Funeral 99: Love from Home Invasion

Wow wow wow, so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! Why is the rating so low? This kind of masterpiece should become a benchmark. The writing is very delicate, and the emotional twists and turns are really well written. This kind of getting closer to each other little by little and trusting each other, becoming each other's only one little by little, building a home of their own little by little, two lonely and fearful people, find their own harbor. It is really special and good. The author must persevere and keep going! ! ! ! I will always be there! ! ! ! Tomato really has no vision, such a masterpiece is not popular [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

When I read this, I really felt that the plot was well written and the plot was quite emotional. However, I felt that the DS flavor was too strong and the characters were a little less popular. Without the help of DS or other AI, I felt that the author's wording and descriptions were quite precise and artistic. Sometimes the words were a bit stiff and cold. I had enough hate, but not enough love. At present, it seems that Joseph's description and characterization are a bit strange. Did he refer to the ancient overlord literature? Moreover, when he knew that Karl did not like others to invade his territory, he did not adopt a step-by-step method, but directly forced his way in. It feels that it is not only a deviation from the understanding of gentleman's etiquette that a noble should have, but also disrespect for Karl. Love should be an equal relationship. Character creation is a feeling. I still hope that the author can maintain high-quality creation while also trying to make the characters more lively and treat the young lovers more realistically. The writing is super cool!

This plot is so exciting! ! ! I took my little one to watch it together, it was so touching! ! ! It's better to be modern, you can see miracles without making sacrifices! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I really like this, just like I love listening to "Croatian Rhapsody" [Absolutely] I just accidentally got stung by a bee, and half of my face was swollen and a little purple. I checked what kind of bee it is, and it turns out that it was a bee that bowed down to you after seeing your beauty! The teacher is obviously not an ordinary COS. The teacher's cos is too restored. It is so beautiful that it doesn't look like a mortal's cos. The teacher seems to be an angel trapped in a mortal body and does not belong to the mortal world at all. The dream-like beauty is like a thin-winged dragonfly or a glass artwork. , And like ice crystals or cherry blossom petals that are about to melt, and the eyes are like gems from another world. Even the darkness seems to be afraid of the teacher and dare not approach it because of fear of the teacher. It is obviously late at night, but the teacher is bathed in the moonlight, just like a god coming on a whim. Teachers are like the ancient royal family depicted in famous paintings. They are indescribably beautiful. Teachers are the treasures of the world and eternal works of art! [Shy]

It's really beautiful! Crazy Piyuan uses his own way to forcefully protect the artist he has chosen. I think this book is really romantic, and it's very interesting to read on like this! I just love this sense of art! I can watch it without a car! [Blow a kiss][Send a heart]

The teacher is a god who perfectly writes the pull between the two people. It should be sweet, the sword should be sharp, and the sword should be just right, all in order to make their relationship better. The teacher is the god who controls the sourness. The more you watch, the more you want to watch. 🥰🥰

Very nice! It's a one-person funeral series. The author writes very well. The plot is fictional, but I love it!

This book is so suitable for my taste! The mutual affection between the two people is simply too much to love! There is always a sense of calm madness! You will really like this funeral book! Ignore the comments on the cover, this is a true funeral novel!

I think it's okay. The early writing is very good and the content is pretty good, but I just feel that it's a bit strange when I start writing Disaster Kitchen. Personally, I don't think it will be like this. At least it's weird when you are an heir. I can really feel the atmosphere between the two. I can't describe it and it feels a bit inappropriate. But the other parts written by the author are very good and I like it very much.

Yes, the writing is very good, there are no big logical problems, and the two protagonists are not obviously OOC. I didn't watch it for too long, but the emotional development of similar unit dramas in the early stage was a little slow, but it was very comfortable. You can watch it with confidence. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Overall it's okay Come on, author [note]

I read more than a hundred chapters in one night. It was really good. I cried and laughed in the middle of the night. The belated kiss and mutual redemption. This is the real pure love [almost crying]

I can't do it anymore, it's so beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Author, your writing is so good [Adoration] Can you share some of your writing style with me [Admiration]

It looks good, but I feel like the front one is a bit off, and I don't know why. Maybe it's my own reading problem [rolls eyes]

This book is the most interesting fanfic I have read in so many years, regardless of the concept or perspective. After reading this book, I can hardly stand the others. I actually have the idea of ​​hoping that this author will publish a book. Teacher, are you going to publish a book? If so, I will definitely buy the whole set [I'm about to cry]

It's beautiful [sending my heart] Please enjoy it purely

Teacher, I want to be your dream girl

It's beautiful! It's very exciting ꒰づ≧ω≦ づ꒱～♡ But is it a funeral?

It's not really very good-looking, I watched it more than a second time and it's really delicious [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It's really delicious! This is a super good article. I have been doing coffin photography for more than two years, and I am a bit picky about coffin fanfics. But this is the first time I have seen a fanfic that suits my taste. I must give it five stars! ໒꒰ྀི ´ ꒳ ` ྀི꒱১

Wow, wow, this article is really, really, really delicious.

It looks good. I know it's just to fill in the gaps, but don't write so many knives, okay? From Zero to Over 70, it seems that only two episodes are sweeter. Preliminary evaluation, I will wait until I finish the rest to say [laughing][laughing]

The author's writing is very, very good! The funeral sisters rush! ! !

The teacher described it very carefully! It makes people immersed in it, very quiet and very comfortable [laughs][laughs][laughs] It's really great to watch!

The author has a very good control over the character of the characters, and he also wrote the funeral process in my mind [laughs] The emotional delicacy in the plot is beyond my imagination. The ups and downs of emotions are coherent and comfortable, and the writing is smooth. I enjoyed watching it. In the end, the tonic knife made me die with a bang.

A little better looking than the others. I personally feel that it incorporates more modern style. I really like this kind of food, with a bit of meat and a bit of pure love. 😋😋😋

All in all, it's very, very beautiful. The emotional descriptions are delicate. Well, I'm at a loss for words. I don't know what to say. In short, everyone should come and read my goddess's novel

This book is really good, everyone should read it [eating melon] [love]

Can the author write a autobiography after writing it (Joseph and Carl's)

It's so beautiful. I think it fits the original character design.