How Can I Break the Story of the Male Protagonist of Danman Becoming My Wife?

After watching it for a long time, the biggest feeling I felt was depression and a tightness in my chest. But it is good-looking and makes people want to understand the rest of the story and know what will happen next. When I started reading it, I just thought the introduction was good, so I read it casually. After reading one or two chapters, I found it was okay. Then when I wrote the book, I felt confused and felt a bit incomprehensible. I went back and read the introduction and the previous content. I read it several times. I should have read it several times. I just gave up on the article, and I was a little curious about what I would write next, so I continued reading it, and then I gradually understood it (self-feeling). Overall, I felt good, especially the character of the male protagonist is very good, I like it very much, but I felt that his life was very miserable. He was abused when he was a child, and then he suddenly slipped into the book when he was in college. He finally thought he had a mother, but it turned out to be a deception. Then, I tried to change the fate of the male protagonist in the book but found out that everything was in vain and useless. Everything would go according to the plot, which was heart-breaking and powerless. At that time, I really hoped that he would go back and stop caring about it. He was already a mess. It made me feel so bad for him. All in all, it's good to watch, I hope there will be more, I'm a little curious about what happens next, and the apocalypse mentioned in the introduction? My own feelings, I hope you don't criticize me, thank you!

The plot is quite good, the character setting is also good, and it is quite novel. [Laughs] However, there are too many descriptions of actions and metaphors, and the writing is too detailed. Overall, it seems lengthy and dragging, that is, there are too many leaves on the branches, the effect of the branches is not obvious, the main body is not highlighted enough, and it is scattered, and the white text is visual. [Exploration] It is better to cut the leaves and strengthen the branches to highlight the main body and the plot to be compact. [Thinking][thinking] Of course, the description of the long flowing water is quite good, and it would be even more likable if it was just right. [Shy] Great cheers, author, I look forward to your progress [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The love between two little bitter gourds, the abuse between them in the plot is the kind of pain that clutches people's chests, hidden under the warmth of the two people getting along day and night. The first half of Aye's life was too bitter, and this experience made him who he is now. He has a strong sense of unworthiness, and he thinks that Shen Yu has a better choice, so once the outside world puts pressure on their relationship, and someone else hurts Shen Yu because of him, he will let go. For example: when Shen Yu took Jiang Ye to see Shen Yu's grandfather, the old man did not agree with their being together and was so angry that he hit Shen Yu with a cane. Jiang Ye's behavior at that time was like this: "He was not afraid, he was trembling with anger. He wanted to protect Shen Yu. He wanted to say, if you want to hit me, hit me. He wanted to say, Shen Yu, we should... Forget it, that is your only relative..." Including the hardships the two of them suffered when Shen Yu started his own business later, Jiang also believed that it was because of himself. Shen Yu had a falling out with his grandfather, and he believed that he was a drag on Shen Yu. But what I want to say is: Jiang Ye, you are not a drag on Shen Yu, you are the dazzling stroke that cannot be ignored in his perfect life picture. Some random thoughts? Finally, I wish the young couple a long life!

Having watched it before, the plot direction is still quite confusing. . This is the author's consistent style. . . As always, I want to spoil the story but I don't know where to start. Anyway, it's a pretty youthful pain literature. . . Xiaoye is really suffering. . . After suffering for a long time, I finally got happiness. . Although I don't know if that kind of happiness is fake. . . It shouldn't count, because Xiaoye really felt happy. . . It feels like Xiaoya died more than once in this article. . After the last resurrection, I completely decided to put aside my past and focus on everything in front of me. . . And it's really cool that the ending is set at the end of the world. . It's that "there's no tomorrow, but we love each other" flavor that's right. . . But one thing is that when it comes to Shen's appearance, there is an indescribable air of a model worker, but Lao Shen is indeed very strong and doted on. . It made my left and right brain jump repeatedly. . . That post-wedding episode was so cute. . In short, if the writing style and plot can match the airwaves, it should be acceptable. .

The author's writing style is good, but I feel that some places are too detailed. It would be better if it was simplified and detailed. Let's love each other a little bit and attack each other a little bit. He is small and miserable, but he is strong and action-oriented. He is very decisive in making decisions when encountering problems. He deserves all the happiness he gets. There are many people who love him now. Shen Li is also miserable. The essence is that two miserable people comfort each other. I can accept this ending. Xiao Ye is too painful and entangled. What happened cannot be changed. Forgetting some unpleasant memories can make him live a happier life, which is good.

