Pirate************

Very good, very good idea It's pretty good too I read about twenty chapters earlier, It's good to be threatened; It's nice to be called around and drank from. In the first chapter, the author said it would get better when the sixth hero appeared. I jumped a little, chapter 66. Well, infighting is also good. It's good that Swain doesn't recognize summoners. Duan's response was also quite good. It's a pretty slow-burning book, but I can't read it anymore [laughs]

The author writes well, and the protagonist has recently grown up step by step from an ordinary person! Come on, keep it up! Let me give you a suggestion. The protagonists of the original One Piece began to develop after the War on the Top, and their mentality began to change drastically. In the later period, the Straw Hat protagonists became less and less funny, and the story became more and more in-depth. You can learn from the author. In the early stage, it is daily leisure. In the later stage, I hope to see the author's more and more profound influence and changes on the situation in the pirate world. When writing a book, you have to not be afraid of changing the plot, otherwise the protagonist would be in vain [laughing]!

In fact, the writing is really good. If you stick to it, you will have unexpected results. The only problem is that the tempo is slow and the summoning is slow. You can use artificial devil fruits to speed up the summoning tempo slightly. In fact, if you can really write, don't give up on yourself and your readers.

It's very good-looking, not too toxic, and the characters' personalities are quite consistent, and they're not mindless or invincible. The author has updated it a lot and it's very powerful, but you still have to pay attention to your health [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The setting is novel and unique, with many highlights. It's really likeable! It's beautiful, good luck to the author! !

It looks good, cheers, author

Get one for yourself, for no other reason than for yourself to work hard to update 10,000 words a day!

It's so damn beautifully written.

It feels good for the moment, but the protagonist's combat power needs to be strengthened. He is still an ordinary person, so don't be embarrassed if he is stunned by someone's overbearing look.

Read it slowly and give the author some advice. Try to give the protagonist a certain ability to protect himself. You can't rely entirely on the hero.

Not bad for casual pirate novels

It's been a long time since I've published such a good-looking pirate novel.

It's very interesting. The author should be more steady and don't write too badly.

I feel it's okay, I hope I can update 4-5 chapters a day like before.

Give it five stars. Tomato's books are so fast now that they are on the bookshelf. Hurry up and update them. It's best to update 20,000 times a day. I want to read Dragon King [Cool]

Not bad, plenty of food

The writing is very in line with my taste, and the slow pace is also very warm! Looking forward to the follow-up plot!

Not much to say. The author's update speed alone deserves five stars.

Good luck, when will a captain come?

This book is okay

Not bad, a pretty good fanfic When will there be someone who can suppress all the heroes?

Okay, keep writing!

It looks good and blends in well [laughs crookedly]

It's not a bad thing to only give 4 stars. The worse one is because I hope the author can stop being paced by them and slow down. The most important thing is to clarify his thoughts.

Why is the rating so low? Laman Laman [puckers] [pouts] [pouts] Five chapters a day. The author of Tentacle Monster, please have more powerful ones [Admiration] [Admiration]

Overall, it's good, but I still want to see it, Titan covers the sky with one hand, and strikes with destruction [laughter]

The content is very new, I have never seen this kind of content before. It's good to watch, I love to read it, more to come!

It's very interesting. The world of Pirates and the world of LOL are integrated, with flesh and blood, and it's really cool.

Was the latest chapter posted by mistake?