Transmigrate into a Book in the Apocalypse: The Wicked Stepmom Doesn't Want to Redeem Herself

Tied. The writing is pretty good, but... 1. The heroine is very likable. Although she looks like a dodder flower on the surface, who says that dodder flowers must be worthless? The dodder flower is the best at praying mantises catching cicadas. The oriole behind them is also very good at it, right? The heroine is a succubus, the most beautiful in the world, and she likes big beauties very much! Moreover, she is just a dodder flower on the surface. In reality, she is very complex and charming at the same time. I feel that her life experience before time travel must also be very bumpy. She seems to have biological parents in this world, the middle-aged couple in the latest photos. And the man named Chu should be the culprit of the fire. I don't know if the heroine has been confirmed, but if she has biological parents, will there be more burdens or weaknesses? After all, everyone in the team has special powers. The male protagonist is powerful and can take care of the female protagonist, but more cannot be protected, and the female protagonist cannot protect herself. 2. The male protagonist is clean both physically and mentally, and is a loyal dog who dotes on the female protagonist without any brains. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very ambiguous and touching. Because in 1v1, Xiao must be the male partner, and the love will be wrong, haha. However, the male characters who appear are all excellent, and the villain is also very popular. So far this book is good to read, at least to my taste. The male protagonist is noble and dotes on the female protagonist. The heroine is super beautiful. She looks like a dodder on the outside, but she is very charming on the inside. I like her. Of course, there are some small shortcomings, but it may be more due to the setting. 1. The male protagonist is the original male protagonist. The female protagonist is restricted by the attack of world consciousness and cannot be too free. The female protagonist is threatened with death. 2. The consciousness of the world has raised another pair of protagonists with a halo. Once they come to power, the heroine will still seduce. Annoying sense of the world. 3. The original heroine is a bit annoying. Although she is not a sinister villain, she has a strong dislike for the heroine because of her rebirth and past life memories. However, the hero and the rest of the team are very good to the heroine. The hero also unconditionally supports the heroine and protects the heroine. She has not done anything to clearly hurt the heroine so far, so it is okay. (It seems that because of anger or something, she didn't even eat the delicious hot pot, haha) Then because the heroine had superpowers, she thought she was reborn in a parallel world instead of the original world, haha.

Very good-looking, the heroine is beautiful and ruthless, and she takes action when it's time to take action. The male protagonist slightly complained about his straight body in the early stage, but continued to dote on her in the later stage. The system is also very good, the female protagonist is absolutely in control, and the author's writing is also good. It is worth reading.

I like the heroine, but I'm not a fan of love at all, but the hero is a fan of love👀. The writing style is more comedy, and the original heroine is also interesting. Hahahaha, she didn't do anything bad. I don't think it's a bad thing. It's very interesting so far☺☺

I like it very much, it looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I hope it can be changed to have multiple male protagonists in the future.

After reading part of it, I found that this book is really suitable for writing NPCs. After reading the introduction, it turned out to be 1v1 [grievance]

It's beautiful. This article is really suitable for many male protagonists. They all fall in love [admiration]

The very good-looking heroine will not be wronged

In the early stage, the rhythm is very good. In Chapter 28, the heroine Zhou Zhengrong was a little surprised, and in Chapter 32, she explained that she should repay the kindness of saving her life. The cause, process and result should not exceed three chapters. I will check if there are any unreasonable changes in the follow-up. If there are any, I will come back and give the score again. The connection between the characters and the plot is very good, but there is too little foreshadowing, too little emotional foreshadowing, and there is less of the kind of emotional foreshadowing that should be there. Chapter 47 It's a bit baffling. With the supplies and space the hero and heroine have, there is no need for them to do tasks to get points and then use points to exchange for things (if it is weapons, I can understand, but as mentioned before, it's just a bunch of food, supplies and some medicines). These two people appear here inexplicably, and then inexplicably accompany others to do tasks, as if they are just showing off for the sake of showing off. Before this, there was no foreshadowing before Chapter 47. Okay, author, I know it's because I was emotionally drained while writing it, because you did too little foreshadowing for this plot. Basically, the causes and consequences are just mentioned in one stroke.

It's so beautiful, the heroine is soft-spoken, and the hero is also very loyal. I hope there won't be any female competition in the future, and the author will update it soon. Not enough at all

It's quite good-looking, but it's different from what I expected when I read the introduction, hahahahaha, but it's still very good-looking. I hope the male protagonist will be jealous of Shura Changduoduo🥺🥺Looking forward to it