It's really good-looking. I think this world view is super new. I haven't seen anything of the same type, but I think the plot of the teacher is super good-looking. The fireworks in the cohabitation life are super strong. I really didn't expect the twist in the comic later. The teacher is so strong [Sending Hearts]

At present, I have finished reading the first volume. The author's writing is really good. The comic world and the real world are intertwined, but it is easy to understand. Mainly because I didn't quite understand the part about Chen Sumiang hiding the comic, and of course it might be foreshadowing. All in all, it's really nice.

In fact, I only watched the finale because I thought it would be very sad. The fact is, I never thought that a novel could be so touching. (T_T) Especially his diary, it is really well written in big letters. He could really feel the helplessness of being poor. The large descriptive text is also very beautiful, like two wet matches, neither one can warm the other. Yeah, it's really (.•́•̀.) I cried to death (つд⊂) I dare not read the previous content, I feel like I will be tortured to death. [Crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Well, it's still very good anyway. (*￣з￣)

I still have more to say. The good writing makes me spin. The good setting is a great treasure. [Sending my heart] I feel like I took a bite of a cake with glass shards and watched the smile gradually disappear. Does the author have any clues? (Scratches my head) Why is it so difficult for young lovers to get together? Wuwuwuwu [crying] [crying] [crying] Why is Xiaoye so miserable? Wuwuwuwu

It's beautiful👀The author's writing is good, and the storyline is also very goodฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ. After reading the final chapter😊I feel that the ending is a bit rushed. I always feel that they could have a better ending, but it is still very interesting and the characters are also good. It's very fragrant (≧ｗ≦), it's my favorite type (*ꆤ.̫ꆤ*) I'm really looking forward to the author's big extra story *͈ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈ෆ, I want to see the sweet couple's extra story ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧🥰

Overall, it was okay. Mengmeng was still a little confused about Gong'er and his boyfriend's most powerful partner, and the extra episode of eating fruit looked pretty to me. The author's writing is good, and the psychological description of the characters is very delicate, but some of the plots are confusing and difficult to understand, and the ending is too hasty, but I still give five stars for encouragement and hope to keep up the good work~

Jiang Ye, Shen Guanxue, Shen Yu

I will definitely give it a five-star review. It makes me feel depressed. Woo woo woo Obviously there is no great joy or sorrow, but it really makes my heart hurt. I really can't stand it anymore. I keep crying.

It's quite good. Compared to the author's other novels, the ending is very good. I want to read a sweet novel. I'm going to cry.

A very novel plot and very delicate writing style. I feel that the author has integrated all his emotions into the words.

So beautiful, I feel sorry for the two babies [almost crying]

No, what a great knife😭😭😭😭😭

It's so depressing. I feel like I won't watch it a second time.

Young lovers are so miserable, they must be 99🥺🥺

I feel so sorry for Ah Ye. Although I was obviously wronged, in the end I still chose to pretend to forget the unpleasantness and choose to be together [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

To be honest, you are the first author who can make me feel both sadistic and delicious.

Unique insights, I really want to chat with the author for an evening self-study

There are too many descriptions of the scene, but overall it's okay. If you're short of books, you can read it.

The front part is quite sour (referring to the part before the end of the world, currently only updated to this point), but it feels warm and healing inexplicably. The author's writing is very good, and I keep up with the updates every day [sending my heart]

The emotions are described very delicately and flow smoothly. The description of daily life is particularly warm and happy. The plot is rich. Why does it end so quickly? [I almost cry] Xiaoye and Ayu will become happier and happier. The extra is so sweet [love] [love] [love] [love] [almost crying]

I personally feel that this article is both cruel and sweet, so I recommend everyone to read it! It ended so quickly, but it was really beautiful! (●✿∀✿●)

The writing is very good and the plot is very delicate. After reading it, I felt a little sour in my heart. It was really hard for Xiaoye to go through this journey and he felt like a little bitter gourd.

Mainly attack ➕Apocalypse, just click on it and watch it, it is too thin, a annoying little elf, the author should not be tired, and must not be idle [Adoration] [Love] [Please update]

A nice short article, not too long and suitable for reading in your spare time. It's extremely delicious.

It's beautiful, Sister Qin. It's fascinating. There are several private settings one after the other. Anyway, it's just that it's very beautiful. I really hope he could update it quickly last night. Very friendly to us attack and control babies