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Two male protagonists + hunting + making money + pampering husband
Purely sweet article! Purely sweet article! ! Purely sweet article! ! ! Two people have three meals a day and grow beans under the southern mountain! ! !
Li Zhendong once traveled to an imaginary dynasty with a brother. Let's see how Li Zhendong made a fortune and married his beloved brother in ancient times.
Zhang Chenyue, a little brother who has lived at the foot of Qingyang Mountain for generations, went to the Orion village where his parents died. From then on, he and his good brother made money to support the family, and lived a sweet life of being doted on by their parents and father-in-law!
I'm a newbie writing, so please be merciful to the sisters who rate me! ! !
Reader comments
I thought that the carefully polished story would be seen, but I didn't expect that the data was all over the street, and there was a full sense of disparity. When I looked back, I realized that the pace was slow, the characters were not vivid enough, and it failed to capture the reader's emotions. Although I have regrets, I have recognized the shortcomings of the novice. This article is both a starting point and a lesson. Pick yourself up and continue polishing, and you will definitely write better next time.
Good
It's pretty, simple and bland, nothing fancy.
Very pretty,
I thought that the carefully polished story would be seen, but I didn't expect that the data was all over the street, and there was a full sense of disparity. When I looked back, I realized that the pace was slow, the characters were not vivid enough, and it failed to capture the reader's emotions. Although I have regrets, I have recognized the shortcomings of the novice. This article is both a starting point and a lesson. Pick yourself up and continue polishing, and you will definitely write better next time.
Good
It's pretty, simple and bland, nothing fancy. Very pretty,
Very well written! Come on😊
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [blowing kiss]