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The writing is very good, but I just feel a little tight in my chest for some reason. The author's description of the protagonist is very good, and there is a little bit of redemption, but it doesn't feel right to say so, but the writing is still quite good.

It's really beautiful, the writing is very good, the character of the protagonist is perfect, and the plot is also very good. I hope it is a sweet article. Come on, the author. I hope you can finish the article. I love you, the author😘

I hope the protagonist can suffer less injuries. I feel really sad [almost crying]

It's very beautiful, and the interaction with Gin is very sweet.

It's very interesting, but Father Tiandao won't really die in the end. That would be a pity. Five stars for the protagonist, minus one star for the author who temporarily changed to have CP [I almost cried] The protagonist's personality is very suitable for being single. I feel that the new chapters are a bit OOC, but if you really want to change it to a cp, you need to change the previous ones. The emotional drama is too abrupt.

The writing is really great, the writing style is logical, the protagonist's life and background, the plot connection is very good, the emotional expression is also great, the logic is clear, not a brainless text, it is really super good-looking! ! ! The emotions are also very delicate, the protagonist's words and deeds are very appropriate, and the world background is also well written! ! ! This is a type of Mingke fanfic that I have never seen before. Big boost to the author! ! ! !

Help, this article really suits my taste. First of all, the author loves his characters, and secondly, it's so cool to be beautiful, strong, and miserable! The protagonist really has a sense of peaceful death (but there is also a little sense of brokenness). The author's writing style is also very delicate, and he does not deliberately ignore any character.

It's very interesting to watch, and the protagonist's personality is also rare. It's a very comfortable feeling. I like it! Come on, I will keep up with the updates!

It's super nice [Adoration] The description of the protagonist is very detailed and the content is wonderful [Blowing Kiss] The main character is a bit miserable [I'm about to cry] The author needs to keep updating [Love]

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Can the injury on the protagonist's back be cured? If it's hurt like this, it hurts, but it just doesn't look good. Our protagonist wants to be beautiful. It goes so well with gin, and the rice is delicious.

Although the name is bad, I still plan to read it and read it. , The protagonist and emotional shaping are so good and delicate. ,, This is the first time I have seen such a detailed portrayal of the past of a protagonist who is in a time-travel situation. When I read it, I felt that the author had brought a living Alo to life...

It's very beautiful, the setting of the protagonist is very good

Very nice, I don't know why the rating is so low

Very beautiful, one of the most beautiful I have ever seen

I don't know why, but I feel a little uncomfortable watching it recently. I feel so sorry for A Luo, I feel sorry for him, why no one feels sorry for him, I feel sad for him, I really feel sorry for him

Looks good, unexpectedly good-looking

Come on, I believe you can do it!

Where has Zhu Fu Jingguang gone [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], he has been missing for a long time, it doesn't take that long to visit relatives and friends! I am very much looking forward to the follow-up and please give me more updates, otherwise I may forget this article. With my progress of reading two or three articles a day, I really may forget it.

It's very beautiful. I really like this setting. I'm looking forward to the moment when Luo Xun loses his horse.

Woohoo, I love this setting so much... I love it so much!

Full marks! ! ! Baby Luo Xun is so cute, he must be safe and happy! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The more you read, the better it gets 👍And there are already more than 120 chapters, so feel free to dive in. The protagonist has a cool and transparent personality, he is considerate, the description is delicate, and the plot is smooth and natural. Top grade [admiration] [admiration]

It's really beautiful! ! ! (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

Great book, nice to read

Really very beautiful🫰👋

When will the protagonist's injury heal?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I think it's pretty good-looking, but I don't know why the rating is a bit low.

The writing is very good, I like this type/pace of books.