Sister, My Child Bride

So beautiful, as expected of me It's so well written [laughs]

A brief analysis: ① First of all, the background of this book is very novel. Anyone who has read other yandere novels will know that many yandere novels are either oriental fantasy, a magical world, a peaceful city, or a fan derivative. The first part of this book is set in the war years, and the second part is the turbulent period after the war. Compared with other Secondly, this book's language is very beautiful, whether it is constructing characters, rendering atmosphere, describing the environment, or expressing the mood of the characters. For example, "She stepped on the pages of the book, grinding them down, as if she could crush the truths that made him unfamiliar, and crush back the truth that would chase after her and shout "Sister's" child." ③ He describes the process of his sister's gradual transformation into a spoiled child in detail, and the protagonist's response to this process and other aspects are very logical. It is not a mindless and enjoyable book. ④ The number of enjoyable points is reasonable. It is the kind of book that can make you feel very comfortable but will not make you feel addicted. It is suitable for those who have lost their minds. I suggest you create more other characters. Of course, after all, this is a yandere novel about two people. In fact, it doesn't matter how many other characters you have, it just makes the content more three-dimensional. After reading the review, I found that the early stage was okay, the middle stage became a god, and the later stage was worse than shit. The writing was very good but the content was too little. At the end of the later stage, I really skipped reading to finish it. In fact, I can understand it. After all, the author's protagonist is engaged in science and technology, and it is difficult for ordinary people to write scientific articles without decent academic skills. In fact, The biggest highlight of this kind of yandere novel is the love and affection, but the way this novel attracts readers is very single. By the time the reader reaches the end, no matter how good your writing style is, you will already be a little tired of it, so in the end, the author must write better content at the end. I look forward to the author's next book.

It's really beautiful. These few pictures are so depressing. I feel so uncomfortable when I read them. I would like to write more about sweetness. Life is already very bitter. I don't want to read a novel that is so bitter [cry][cry][cry][cry] Don't abuse the heroine. I want to see the two of them sweetly together [cry][cry][cry]

If you want your book to get higher ratings and get more updates, write more interactions with the heroine. Especially sweet. Why do readers come to read your novel? Don't stray from the original topic. Don't keep writing about those knives, and you don't have many chapters now. There is very little sweetness. How can readers have the patience to read your book? You write something sweet first. I'll write more about it later in the chapters. In this way, your book will easily get high scores. Your writing is good. With this kind of operation method. It got a score of 8 points. A 9.0 Rating isn't a problem either. (My sincere evaluation.) The male protagonist should be responsible. If you want to love, just love, that kind of pure love, don't worry about that or this. In reality, there is rarely this kind of "sister", someone who loves you wholeheartedly and is not satisfied yet. Change the character of the male protagonist and stop being so stubborn. How many years have the male protagonist and the female protagonist been in a relationship? Still written like this. Can you please make it a little sweet so as not to make the heroine sad? I'm really convinced. Is the male protagonist a bitch? Let's change him. 1

I feel like I'm going crazy, watch it now, brothers, it's a bit sci-fi, but not too bad, the writing is pretty good, and the details are spot on. Whether the author is a transfer from the emperor's uncle is a bit manipulated by the author. I'm quite disgusted with orthopedics and some ethical issues, but the author writes that they are very dependent on each other. Although it is not scientific for siblings to grow up like this, it is not scientific to go from the background of World War II to modern times. I feel that there is a foreshadowing. The next step may be that the elder sister controls the younger brother, maybe using some conspiracy? But readers may be part of the play [almost crying] [almost crying]

There is nothing mean about war. No matter how shameful the behavior, only victory is everything. If the highest honor is given to the living, then what should be used to express respect and condolences to the dead? No matter how heroic a person dies, a dead person can never protect others. It was not the kind of death performed in operas, nor was it like the heroine who would sing very poignantly after being stabbed, spin twice, and die little by little in the arms of her beloved hero, with flower petals scattered around her, or the romantic way in which the hero sheds tears and sings to herself while dying. This world was beyond her imagination. She originally thought death would be complicated, but this desert told her that death was actually very simple. Hunger, thirst, fatigue, and then death. There are no petals, no tears, no gorgeous background, and no moving music and singing. It's that simple. For this world, no matter you are a princess or a beggar, no matter you are a hero or a villain, in that round of fire sun and the endless desert, all lives are the same. Live or die.

