Please read the introduction.
Disclaimer: The main protagonist Su Zhe is gay + the group portrait of multiple protagonists does not fixate on one person + is not invincible + some childish themes are discussed.
If you can accept my shortcomings as a novice writer, then you are welcome to experience the world I build with me.
Introduction: A strange comet passed by, and everything in the world was different.
Mystery began to revive, monks, wizards, warriors, supernatural powers, and paladins began to appear on this land. Countless heroes and crimes emerged on the Blue Star, and human-like stars had a shining moment.
Su Zhe is an ordinary college student. After awakening his superhuman powers, he dreams of saving the world. After experiencing backstabbing by his friends, blaming villains, public opinion storms, and the loss of his loved one, Su Zhe predictably collapses.
The good news is that Su Zhe has fallen. The world has lost a disgusting virgin bitch. The villains can finally happily destroy the world without being judged on the moral high ground.
The bad news is that Su Zhe has become a native of the motherland.
Reader comments
The protagonist is the same, in the second half of Chapter 18
The plot and writing are good, and it is a slow-paced book. The protagonist wants to be bad for certain reasons, but is not bad enough. He has a certain amount of kindness, but looks like an ordinary person, but the protagonist has certain strength and looks invincible ( Everyone knows Superman's abilities), but he is actually one of the invincibles. He has brains but not much (like a normal person, but feels a little inadequate when facing his enemies, just like DC Superman). Recently, he has been chasing and killing people who are more decisive, so reading this kind of article is a bit frustrating. For example, if you can't beat that sword master, why not threaten his family? (The protagonist is currently a lone wolf and can save his life in front of the Juggernaut) As long as the Juggernaut does not intervene, he will directly destroy those who changed the protagonist (no evidence is needed, just find something in common, for example, they are all human beings) [laugh][laugh][laugh]
The development of the story is driven by one main line driving multiple auxiliary lines. Here the author starts writing with a world that has been developed for a certain period of time. It has a good linking effect. There must be pitfalls in the development of multiple story lines. There is no conflict in the development of the story yet. It shows that the writing style can mobilize emotions, which shows that the author's writing style is very strong, and there is a shadow of the fairy king in it. The development of the plot is very good. Nowadays, there are fewer people because there are fewer words. If there are more updates, people will slowly find them, and eventually there will be like-minded people.
Come on, author! [Laughing]
Are there any articles of the same type? Recommend [Chigua]
It has a very comic feel, and I feel like it can be changed into a comic.
It's beautiful, the group portraits are well written
Good book, good book, a collection of superhero themes
Very good, just a little short
Infinite resurrection with retained levels is still too bad
It's well written, but the protagonist's role is a bit small
This is what I wanted to write about, but what he wrote was so good
It's very good. It feels well controlled. I want to keep watching it. I didn't feel too boring in the middle.
It's very interesting, the logic is rigorous, and the storyline is well advanced. It's not like Tomato's work. Come on, even if this book doesn't work, it will succeed sooner or later depending on the author's ability.
The protagonist is the same, in the second half of Chapter 18
The plot and writing are good, and it is a slow-paced book. The protagonist wants to be bad for certain reasons, but is not bad enough. He has a certain amount of kindness, but looks like an ordinary person, but the protagonist has certain strength and looks invincible ( Everyone knows Superman's abilities), but he is actually one of the invincibles. He has brains but not much (like a normal person, but feels a little inadequate when facing his enemies, just like DC Superman). Recently, he has been chasing and killing people who are more decisive, so reading this kind of article is a bit frustrating. For example, if you can't beat that sword master, why not threaten his family? (The protagonist is currently a lone wolf and can save his life in front of the Juggernaut) As long as the Juggernaut does not intervene, he will directly destroy those who changed the protagonist (no evidence is needed, just find something in common, for example, they are all human beings) [laugh][laugh][laugh]
The development of the story is driven by one main line driving multiple auxiliary lines. Here the author starts writing with a world that has been developed for a certain period of time. It has a good linking effect. There must be pitfalls in the development of multiple story lines. There is no conflict in the development of the story yet. It shows that the writing style can mobilize emotions, which shows that the author's writing style is very strong, and there is a shadow of the fairy king in it. The development of the plot is very good. Nowadays, there are fewer people because there are fewer words. If there are more updates, people will slowly find them, and eventually there will be like-minded people. Come on, author! [Laughing]
Are there any articles of the same type? Recommend [Chigua]
It has a very comic feel, and I feel like it can be changed into a comic.
It's beautiful, the group portraits are well written
Good book, good book, a collection of superhero themes
Very good, just a little short
Infinite resurrection with retained levels is still too bad
It's well written, but the protagonist's role is a bit small
This is what I wanted to write about, but what he wrote was so good
It's very good. It feels well controlled. I want to keep watching it. I didn't feel too boring in the middle.
It's very interesting, the logic is rigorous, and the storyline is well advanced. It's not like Tomato's work. Come on, even if this book doesn't work, it will succeed sooner or later depending on the author's ability.