the 1980s that I got back." As he said this, he asked Aqi to distribute the cigars in his arms to everyone. Two notes in a paragraph is not convenient for reading. It is like looking down on the reader's understanding and knowledge reserve. The reading experience is very bad. You can just write that I heard that you brought back a bottle of 30-year-old Port Ellen whiskey and try the 1980s Cohiba Spear cigar that I bought back? Withdrawn. Internet readers who have been reading for more than 20 years really have trouble reading this. This kind of writing is as bad as the lack of paragraphing and the random use of punctuation.

Come on, author, this is the first hip-hop novel I've read with such a heavy street flavor. In my mind, it's comparable to Chicago 1990

This is the second black novel I have read after "Chicago 1990". It is very fresh. I have read 10% of it so far. It is very well written. I have read it. I hope to keep reading more. Good luck to the author.

The plot description is quite good. It is different from the growth path of "Chicago". The plot is non-toxic and develops normally, but the protagonist is a bit young and is still 12 years old. The song selection is purely street style, not pop songs. People who like hip-hop will probably like it very much.

I have read twenty or thirty chapters so far, and I feel that it is quite good. The author writes the lyrics very carefully. This type is relatively rare. If you mind that the protagonist is black, you don't need to read this book. There is no need to complain after reading it. Considering the background of the novel and the protagonist's growth environment, black people are very suitable choices. Black people are indeed very talented. When I read this book, it was finished. The score is relatively low. As more and more people read it, it will definitely increase. It is a pity that I did not accompany the author to give him some encouragement. Readers who are interested in this subject can read it.

I myself am a relatively loyal fan of hiphop. I have been listening to it for fifteen years since junior high school and reading novels for almost sixteen years. The subject matter of this book is very niche, and the age of the protagonist at the beginning is also very unpleasant. However, the rhythm and plot in the early stage are very good, so the expectations are quite high. However, I was a little confused when a middle-aged man was reborn and ended up with serious mental problems. Later, he retired for four years. After four years, he came back and said he gained a certain reputation through his dancing skills? (Have you ever seen a hiphop star who became famous for his dancing skills? He imitated CB, right? But CB is not a rapper. You can only make people laugh while dancing and rapping on stage.) And this original heroine. I have never seen an entertainment article write an original heroine. This is your first time as the author. The subject matter that is niche in itself has been made into a niche within a niche by you. However, I still give the author four stars and look forward to other works in the future.

It's nice to read, the plot is complete and exciting, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the best thing is that there are no obscene descriptions in the entertainment hip-hop theme, making it very comfortable to read. This book just lacks the opportunity to be discovered! ! ! Come on, come on, I think the author has a talent for writing. If you practice writing on Tomato, you can then go to other platforms to write novels. Maybe you can have your own masterpiece. Good things come soon. [Love][love][love]

There are relatively few books on entertainment music. Although the author is writing for the first time, he is still very talented. The advantage is that the characterization is very good and the climax of the song is okay. The disadvantage is that the front part is not very attractive, the 12-year-old protagonist is a bit young, and hip-hop rap is still a bit niche in China. It is best to change the genre as soon as possible. After all, it is important to read this kind of book and listen to the music. 4 Stars for encouragement

At present, the pace is a bit slow, but the smoothness of the writing is already better than most 🍅 copywriting. I don't know much about hip-hop, but the author's writing is very interesting and makes people want to follow it!

You can see what happens behind the scenes

It was originally just to kill time before going to bed, but ended up reading it in one sitting. The author's biggest problem now is that there are too few updates! Readers who follow the updates will feel that the writing is ink, but those who read it in one sitting will only feel that the writing is realistic and logical, and it is a refreshing article! So what the author needs to do most now is to update ten times a day!

To be honest, I didn't expect the story to be so attractive to me at first. The author chose a black child as the protagonist. Many people may not like it after reading it, but if you really read it, you will be attracted by the story. From the author's serious attitude in writing to the plot of the story, it should have a higher rating. This is an underestimated work. Tomato novels are too many brainless entertainment articles based on a template. This is the first time I read the story of a black protagonist. I hope more and more people will see this novel and let the author update it quickly. Yes we need to update [Salute][Salute][Salute]

It's pretty good. The American hip-hop gangs on the streets are well designed.

I have read more than thirty chapters, and it is very good. It is a different style from Black Pharaoh's "Chicago". This book contains a lot of English street lyrics, which actually rhyme when read in English, which is very interesting!

The subject matter has never been seen before, it is very interesting. What I like the most is that there is no nonsense. The love and friendship are written warmly and are not nonsense. Some novels now have too many embarrassing actions and descriptions of the environment, which are inexplicable. I heard that they were expanded by AI. Anyway, they feel cold and the words have no warmth.

It's good-looking, and it has a single female protagonist. Although the protagonist is a black man from the American hip-hop circle, it's not dark at all. This book is more in line with my views as a person who has lived in China since childhood than Chicago. Chicago feels a little too chaotic and I can't stand it.

The description is better than those parallel imports.

The subject matter is very novel, and to my surprise, the author didn't put any poison into it. It's just a very normal story and it's quite interesting. Too lazy to write about rainbow farts, the author should update quickly

A rare black hip-hop article in Tomato novels [Like] [Cool]

I haven't had much exposure to hip-hop, but the writing is pretty good. Is it without a female protagonist? Is there a female protagonist in the back? Have you ever played with emotions? If there is, I will run [eat melon] now. After all, catching up on updates is quite tiring!

Why doesn't anyone see it? It's beautiful.

The writing is quite good, but I want to know how many chapters it will take to reach adulthood. I am still 12 years old now.

I don't understand rap, and I don't care about entertainment. I read it as a popular science novel. In addition to reading the article, I also need to read the comments, otherwise I won't understand it. Very well written. I hope that after reading this book, I will understand a little bit about rap.

It's very interesting. I can tell that the author has done a lot of research, but the pace is a bit slow.

It's a pretty good read. I read it in one sitting. Good luck to the author.