It looks good so far, but the author should be careful not to get banned [laughing evilly] The last two parts are a bit harsh [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Update soon [smile]

To be honest, it's a bit cruel and the writing is pretty good. If you can accept the torture first and then the sweetness, then read on [eating melon]

If you give 500,000 words, you will get 99% of the master certification. If you do what you say, does the author have a fan base? [Thinking]

The interlocking plots make people want to stop. Under the grand background of war, yandere is no longer a label, but a living soul born of the game between war and human nature. If you are obsessed with the ultimate pull of yandere literature and are eager to taste twisted yet pure love in a thick background, this book is definitely a treasure! An immersive experience of the beauty and madness of soul distortion. After reading it, I can only express my admiration. I look forward to the author continuing to write more amazing and stunning yandere chapters [laughs]

The young love between a man and a woman is shackles of the world, one takes the initiative and the other retreats. Chikan, by the way, I want to see the education and training.

It's really beautiful and the feelings are sincere. It makes people fantasize. It would be great if a girl like Lin Wan fell in love with me in reality. This character of the male protagonist makes me want to vomit.

Good-looking, orthopedics is good-looking [smiles] No rebuttal accepted Not orthopedics, not orthopedics, definitely not orthopedics

Lin An will be a great person when he grows up. I think he should not be bound by love.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure Huang Qiu [making faces] [shy] [shy]

It's really beautiful, the details are well handled, the characters' psychological changes and emotional expressions are also written very naturally, especially the ambivalence of the male protagonist is well described, and the progress of the plot does not happen overnight. Although the pace is slower, I hope the author can grasp the subsequent plot. After all, it is equivalent to an important node. If the writing is not strong enough, it is easy to get angry [Please update] [Please update] The world view and story background are not clearly explained. Although the main purpose is to write romance, it cannot be ignored.

It's very interesting. The heroine is deeply in love with the hero. She only has him in her heart, but the hero has many things in his heart [laughs]

I haven't seen such a bold author in a long time.

Author, I originally thought you would reach 200 yards, but you are still patient. This is good. My evaluation is: he is a character.

Not a child bride but a child bride [laughter]

The small workshop cuts too much, so if I don't talk about today's tomatoes, let's just stop here [smile] [shy]

I have a habit of immersing myself in a carefully drawn story, which allows me to escape from the real world. I'm tired of reading a piece of history too seriously and ending it every time with a suffocating pain.

Overall, it's very good. I like it very much. I hope there won't be any bad plot.

Love it, very engaging, I also like this kind of plot, the writing is also good I wish Lin Nianan peace and health, and my parents will never need electric shocks again [laughing][laughing][laughing] Come on, author [Like][Like][Like]

Ahhhhhh, author, can't you hurry up and get the two of you together? It's too slow, and I want to see the story of the younger brother acting coquettishly towards his older sister.

It looks good, the author does a good job of writing it, but do you want to give it a low score? [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] I don't want such a good book to be gone, and I will have no place to cry [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

The front part is really great, but in the back part, the male protagonist is really frustrated. This is the only book I like. The ending is be. The ending of be is that Lin Wan marries someone else and the male protagonist just watches or dies [face covering]

When did my sister become a yandere?

Needless to say, this book is like a lemon candy. It may be a bit sour when you first read it, but it will become sweeter if you taste it carefully.

The rating was deliberately lowered. The writing is great, the plot is good, and the concentration of yandere is very high. The rating is not worthy of the writing [Adoration]