Urban + Comedy + Partial System + Steady Progression + Not a Wish-Fulfillment Story
Good news: Zhuang Yan transmigrated, and he has a System!
Bad news: He transmigrated into a background actor at a film studio in a parallel world. His cultivation is gone, and he's stuck with a permanent poker-face buff!
Even worse: The ridiculous System has a catch. Want your powers back? Sure! Go act! Play a corpse, an expendable extra, all kinds of wacky passersby! The more "earnest" your performance, the faster your reputation grows!
From then on, a moving iceberg became a fixture on the set:
Playing a bandit who "laughs himself to death"? His gaze is lifeless, his lips don't budge, as if he's been struck motionless.
Playing a supporting male character making a "heartfelt confession"? He recites romantic lines without changing expression, scaring the heroine into thinking she's dealing with an AI scammer.
Playing a passerby who "gets stepped on"? His whole body stays stiff, while his toes thrash wildly inside his shoes...
Zhuang Yan: "I once stood against a million troops with a single sword. And now I have to rely on a poker face to act in a passionate scene, just to earn lunch and build my reputation? This way of overcoming a tribulation is bizarre beyond belief!" He eats so many boxed lunches he feels sick, and takes so many slaps his face goes numb. When his eternally icy expression accidentally becomes the internet's most talked-about example of "gap moe," the real trouble has only just begun... What is this System, which forced him to become a background actor, really plotting? A hilarious chronicle of "steady progress" in showbiz, all sparked by a poker face, is about to begin! Click to discover an unexpected source of joy!
Um. . I don't want to comment after just reading a little bit, but does it go against the title and introduction from the beginning? I think this expression is quite rich, doesn't it look like facial paralysis? (The sly eyebrows and rat-like eyes, although many of them should be Xiao Jiujiu in my heart, but they are really dramatic, and I am embarrassed to see them.) And although there is a setting for superficial facial paralysis, there are very few descriptions of facial paralysis. Most of them are relatively rich expressions and psychological descriptions. It is really difficult to deepen the setting of the protagonist's actual facial paralysis. ("Everyone is drunk but I am alone" is really embarrassing to say. It is better to describe other people's feelings about the protagonist. It is really embarrassing to say it directly) Did you have a certain sexual relationship with the landlord at the beginning? And the character of the protagonist is too vulgar. . (Why do you include an AI-generated description? It feels like I wrote it before I had fully figured out what the protagonist would look like.) There is a bit too much nonsense in the first few chapters, which makes people less interested in reading, so it is considered a low-key. It took more than one chapter to write about the entanglement between the protagonist and Sister Liu, and to introduce Sister Liu's character and principles. It was too much, too long and vulgar. It's too slow to enter the main storyline. It feels like the protagonist just wants to work hard and overcome the tribulation on the surface, but in fact this is not the case (the facial paralysis attribute is causing trouble, but I feel that I haven't thought about the direction this attribute can take) The author's parenthetical content (PS) is a bit too much. It is really not recommended for novice writers to add too many voiceovers, as it will also create drama. There are too many descriptions, and it feels close to the word "water". It's a bit too much to describe one thing in three or four terms. Whether listening to a book or reading an article, it will make you feel tired. It is necessary to reduce it appropriately! (Also, there are too many repetitive plots in one incident, such as when the elder sister picks out people. The people being slapped are different but the purpose is the same. The people watching are tired and bored. I don't know if my laughing point is too high and I can't laugh.) (There is a lot of subjective content, but the impression is really just average. I don't rate it too low or too high. I can only say go for it.)