Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from Orion and Becoming a Saint

It's really interesting that a book with many characters and many blessings has written a complete world of martial arts without being systematic. The author's description ability is very good. A low-level third-level martial artist's fights are so majestic and majestic that it makes people envious. This is very amazing! This already exceeds 80% of martial arts novels! It's exciting to watch and exciting to watch! Personally like it very much! I have read more than 300 chapters, and the big problem is still exciting without fighting, but many details cannot be scrutinized. If it were not for the author's deliberate safety, basically all the protagonist's family and wives would be dead. The protagonist is very domineering and encounters the old six enemies. The family would have been finished long ago, and the system of many children and many blessings will be finished. There is indeed a reason for the low rating of this book!

Give it five stars. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The villain is a stereotype, and the arrogance of the same model is at odds with the protagonist; the plot development is slow, but I have seen better ones, which is not bad; the protagonist's halo is that he often saves people at critical moments or always rebels against the enemy. This is not a big problem, and it is better than the protagonist being defeated. The advantages are that the protagonist develops quickly enough, his combat power is good enough, and he can kill enemies across borders; there are multiple heroines, the protagonist has a clean harem, and the heroine is isolated from the crisis. Only the protagonist is facing the crisis, and there is no need to worry about the heroine and the heroine will not make big moves. I think it is a good writing technique to occasionally add emotional daily polish; there is no cuckold giving away the girl, and there is no big poisonous and disgusting person. This is really a plus point after reading too many books. There is also a somewhat fatal flaw, which is that there is always someone outside the world. No matter how strong or talented the protagonist is, there is always someone stronger and more talented than him. It is also repeatedly emphasized that there are people who are more evil than the protagonist. This is more fatal and makes the feeling less satisfying. It's okay to be better than the protagonist, but having more talent than the protagonist's cheating is outrageous. No matter how fast the protagonist is promoted, there will always be someone who is promoted just as fast. The protagonist cheated and was promoted to Level 7 Grandmaster, and the Dark Man of the Blood Lotus Sect also advanced to Level 7. Has Level 7 become a cabbage? In general, foundation can be improved, if you want to, you can improve it. No matter what realm the protagonist ascends to, that realm becomes nothing but cabbage, which is really unpleasant.

That's great, writing a book is not easy. I haven't used the system's functions from beginning to end. I only have one wife and have many children. I don't know what to say.

It's good to see. I see that the comment section has been criticizing the protagonist's slow leveling up. He only has one wife after nearly 100 chapters... I think the main problem is the label "many children, many blessings". In fact, the content is really okay. You can treat him as a legend. From a general fantasy point of view, Golden Finger is also a system that adds points, but it mainly relies on "fate points". Multiple female protagonists can only be considered a bonus (for those who like multiple female protagonists, it is also considered as food and grass, and each female protagonist is not embarrassed, and there are also emotional scenes). I think the control of the protagonist's combat power is okay. It's actually okay to upgrade to the fifth level in the 400th chapter. It should be upgraded and the plot needs to be suppressed, which can be regarded as interesting. By analogy with those who cultivate immortality, there are many who reach the foundation after two or three hundred chapters. I hope everyone can treat it rationally. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, so try not to give bad reviews... Sometimes most authors write purely out of love. As long as they are not intentionally disgusting, just change the book if you think it is toxic. There is no need to use bad words. To sum up: this book is still worth reading (I only published it after reading the latest 400 chapters) Come on, author!

No problem, basically no poison, high quality, smooth

It looks okay, but the main character gets slapped in the face wherever he goes. He has a body that attracts hatred. Half of the trouble is caused by women. I have read 300 chapters, and it has only been a few months since I traveled through time. I have collected three of the five women, and the system panel is always showing numbers for each chapter.

I've seen Chapter 302. The protagonist Zhou Xuan only has one pregnant child. How can he have many children and many blessings😳. The system basically relies on acquiring fate points by absorbing antiques to increase combat power. It is currently only the 3rd level and there are 9 levels in total. There is basically no need for a wife [laughing]

It's very nice, but I suggest changing the title to [][][][]

Not bad, give it a five-star review!

It's pretty good. The balance between the emotional line and the plot is quite good. But I feel that in the back, it's basically relying on antiques to improve. Maybe there's something special about giving birth to a child. Otherwise, the positions of these heroines are a bit awkward. Anyway, it's worth watching.

If modern people travel to the past and have space. The easiest way to upgrade your force is the crossbow. Create countless powerful crossbows and place them in the space. Take it out and use it anytime. Not used here. I feel like basic hunting knowledge is still lacking.

The writing is quite good, but the system does not provide exercises, which is a bit confusing... Not fun enough. It was okay in the early stage, but it was a bit overwhelming in the later stage. I haven't broken through the fourth level in more than 7,000 pages... There are a bunch of useless techniques, and martial arts is not about cultivating immortals. It shouldn't be that easy to reach a high level from a low level.

The book is not bad, but the updates are a bit slow, but the plot is still okay.

Rigorous logic, touching plot, and wonderful story

260 Photos have been taken, but the protagonist's wife is not pregnant yet. How does this mean having many children and blessings?

It's really good, why don't you write it quickly?

It is said that he is having children and marrying a wife. The male protagonist has been leveling up and fighting monsters. Now I have seven wives. Two months pregnant and yet to give birth. Hurry up and write

Looks good

After you become famous, you can hold an appreciation party. At Level 5, many people will definitely come to give you things to appreciate.

Just one data that is relatively rigorous is worthy of a high score.

The novel is okay! The opponents the male protagonist encounters are always weaker than him or one level higher than him, waiting to be killed by the protagonist, and it is impossible to be chased.

It is already considered a fine product in this genre. Don't know why the score is so low.

It's okay, not too poisonous, just a little bit poisonous. You can watch it, but you have to throw away your brain.

Give a five-star rating and let the author work harder

Great, great, great, great, great!

The novel is very good, give the author a thumbs up [like]

This story is told very well👍The story could be stronger

The writing is good, the structure is rigorous, and the plot is reasonable. It is much better than many bad books. It is worth reading!

It's tied. This book is beautiful and the author's writing is good. It's worth at least 8.5 Points.

The front of Chapter 283 looks pretty good, moving forward steadily, and the enemies within the contact range will not be too strong. After Chapter 283, the combat power increases too slowly, and suddenly the surrounding enemies become too powerful, suppressing the combat power.