Dragon Clan************

Don't worry, dear readers. I'm trying to get out of the dark room. It's best to go to a bookshelf or follow me [crying]

Author, Lu Xia is right. She is a super popular heroine of the Dragon Clan fandom in Qidian. I feel so happy every time I watch this [like][like][like][like]

After reading it for a while, it was quite interesting, but I think there are some areas that need to be improved. The author probably had his own outline and envisioned some fragments, and then pieced them together to write this novel, but the layout is so messy. If you haven't seen Dragons, the author will be very confused. The author is too focused on writing about those environments, which leads to a lack of inner description of the souls of Dragons, so I always feel that something is missing. The author's imagination is very good, but the plot arrangement should be clearer. Let me give you a small example. For example, the good-for-nothing brother suddenly pulled Lu Mingfei for special training. Special training is just special training. Later, Lu Mingfei directly recognized Fingel as Mr. KFC. The author may have his own considerations, but it is indeed very abrupt. And that aunt called Lu Mingfei a wild child because he ran away. To be honest, the incident was a little too minor and too sudden. I understand that the author wanted Lu Mingfei to be stunned, but the time could be extended a little longer and some small frictions should be included. Lu Mingfei has been declining for too long. It is not possible to encourage growth. Also, the love lines are a little rushed. Why is Xia Mi suddenly so good to Lu Mingfei? Why does Mai Enxi like Lu Mingfei? I guess the author has considered their backgrounds, but it is a challenge to add his own original love lines while promoting the main plot. In the end, it was my own selfishness. Didn't Lu Mingfei say later that he would go to see Teacher Xiami after the special training? Why did he jump directly to the appointment with Old Tang? I hope the author can treat Teacher Xiami well [laughs] The author's writing is really good. It doesn't matter if there are some minor flaws. It would be better if the author could correct it.

The author writes very interestingly, it really gives a different feeling

🍅Medium level, Lao Lu's character is weird, and the beginning of Xia Mi and Lao Lu's love is not that good, but it's still watchable.

I also saw the latest chapter. It is well written. The author's writing style is very good. The most important thing is that he is active. Almost every comment gets more likes and he respects the readers' ideas. Finally, it's great that there are multiple female protagonists, as well as Lu Xia and Lu Nuo, who are rare in Tomato (I see less of them in Tomato anyway)

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Five stars, this book is very good

The novel is very well written, not as nonsensical as other novels. I look forward to updating it.

Lunuo 99, Sinuoquan

What's good-looking is just not enough [laughing evilly]

Only now did I realize there was no rating [face covering]

I feel like there are too many descriptions, and I feel a bit tired of aesthetics.

It looks good. I wonder if Secretary Yi will be accepted later.

It must be given a five-star rating. It was so enjoyable to watch. Hurry up and become popular! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

I haven't clicked [like] yet, but some details still need to be worked out [eating melon]

How shameless, how shameless Please update the chapter. Wattasi can do anything [cry][cry][cry]

The logic is smooth, the writing is good, and the emotions are on point. It looks good, I love reading it, and the author will update it soon

Come on, can the author strengthen Lu Mingfei [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Yes, Lu Mingfei is really like the original work. I highly recommend reading it.